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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 32
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Bette…
Again those shivers caused by the way she says my name…
You are a very special, very loving person… Don’t underestimate yourself…
Her eyes told me more then her words did and the warm feeling that overwhelmed me brought the tears from my throat to my eyes…
She softly carressed my hair and back as I cried in her arms…
I pushed my face in her sweater, smelling her incredible scent and felt the agony of losing the love of my life… This wonderfull, loving, understanding woman I could never spend my life with…
Tina:
As I put her to bed she was like a little child… I caressed her soft hair and face and felt my eyes wander over her face… Wondering what it would feel like to kiss every piece of it…
It was now my turn to provide the comfort and it felt wonderfull to hold her and realize how safe she felt with me…
She fell asleep instantly as I tugged her in and as I sat by her side admiring her lovely face I recaptured the feeling the events of that evening had given me…
The arousal caused by her tickling
The desire caused by her beauty
The tenderness caused by my memory
The caring and sympathy caused by her story
The love caused by her presence…
And as I looked at her relaxed sweet face and felt how much my heart and soul called out to hers I again felt the urge to touch her… so deep it frightened me…
I hadn’t noticed I had brought my face close to hers untill I felt her soft breath tickle my cheeks…
I wanted to kiss those full and beautifully shaped lips and the frequency of my breathing increased
*She is so beautifull*
My indexfinger carefully followed the line of her upperlip, grazing it… feeling the electricity-like tension between her body and mine…
*Oh fuck…*
Withdrawing I felt the raging of my heart
*I had almost kissed her…*
and scared of my own thoughts and feelings I exited the room…
Bette:
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tht was like hot coco with marshmellows on a cold night…….but pls pls pls post soon i am so eager to see them kiss can we pls end this sinfully sweet torture you are doin to us…pls post soon
ok bring on the next chapter like tonight! you mean torturer!! plaaggeest! lol
Het there… i love it… amd take it as slow as you like… it will make it more special… tina and bette are both so ready… and so are we…
This is just sweet torture I think I held my breath for most of the story please post soon with a KISS
Yes! Bette said it! Now it’s Tina’s turn. Give her a large glass of red wine, so she can lose all her inhibitions. It’s just torture to watch them.
Bloody hell – you are keeping us in surspence…let the moment come. Excellent work – do continue and post soon
Slowly, very slowly … WOW! I am enjoying your story very much !
Lovely. And corona is right, “killing me softly just very softly.” Truer words have never been spoken.
She said “i love you T…”? yeeeeeaaaaaaaaa!and Tina listen it so well! each chapter is gettin better and better and better! this was so great with tenders and sweet talk i love it! you have me hook with this story, one more chapter and the next the all waiting chapter 34! take your time!
You win, you showed us how you can continue with the story without them kissing… I agree with all the posts, this is torture!!! they can’t hold themselves anymore longer!!
Oh man.. Bette already said I LOVE YOU, T! I don’t understand, how could you hold the KISS till chapter 34!!!! Chapter 33 is soooo right timing for their first KISS, think about it.. don’t you? lol… Am I sound like an aussy? Nope.. I’m not but I’m from asia too. Close enough tough.. ehhehe..Can’t wait for your sweet torture, muhahahaha.. bring it on!
Torture though it is, I kind of like that you’re doing it slowly. It seems more meaningful. Great story.
short, long – doesn’t matter, as long as we’re getting close to the KISS…i love that intensity that you showed here again…it’s captured perfectly in their minds and in their emotions
This is so good and not nice to leave us like this and you killing us here my friend. Ahh please next chapter let them have a kiss and tell each other about their feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
Two more chapters to go. Maybe you can miss number them and the next will be chapter 34. I guess as I have waited this long two more chapters won’t kill me right—Wrong! Can’t you make the next chapter two sentences long and then post the rest as chapter 34.
I must be in love because I am crazy as all get out. Rosy can call me what ever she wants. Bette finally said what was in her heart. Of course she was half asleep and mentally fatiqued, but she said it. Now the ball is in Tina’s court. I always liked the song “The First Time I Ever Saw Your Face”. Celine Dion just brings the tears out of my body when I hear her version of that song. These two are really connecting emotionally and that is harder to do in any relationship. Enjoying myself, thank you for this wonderful story.
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR !!!!!!!!!!!!! your killing me!!!!!!!! your in the dog house
killing me softly just very softly
This is just so..amazing brilliant and such a torture…we are getting there…slowly…please post soon…:)
i think you’re counting wrong….this is chapter 33 right???? next up more torture.
Wel, wel, wel, je hebt me weer liggen hé, ik dacht dat van hoofdstuk 34 is maar een grapje. Ik dacht ze werkt her nu gestaag naartoe en dan opeens….afgelopen!!! Nu zit ik hier weer compleet gefrustreerd te wezen. ANOTHER CHAPTER, AND I MEAN NOW !!! ;)
Seeing Corona’s comment… well fans… lets sing together… “Killing me softly.. with her words…” Oh God… this is so absolutely totally amazing.. it’s not only beautiful, it’s breathtaking… I’m serious!! You really are great with words ;)
Hey why is everyone moaning and groaning? So we didn’t get a kiss (on the lips anyway…the forehead can count as half a kiss). However, Tina DID hear Bette tell her she loves her. Can I get a “yee-haw!”? Okay maybe not that but a nice big WEEEEEEEEEE! Now Tina just has to realize that that love isn’t the platonic kind. I wish your Tina would come tuck me in, but not before giving me a lower back massage because this pain sucks.
no, Melissa Manchester…this is going to drive me nuts now…pls post soon
why must you torture us!! lol!! you’re killing me here!!! you’re such a tease!!! darn it! please, please, please make 34 next!! lol! I’ll give you a dollar to make 34 next!! you do know how to write sexual tension very well!! too well!!
Isn’t it that Barry Manilow song…Killing me softly…well whoever but that song is now playing in my head…tks
justlove, WoW!!!!!! You write so great. This is the way it schould be going nice and slow. Thank You
Awwww so sweet and OMG Bette actually said “I love you T” out loud and this time Tina heard her – just amazing :o)) I wonder if Bette can remember this the next day, I know Tina will LOL…..skip chapter 33 and go straight (okay not the greatest word) to chapter 34 PLEASE!!!!!!
What these two women are doing is like a sin. It’s like being a chocolate lover with a free pass to the Godiva factory and not taking one single bite. It’s like finding a field with a billion beautiful flowers and passing it by. Simply put it is a sin to deny and turn your back on the simple pleasures of life. Please stop the madness…
How can you write this and not even give them a kiss,not or the forehead When it does happen we will all need something to cool our PC. thanks
Killing Me Softly was originally done by Roberta Flack. How long HAVE we waited for a kiss? Very smart, keep us coming back for more.