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The girl next door…..chapter 30
how did it go..
Tina was unhappy about Bette touching her tummy as it rumbled through the night so she turned over and removed Bettes hand from her scar.
TBC
Bette lay awake for a while thinking about how she and Tina were going and where they might be going. Soon she was asleep and woke as she felt Tina jumping up. The girls were crying as they were in a strange room and wanted their mum.
By the time Bette got to them Tina was in bed beside them and was ticking them both. She stood at the door watching and smiling. She loved to see Tina happy and the way she laughed made Bette smile from ear to ear. It was a sound that Bette would love to get used to in her home, their home if Tina was willing someday.
Emma: Bette, come in and tickle mum, she’s too big for us
Tina: less of the big, wee one..
Tina chucked a pillow at Bette and smacked her on the head
Bette: right..this time Kennards, you have had it..
Lucy: oh no her she comes mum, quick under the covers
The 3 Scottish ones hid from Ms USA.
Bette: 3 on one eh.typical of you wee nations,
Tina: oh here comes the brutal might of Ms America.
Everyone was laughing and Bette managed to pin Tina down. She straddled her and was holding her down by pinning her wrists. Bette sat just below her jammie waist band and pushed her down onto the bed. Bette looked at Tina and for a split second and saw a change in her facial expression. Bette looked away and laughed at the girls.
Bette: ive got her, wee ones, she doesnt stand a chance now
The girls: mum, you are about to be tickled to the max
Bette turned her head back to Tina and she could see that Tina had tears in her eyes. At first she thought that they were of laughter from being tickled. However after a few seconds.
Tina: Betteget off me..please
The girls: ha ha mum come on you can get her
Bette: yeah come on Shortbread.where is your Brave heart now?
Tina: (tears spilling from her eyes).Bette please, stop itget off me
Tina began to struggle and gasp for air.
Bette noticed that Tina was not playing and she gently eased off her..
Tina: Bette, PLEASE. stop, GET THE ***** OFF ME..
Tina began to squirm and push at Bette. Bette let go and jumped back pushing the covers off them all. Tina sat up and turned away from the girls.
Tina: breakfast..come on.lets get home
Bette: hey you, Tina.
Tina had walked out of the room and into the kitchen.
Bette: Tina.baby.whats wrong? You can have eats here you know.
Tina: no.dont think sodo you know the number of a lock smith or what ever you call them over here. My keysyou posted them remember
The girls came into the room..
Emma: mummy cant we have breakfast here, Auntie Bettie..
Bette: (turning to look at Emma with a cheeky smile)auntie Bettie come here Nessie..
Bette ran after Emma and tickled her to the floor then made a gesture as if to sayno more auntie Bettie wee one
Tina laughed and reluctantly agreed to let the girls stay.
As Tina and Bette moved around the kitchen Bette asked Tina.
Bette: Tina, did I hurt you earlier?
Tina: NO..
Bette: (looking at Tina).just asking I mean you were crying and insisted that I get off you.
Tina: wellno means no in any language Bette, even the US version of English..(Tina was firm faced and had little tone in her voice)
Bette: (turning to Tina), what the ***** does that mean.it was a game you goof.
Tina: to whom?
Bette scrunched up her face as she wondered where Tina was coming from. Tina served the girls some toast and tea. Her stomach began to rumble again.
Bette: here Tina..take some toast, that rumble would waken the dead
Tina: im not hungry you have it baby
Bette: (baby, am I in the good books again??).not hungryit has been going all night.here dont be silly
Tina: (looking at the ceiling and whispering so the girls dont hear), Bette, how many times do I have to bloody tell you, IM NOT H U N G R Y.
Bette dropped the toast in the bin. She slid up onto the works counter and looked at Tina. Something or somethings didnt make sense.it worried Bette as a few possibilities were clear in her mind
TBC
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(53 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
so glad to see you writing again, one of my absolute favs!!!!also glad that i was alone when i saw your story as it merited a biiiiiiigggggg YYYYEEESSSSSSSS!!! lovin it so much keep up the great work
Wow, some deep emotional scars there, I hope “Bette” can help her through what must have been one helluva life.
Someone has hurt Tina badly, maybe rape. a beating. she will need help and Hoping Bette can help a little. thanks
Welcome back Scotland! :) It has been awhile, but like always I love reading your story! Looks like Tina needs help….this is serious stuff…can’t want to hear more. Thanks again.
I am so happy that you are back. U were missed. Now lets figure out what is wrong with Tina.
you story is alot deeper than I thought. one of the best chap. yet
do leave us hangin long post again real soon 5 stars
Excellently written. Welcome back Scotland. I hope Bette is able to see things through that it’s not about her.
Hurry, i can’t wait much longer for the story to continue. please.please.xx
Tina is being strange…what’s up…Bette has already been with her intimately and they’ve already tickled before so what has changed…so excited to see your post today!!!
Glad to see this story is back! Wanna know what’s the matter with Tina! Write more, and SOON please!
oh yes, the scar on the tummy…i’ll have to remember it….waiting for more(wink)
oh scottie your back!!!!! Hey what is happening with Tina? post soon so Bette can help her work through this…I was soooo happy to see your post today.
Wow long time no see!! But really been looking forward for this…and excellently written as always!! keep it up!