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Sun Salutations: Chapter 11
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Bette couldn’t speak. Tina’s tongue was doing all of the talking deep inside her. The ability to verbally communicate was gone. Her mouth helplessly gaped open. She was breathing fast and hard, experiencing numerous chills while dangling on the edge of a monumental *****. Her eyebrows wrinkled and her left foot was disfigured due to a shooting cramp. Her right hand held the top of Tina’s head tightly, leading it straight to her destination of choice.
“Bette, are you there?”
“Um.See you then Hel”, she breathlessly replied. She felt that each word uttered would result in the birth of a whopping ***** and cautiously squeaked them out as a result.
Bette could only hope that she ended the call properly because she was steadily going out of her mind. Tina increased the speed and pressure of her tongue and added 2 experienced fingers to the mix. One leg was flung over Tina’s shoulder while the other quivered continuously. Tina used her flat palm to support Bette in the small of her back. Relentless and thoroughly committed to pleasing the beautiful woman who stole her heart, Tina was drunk with passion. Her talented tongue danced through time, tempos and rhythms as she flicked, sucked, nibbled and licked. Bette’s toes curled leaving deep imprints in the plush carpet while her entire body shook violently. She had been lovingly transported to another world. She visited this world often and had become a member of its frequent flyer program. Tina ensured she become a regular there with as many points accumulated as possible. The love-bitten blonde sent Bette back to this world repeatedly when her mocha queen thought she didn’t have the strength to travel anymore. This time was no different. Tina licked, sucked and stroked until Bette pushed her head away and through tears, pleaded for her to stop. Her request was granted but not before Tina sent her on one more first-class, non-stop flight to paradise. Bette’s body went limp and Tina guided her over to the bed.
“You’re delicious baby” Tina whispered in her ear. Bette was in a drunken stupor from the wonders of being loved by Tina. She kissed Bette passionately leaving traces of Bette on her mouth. “Taste how sweet you are Bette. I just want to … Damn.”. Tina was unable to finish what she was saying.
Finally, after what seemed like days, Bette’s mind and mouth cooperated. “T where are you going?” Bette muttered – seeing a myriad of whirlybirds whenever she opened her eyes.
Tina happily chirped, “Back to the Expo, baby I just stopped by for lunch.” She flashed her pearly whites and disappeared through the door.
TBC…
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Excellent story!!
oh damn, your comment had me nervous about a Bette/Helena scene. I am glad you went this way though. this is an awesome story. your descriptions of the lovemaking is very unique, I like the spiritual, loving feeling of your love scenes. you have a gift, and I am so glad you are sharing with us. pls post soon.
ps. I read a Bette/Hel scene once and I must admit it was hot. something abt two alpha females is just such a turn on, but it turned out to be a dream, and though it was hot…well I was relieved it was a dream. Does that make sense? anyway, pls keep B and T together. they are just too hot!!
Nooooo! You should have gone the Helena/Bette direction. Not because it would be original, but because it would be quite interesting. *pouts* As the major Helena fan I am, I’m afraid I can’t continue reading. But it’s been very good this far.
“I’m so glad you woke me up Bette. I mean that in more ways than one. I was asleep until I met you.”
That was so sweet!! This was another amazing chapter. Its good that they made up but I think more drama is on the horizon. Bette really needs to talk to Helena. I feel kinda bad for Helena in this situation. She loves her best friend but her best friend is in love with her enemy. It’s kinda like My Best Friend’s Wedding, Bette is chasing Tina and Helena is chasing Bette but who’s chasing Helena? Anyway enough of my rambling… can’t wait for more!!
Now that’s what I call a lunch break!
btw sweetie, i hope hel heard them. it will break the ice for their conversation. heehhe. im so not a hel fan. just cant help myself.
Tina from this angle is intriguing. I’ve never read Tina being this way before. Excellent and now off for my cold shower.
yowza…Just caught up with the story. LOVIT!
heehee…whirleybirds…
Good chapte and they are hot!
Everybody: Sing it with me!:
Way-oh
Way-oh
Bop way-oh
Way-oh-oh
Bop-bee-bop-bee-bop-dah-day aay-oh
Bop-bop way-oh
Way-oh
Ah ah ah…
Jesus for a moment i thought u were going to go helena/bette and then B&T made up. i am still speechless, everytime i read ur story i dont no wat to say. POST SOON!!!!
I could just read your stuff all day, every day.
Your writing takes my breath away. My lover laughs at my face as I am reading this, holding my breath with my jaw hanging open! LOVE IT!!!!
Finally, after what seemed like days, Bette’s mind and mouth cooperated. “T… where are you going?” Bette muttered – seeing a myriad of whirlybirds whenever she opened her eyes.
Tina happily chirped, “Back to the Expo, baby… I just stopped by for lunch.” She flashed her pearly whites and disappeared through the door.
I love this shit!!!!!!!!!!! OMG….the chills running down my spine….
You had me a bit nervous with the Bette/Helena thing, which by the way needs to get resolved quickly. But damn talk about make-up sex and there not even officially a couple. Then,I just stopped by for lunch. Shit, I don’t remember having a lunch break like that, well at least not for awhile. Love this story, can’t wait for your next post.
I’m wondering if Hel was still on the phone to hear what happened after Bette dropped the phone. But I think she probably thinks Bette was flirting with her.
GreenTea, that was amazing. I like this B & T, their honesty is refreshing. Honestly, though the constant jumping to conclusions and resulting angst in their relationship is getting out of hand in fanfic land. Your B & T actually seem mature enough to talk through whatever is bothering them. To add a little drama maybe Bette’s husband should re-appear, but don’t ruin their relationship with an affair. That’s too easy for them.Let them have some more happy times, please.
I like the NC-17 aspect of this story. I think it’s realistic. In new relationships the sex is always plentiful. And frankly Bette’s been by herself for an extended periiod of time and has some orgasmic catching up to do.
It would be a cool drama if Helena overheard the lovemaking between B & T. Maybe Helena could kick Bette out of the house they share. See there is all types of drama scenarios that don’t involve B & T’s demise.
Thank You, carry on with your tale. I am enjoying it.
Wonderful chapter. It seems that Bette is the Tina’s weakness. And it’s good to see Tina admits her feelings for Bette. So Helena is going to know the truth about Darby and Tina. But now Hel is only interested to Bette and I’m not sure about Bette’s feelings since this kiss. One last thing, Tina and Bette together, it’s so hot.
Thank you
so so hot..n tina is such a tease!! i luv it!!
OMG greenie..you have done it again…..you make us all pass out and wanting more. God I need a cold shower right now but you sure put a smile on my face……talk about lunch I need some…..amazing update I´m almost speechless greenie so keep it up and post soon
Damn you can write girl – well done. So appreciating someone who can spell and who has a wonderful command of grammar too!!!! (lol)
Okay i give up..you are just too damn good at those NC-17s–my blood pressure and self-control will have to deal with it! LOL
LMFAO@Tina passin by for lunch!! She is too damn cool in your piece..hilarious. Bette just never sees it comin..*haha* Nice one(the chapter I mean)…all of it!! Keep goin..:-D
Breath,1,2,3.
Loved how Tina didn’t settle for a chicken on rye with mayo…went straight for the gourmet dish of the day Bette Porter…lol.
Will Bette even have a coherent conversation with Helena later?
Love it.
Thank you.
This has fast become one of my favorite stories here, can’t wait for the updates. Love your Bette and Tina. I’m really hoping Helena isn’t homocidal about the Bette preferring Tina issue.
Now THAT’S what I call Fast Food! You go Tina!
great chapter greenie. love the lunch scene. so how will bette let helena down? more B&T loving cant get enough
“Sun Goddess” … in case you were wondering…
ummmm uuuuhhhh ummmmmmmmm ok uuuuhhhhhhh who are you!!! I bow before you…do you know how beautiful you are! Thank you for another amazing fcuking incredible chapter!!!!
Im so glad these two are not reluctant to trip the light fantastic. It’s a great way to cement the start of a new relationship, whether romantic or literary!
Thank you, Bette and Tina.
Thank you, Greentea!
Okay, I gotta say that the letter thing was a liiitle too convenient, but it’s helpful.
It was great that you immediately jumped into the Helena-problem, but didn’t take the easy way out by letting Bette plead temporal insanity. I mean, not completely. She still knows she felt something.
Buuut… hmm… Tina admited her feelings a little too soon. Then again, she was overwhelmed so yeah, it probably just came out before she could control it. Also the pushing Bette’s buttons part… on the other hand, she is insecure, she HAS to push a few buttons.
Argh, don’t make Tina go after Bette. Bette was the one who cheated!!! Does that ring a bell? Damn, Tina you are NOT WRONG. You were not even the one who was making out with Helena! (well, at least not this time around)
How come SHE has to apologize?!?!
What does it matter that IT won’t happen again. IT already happened. By ‘IT’ I don’t mean the kiss, but the lingering doubt…
The HEL she didn’t feel anything, IT was there!!!
You left a door open. I hope it’s not going to stay that way just to keep Bette and Tina together. Cause they’re only going to be REALLY TOGETHER when kissing anyone else taste like POOPIE SHIT!!, no matter how charming, beautiful, blue-eyed, British and with a sexy accent and tone of voice…
Not a great time for a NC-17 >>.<<
I’m serious, I usually enjoy reading the NC-17 parts of your fic, but NOT when IT is there.
Don’t worry, I’m not angry, just really passionate. Deep down, I like Helena, I just don’t like all these loose ends in a relationship. Geez, guess >I< should be the one taking Tina's classes...
k sweetums. i was trying not to lol while slipping off my chair when tina came back for lunch. OMG greenie. can you get it any hotter in my house. ive said before, im not a hellno fan. ill never trust her or want her around any of our girls. so the kiss was just nasty to me. it will be interesting to see what hel has to say about the letter. its so cute to see them both trying. i mean they both have issues and insecurities. i love this story. i love the way you write and what/how you think. ny why so far away. getting together for drinks will be a little more difficult. this was so nice to have before bed. ill definately have nice, really nice dreams. post soon pumpkin. heehee
double wow! this time..:)
OMG!!! That was about the most beautifully written love scene/scenes I’ve ever read! I’m just sayin’! Thanks!
Damn man!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bette and
helena NO not ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your stories are so well written, the characters are fully developed and the dialogue is crisp and fresh. Oh, and the NC17’s are just flat out breathtaking. You feel the intimacy, the love and the smouldering passion btw the two. Greentea you are smoking.