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Tell Me Again – Chapter 8
Tina: Christ, perhaps you could just sit there next time and not move I glared at them. Probably the same ***** that were waiting for the tacos earlier, back to mess with me some more.
Bette smiled weakly at me. I could defiantly tell something was wrong. I didnt know what to say; all of a sudden I was feeling rather nervous, another feeling I hated.
Either Bette had told
Dana: Dont you have a drink already?
I silently thanked
Bette: Hi
Tina: Hey. Whats up?
Bette: I just got off the phone with Kristen.
Tina: Oh I already knew that but it effected me like I didnt.
Bette: I didnt break up with her.
Ow, there was that stabbing feeling again. My mind went blank. What the ***** did that mean. Did she not just tell me earlier that she wasnt getting married?
Tina: I dont understand.
Bette: I couldnt do it. Not yet
Tina: So you were still with her when you were with me this afternoon?
Bette: Yes she whispered.
I felt my blood pressure starting to rise. She lied to me. Even worse, I was part of a situation I didnt want to be. I couldnt be part of this triangle.
Bette: We were looking for a house here, I couldnt break her heart. She continued when I didnt respond.
Tina: So instead you break mine.
Bette: No, Tina. She reached for my hand.
I pulled away; I couldnt let her touch me. It was wrong. Everything we shared was tarnished, I almost felt ashamed.
Tina: Bette, I cant do this I stood up. I didnt know what to say. Every time I looked at her I wanted to be back where we were hours earlier. The lights went down and the music began again.
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(41 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
great update – and your 1st person pov works well. Very smooth. well done!!
Wow, I didn’t expect that from Bette. She flat out lied to Tina. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! Post soon!
If only Tina didnt give Bette what she wanted in the 1st place..
gr8 chapter..
Ohh God !! here comes the Drama !!! hehe ;))
Gr8 chapter !! I love this story . I am totally hooked . I think Tina’s point of view ( 1st person narrative ) works very well . I like the way u write Tina’s thoughts . keep up the gr8 work and pls continue .
i can’t wait to see what happens next , plsssss Hurry and post soooon !!!!! :D
Thanx :D
I thought Bette was lying but hoped that she wasn’t. Poor Tina!
NO marijuana is not a drug, I love this story, I love pot heads, It’s funny it 2 am and I’m reading your story about stoners and I’m loaded off my ass, it’s been one of those night were I chose not to sleep,It will bite me later since I have to be at work at 6am. I should be sleeping I’m high and just had sex, but I so hooked on reading FF that I’m typing this instead of in bed.Damm when are you going to give bette some brownies?? ok now that I have made a fool of myself I think I will stop talking.
I was totally pissing myself, when you had Tina dancing to her phone, no idea why, just such a perfect image ! Thank you – wicked story.
to bad tina didn’t hear and let bette finish telling her what she wanted to tell her… loving this story..and oh here we go with the drama… please be gentle
This story just gets better and better with each chapter!!!
K
Great chapter, that really sucks on Bette’s part. Hope it works out for the best. Can’t wait for the next one.
Megga- DAMN BETTE! Why did she have to lie! This is a great story, keep it up. Please post again soon!
I LOVE stoned Tina! I’m with CROO give Bette some brownies. A stoned Bette be funny as hell!
Damn drama coming and this is sad!