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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 30
We were watching a movie as I felt an immense tiredness wash over me… My eyes were heavy and I started to doze off…
Bette:
When I saw the moments she had her eyes closed became longer then the ones in which she had her eyes open I realized she was falling asleep… Again that overwhelming warm feeling got a hold of me… She must trust me so to just fall asleep besised me… And at the exact moment I had that though, her head gently slid onto my shoulder. When her cheek and my arm connected I again felt that jolt of agonizing pleasure rage through me… I softly stroked her hair, trying to wake her up…
Our eyes, our noses, our lips were just inches apart and I could feel her breath caress my face.
We’ve got to stop meeting like this
My softly spoken words startled her and she sat up straight in a second, leaving my shoulder very cold and chilly.
*And me disappointed*
*Porter… Can you stop thinking for a minute? Geez*
She chuckled and yawned.
Come on, I’ll show you to your room
She reached out and I took her hands, pulling her up…
She didn’t let go of my hand as I leaded her to the guestroom and I felt a shiver of loss when we reached it.
I’ve brought your bags here…
I pointed them out to her and after saying goodnight I left the room, hesitating a bit in the doorway…
Tina:
I couldn’t let go of her hand and when she let go of mine when we reached the guestroom… ‘My room’as she had so sweetly called it, I felt cold… I shiverred
I’ve brought your bags here…
She said goodnight… She was leaving… I felt drowsy but I knew one thing..
*Oh Bette… Don’t go…*
She hesitated shortly in the doorway, but before I had the chance to say something she smiled at me reassuringly.
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
She looked so cute, a bit nervous, the way she was fidgeting with her sleeves when she stated that…
She turned around and with one last glance back at me she closed the door…
Bette:
I couldn’t just go to sleep… I was so agitated… The thought of Tina so close and yet so far away was driving me crazy… I had changed into sweatpants and a white sleeveless shirt and was now having a conversation with myself
*Would it be silly if I said goodnight one more time?*
I so desperatly needed to be close to her… It was such an intense feeling I surprised myself… Although I knew people in love di strange things I never thought I, always-in-control-Porter, would ever feel so… so incredibly OUT of control…
I chuckled at my own thoughts and got up… My legs took me to that door… She was right there… I could feel her presence through the door… as if her soul was calling out for me… It was such a significantly different feeling than everything I ever felt that I knew I would always be able to feel her presence, no matter where we were.
I placed my hand on the doorknob, fighting with myself…
Tina:
The moment Bette had left the room I was awake…
*Oh Bette…*
I needed her… Something deep in my soul, craved for her… Something deep in me loved her with a passion I didn’t knew I had in me… And that something was the person I had been hiding for so many years… That person was me…
Her last sentence kept resounding in my head…
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
Without realizing what I was doing I raised and walked towards the door…
I reached for the doorknob and just stood there for a while… hesitating…
——————————— TBC ——————————–
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(30 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
if i die of anticipation its all your fault!!!!!!
great, yet greatly frustrating chapter! Please continue posting fab posts asap
are you trying to kill me? please let them kiss in the next chapter?
okay I’ve been very patient and very nice up until now……LOOK OVER YOUR SHOULDER AND MAKE SURE YOUR DOORS AND WINDOWS ARE ALWYAS SECURELY LOCKED…CAUSE I’M COMING!!!!!!!!!! U TEASER…..Y STOP THERE ESPECIALLY AFTER SUCH A LONG DELAY IN UPDATES?????!!!!!!
hey just why leave it there i hope they kiss in the next chapter i cant wait
This story is fantastic but soooo frustrating. Enuf already, kiss, kiss please.
Argh, de spanning valt te snijden! Hou ons niet langer in spanning en zorg ervoor dat ze nu eens doen wat hun hart zegt :) Loved it, as always!
at least have them kiss….oh I’m dying here!!!!
justloveB+T, I love this story. Bette and Tina belong together in your story. Who will open the door frist? Thank you for your writting Please Post Soon
WHAT?! 6 pages without a KISS!!!! Oh man, you really like to torture us, don’t you? You seem to enjoy that, you are being mean, young lady! lol.. Come on Bette, just open the damn door and give Tina a kiss of DEATH! LOL…i mean take her her breath away… ahh.. can’t wait! Please continue.
Girl… you´re killing me here!!! Don´t be that cruel with us please….POST SOON!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY…
Well…you´re were right…i loved it..just great at always…but…hm…cliffhangers :), but am thinking we are getting there soon…right? Post soon…plz and thanks for saving my day..again…
Hi! i make a happy face when i see you have post! yea! and when i finish readign i was so happy! this chapter was so sweet with a lot of spark! and truly love. i know that is a lot of pressure about the kiss but girl you can write wathever you want i am always be happy to read it cause every time you make a post you do it in style! i love this story! take care!
F*ck, why stop here. Hé, hoe kan je dat nou zo harteloos zijn. Mijn computerscherm kwam steeds dichterbij….en juist op het laatste moment, oeps, gedaan. Zit ik hier wel met een levensgroot probleem nietwaar ;). Wel je kan het nog net goedmaken, ik blijf hier nog een uurtje zitten en ik verwacht je volgende post. OK?
I love it, just let them talk to each other and admit what they are indeed feeling. Thanks for the post.
You do know how to torture us, don’t you! Great story – great writing. Just…need…more…please
you just love to torture me…simple sorry won’t work this time…do something…this chapter was so great, how can you express the intensity of their feelings the way that i can totally feel it…just perfect
Your killing me here!!!!! lol you have no idea how much i love this story!!!! I cant wait for them to finally share their first kiss!!!! Your doing an amazing job, keep them coming
The tension is filling up every available space and is starting to choke Bette and Tina (and everyone else). I love to watch people get to know one another and I love long stories. The build up is hard sometimes but is so worth the wait. You are the leader and I will follow. Besides I hate leading, it is much funnier to just hang out follow right along. I miss Rosy, can she come out to play with me? Maybe she will get to come visit Tina that way I can see her also. I love the way you have allowed us to see the inner workings of Bette and Tina.
well when i saw six pages with pg ratin i was happy tht ok maybe a kiss would pass your censorship and i might imagin them kissing an maybe have a peacefull night but babe ya really killin me here have sum merci on frustrated souls like us who still belive in tibette inspite of their fall out if they dunkiss already i would break the damn door myself lolpls post soon coz i am eagerly waitin preety plslol
I love love this story! Dont normaly comment but wanted to say what a great job your doing with this one. I can’t wait for theire first kiss, maybe next chapter eh! Post real soon.
Wonderful update can’t wait for more.
whooooooooooooooo 6 pages you give me oxygen and then u suck all the air out of the room by playing with door!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
J’adore ton histoire et j’attends avec impatience la suite. Je te fais confiance pour la suite, tu n’as pas besoin de nos conseils. Continue, nous sommes pendues à tes lèvres!!!!Post soon please…
thanks for the wink… you were right i was reading at work early this morning.. about 4am… love this story… and i love the pace… keep it real… so open the door already… and let bette give her the good night kiss we all want to see… later baby
Are they gonna play Tug of War with the door handle? LOL “Hey, why won’t the damn door open!?” *tug, tug, fall back on butt* OOF! “We’ve got to stop meeting like this” I remember Randy saying that in the bathroom in “Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” and thought it was adorable then. It was still adorable with Bette saying it here. Thank god we got a chapter today! I was missing this story yesterday and sat around all morning here at work refreshing the site hoping for new material. Wow you can tell I love my job right? ;)
You’re killing us here!! lol plz post soon!!!
You are such a tease! I bet you are going to make them both chicken out and go back to bed, or the lock will get stuck or something, or Alice will call – anything to keep those lips from kissing…Still waiting for more.
The SUSPENSE is KILLING ME! Please post again soon!
Haha.. it reminds me of… well in … I pushed open the door to my roomate’s room and she was standing right behind the door, so the door corner hit straight right down in the middle of her face.. hurting her nose and especially her lips.. causing the lower lip to bleed a little… oh gosh :S hey, u can write on this idea and have Bette checking Tina’s bleeding lip and then… grazing lip with fingers?? and then they kiss?? ;)
btw, I totally understand how it feels to have ‘killed’ so many readers ;) but no worries, u’re doing such a great job, I bet they aren’t really complaining :D
you truely are killing us here! lol pls post very very soon!
Good chapter. Ahh not nice to leave us like this and please post soon, thanks!