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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 20
I couldnt help but smile when I started to open her present and felt her eager gaze on me…
*She just wants to know what you think of her present Porter… Dont make to much out of it*
*She doesnt have to worry… She could give me a piece of hotelsoap and I would be thrilled*
As I opened the box and peered in I saw the most beautifull earrings I had ever laid eyes on. They were silver and looked plain but looks were deceiving… They were beautifull in a way beyond complaining and taking them out of the box I noticed they was an inscription on them.
Holding it in the light to be able to read it I saw
Ive known rivers on one
and
Ancient, dusky rivers on the other…
Taken aback I looked up to find Ts eyes closer than Id expected them to be.
You said it was your parents favourite poem, I hope you like it
As I, still too ashtonished, too drymouthed to say anything, nodded, she smiled unsurely
*Shed remembered… How could she remember such a small detail about my life… Shes really something!*
There… erm She cought and sounded cutely nervous Theres more in the box
This exhibition of true care… I mean… She remembered something so subtle, so small from my life… It was beyond anything I had ever expected. And it was than that I realized that I didnt only find someone to love, but that I had found someone worthy of my love… All my love! Someone so special… Someone who actually listened and had a kind, sweet and beautifull heart with no intention of hurting…
*Oh GOD! Why does SHE have to be straight and taken????*
To prevent for T to see my blushing face I tried to pay all my attention to the box in my hand and took out 2 polaroid photographs of…
*Oh my god*
Oh GOD, T… Where did you find those?
Tina:
I saw it all in her eyes… surprise, shock, sadness and yet a happy sort of… gratitude that fied my heart with joy
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thankyou for posting, and pls don’t ever leave me hanging for so long without another dose…I’ve been in withdrawl!!!
This is beautiful and lovely chapter!
this is so beautiful…i think b&T need some time alone so they can talk and finally at least hint about their feelings
Amazing and so beautiful thanks
fanstastic and it was long enough yay!!!!!!! b&t forever
Oh Wow! The passion and love already making it’s presence known. Just the slightest touch brings fourth so many emotions. It was very touching how Tina was able to find some of Bettes mother’s paintings. I too would have cried if presented something along these lines. Please continue to show us the inner workings of these two women.
hmmmmmmm… yes a wonderful chapter… so come on bette kiss her already… she is in your arms… and no alice in sight… lol…please continue
This is one of my favourite stories I love it. I loved the part where Bette said that she could have givem me a piece of hotel soap and i would have been thrilled, that was a classic. Keep the chapters coming.
One word: AMAZING!!!
great chapter, typical Al lol
Hey I hope you had a great vacation, This was a great chapter….this story is so lovely, tender, sweet and they have to kiss for real now right????? Please post soon, I’m so addicted and in love with this story :o))
i loved this chapter and your forgiven x please post soon
Yeah the hotel soap brought forth laughter. Man, she must REALLY love Tina because most standard hotel soap lasts no time it’s so cheap. lol It’s about time we got this chapter. I’ve been waiting since Thursday for it since you said you’d be gone for a week. =p