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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 1

    Kit: Sure. Whatever you want. (She smiles as Bette turns and disappears around the corner, before
    turning her attention to the drama unfolding in chapter eight of her romance
    novel. But after a few minutes of reading, Kits attention began to wane from the
    sordid lives of Estella and her forbidden lover in favor of the events that
    lead to this very appointment.)

    Alice had called her late one night pretty upset.
    She really wasnt making much sense, just kept repeating that something bad had
    happened. That Tina had left Bette because she found out that Bette was having
    an affair. Kit was tempted to ask
    Alice
    if she had been drinking because what she was saying couldnt possibly be true.
    But in the background she could hear the faint sounds of Tina crying and knew
    instantly that something was very wrong in the Porter-Kennard household. And
    that something happened to be her sister. After hanging up with
    Alice, Kit immediately dialed Bettes. After her
    three attempts went unanswered, Kit quickly dressed and headed out the door.
    Bette needed her, even if she did possibly ***** up the most important thing in her life.

    When Kit arrived close
    to twenty minutes later, the house was completely dark. She rang the bell and
    knocked, but when Bette didnt come to the door, she used the spare key hidden
    away in the front garden. Upon entering the house Kit was somewhat surprised to see
    Bette sitting on the couch, not ten feet away from the front door. Edging
    closer Kits eyes took in her sisters despondent posture and more importantly
    the half empty wine bottle at her feet. Sighing, she crossed to the seat across
    from Bette and sat down and just waited. But Bette never acknowledged her
    presence and continued to stare down at her hands, folded tightly in her lap.
    It was only when Kit attempted to reach for her that Bette appeared to come to
    life. Snapping her hands away from the touch, Bette scooted back onto the couch
    out of reach. Kit noticed for the first time that Bette was actually holding
    something in her hands.

    Kit: Baby girl, what
    happened?


    They sat in silence
    for a while. It was obvious that Bette was trying to process whatever it was that had gone on
    earlier. Bette was upset and had been drinking. A lot. Kit knew enough not to push. Emotion and
    alcohol never mixed well together. And attempting to force Bette into telling
    her what happened was an idea Kit was not willing to entertain at that time. She made herself a bit more comfortable and
    prepared herself for a long wait. She
    closed her eyes and attempted to order the questions in her head. Did Bette
    really cheat on Tina? Who was it? How did Tina find out? Did Bette tell her?
    Did Tina catch her? Did?

    Kit opened her eyes
    with a start, immensely confused at the sudden wash of light that filtered
    through the slats of the partially closed blinds. Glancing at the clock on the
    far wall, she gasped as she realized that she had fallen asleep. Turning back to Bette she noticed that while
    Bette had not moved from her seated position on the couch, she was at least
    looking up at her. It was a step in the right direction. Getting her sister to open
    up was no easy task. Bette tended to
    internalize everything until it boiled over. Making eye contact, like they were
    doing now, was progress in Kit’s book.


    In the dim light Kit could see the toll last
    nights revelations had on her sister. Bettes eyes were bloodshot and attested
    to the fact that she probably got little or no sleep. There was the beginning
    of a bruise along her cheek and Kit absently wondered if Tina did it or if
    Bette had done it to herself after Tina left.
    Whatever happened between Bette and Tina left its mark on Bette,
    literally and figuratively. Looking at Bette sitting there Kit was suddenly at
    a loss for words. She opened her mouth to speak, to say anything to alleviate
    the tension building in the room, when Bette beat her to it.

    Bette: I fucked up.

    Three whispered words
    spoken with such sorrow and condemnation that it broken Kits heart then and
    there.

    Kit: Oh Bette. What
    happened?

    Bette: I fucked up.
    And now shes gone.

    Bette stood, placed
    the object in her hands on the coffee table, and walked out of the room. Kit
    watched her leave, sighing as she heard her enter the bathroom and start to run
    water for a shower. Rubbing her eyes tiredly, she stretched and moved to stand
    when something caught her eye.

    On the table sat Tina
    Kennards commitment ring.

    Kit: Oh baby girl,
    what happened here?

    (TBC…?)

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    Comments

    1. Great start…I always wanted a have a Bette “reaction scene” to Tina leaving. I mean we all saw Tina show up at Alice’s after the fact, but nothing about Bette.
      Uh oh, Bette’s going to the doctor…not a good sign.

    2. BVHALL wE FORGET THAT THERE WERE REASONS FOR bETTY CHEATING,ON tINA WASN’T RIGHT BUT YOU DO GO LOOKING WHEN THE ONE YOU LOVE DOESN’T SEE YOU ANYMORE. THANKS

    3. Liking the start of this, and Bette’s version of things. But please hopefully nothings wrong with Bette that Having Tina won’t fix, cos I think via all the other stories are girls have gone through enough.

    4. Well new stories are always welcomed by me, no matter if they suck or not, and I do have to say yours doesn’t suck at all. I enjoyed this chapter and hope you can post soon, it sounds like you have many chapter to let us read, and I’m alreday wanting more

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