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The heart wants what it wants. Chapter 1
George: “Don’t talk about Leslie that way! She is a good loving vehicle, we understand eachother. Besides it’s only an ’87.” she said opening the trunk.
Tina: “Yeah that car always did suit you”
They climed in the car and headed to George’s apartment. They took the long way so George could show Tina all the cool places they could hang out. They finally reached the apartment and walked up to the door.
George: “Are you ready to see your new apartment?”
Tina: “More than ready, open the door I have to pee!” she said doing the infamous pee pee dance.
George opened the door and Tina wasted no time getting inside, she ran past George and franticly ran around looking for the bathroom.
George: “It’s the first door on the right!” she yelled laughing
Tina spun around and scurried towards the door.
George dragged in the suitcases and ploped down on the couch exausted. Moments later Tina came out of the bathroom and let out a sigh.
George: “Feel better?”
Tina: “Indeed”
George: “Fantastic, ready for the tour?” she asked pealing herself off the couch.
Tina: “Yes” she replied excitedly.
George: “Ok then. This is the living room/office, as you can see. That is what I like to call the breakfast bar. That little cubby hole over there is what we refer to as the dining room. That is the kitchen, as you can see I don’t really use it, it’s more like a decoration. You’ve already seen the bathroom.” she said as she walked down the hallway. “Over here is your room, and that’s my room” she said turning around.
Tina: “I love it”
George: “Are you lying?”
Tina: “No, really it’s great. Im really excited to be here”
Just as they were about to make their way back to the living room Tina heard a noise coming from George’s room.
Tina: “What was that?”
George: “What was what?” she said pretending not to hear anything.
Tina: “That!” she said hearing another noise.
George: “I donno, wind or something”
Tina: “Wind doesn’t sound like a drawer opening and closing. Is someone in there? You didn’t tell me you had a boyfriend!” she said mischeviously.
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(81 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
This is fantastic stuff, grammar my ass, your great. I cant wait to read more…
This story is so cool!!! Please continue!!!!!!!!
Wow..great start.. keep going I like this one
Didn’t take long to find Bette did it. Thanks great start.
Good start girl….loved it and do carry on…am a regular reader of pirate’s story and am so glad ur here too…Welcome..Welcome..Welcome..
i like your beginning. go on youre doing good!
Welcome……Great start……..Thanks for ‘giving it a whirl’……………Please keep going:)
hey, i’m really excited about this one. please update soon.
Awesome! looking forward to the next chapter…
Hi welcome and thanks for the first of many (I hope). I really enjoyed this chapter it’s a great start please keep going
The hell with the word cops…excellent job…love the subtle meeting of these two…nice job, please continue soon!
Great beginning. Please post soon … i’m waiting!
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Well this is great stuff. Please continue.
Great start the story is good and I really love it, please post soon. Thank you!