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The End
When Bette woke up, she groaned in pain and realized that there was something pressed to her forehead. She slowly blinked and moved her arms which were hanging freely down to the floor of her car. Why was she sleeping in a car?
For one moment, she prayed that all of her troubles with her stalker had been dreamt, but then as she picked up her head from the wheel, she saw shattered glass and everything came back to her. Sophia had been in the car with them – Tina in the passenger seat. Immediately, Bette started to panic, looking around her to both sides of the ditch, and the interior of the car – there wasn’t any blood. They’d both been wearing their seatbelts. Sophia, too, or she would have been in even rougher condition than Bette. Undoubtedly, Sophia had Tina with her, or Tina would have stayed.
Bette sat up in her seat, still sloped from the ditch, until she could manage to swing open her door and pull herself from the vehicle.
“Where …” Bette mumbled to herself, stumbling to the ground with her lost sense of balance. Where did she take Tina …? Where were they going? She didn’t give herself time to process all of her questions. Bette started out on shaky feet down the road along the ditch in the direction her car was headed.
As she walked, she remembered Sophia pointing them in that direction, and confessing that they were close to their destination. Tina had panicked and tried to save them both by swerving the car, but it clearly had done them no favors. Bette lifted her hand to her forehead and felt a large bump growing on the left side from the impact. She was still wobbly on her feet when the dirt road opened on the right side to a small driveway. With one glance in toward the gravel and one glance to the endless road ahead, Bette sucked in a deep breath and jogged up the road with what energy she could summon.
There were no sounds coming from the forest cabin she saw at last, but that didn’t comfort her. What if something had already happened to Tina? Not wanting to make her presence known, Bette started limping over to the right side of the little house to look in the windows, but a voice paused her in her tracks.
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Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
great story
great story. I love most of your stories.
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
She is so creepy!
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next