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Ch 4.
At the newly opened the Planet Caf, it became a total hang out for us creatures you might say or aliens. Normal people took one look at the window and quickly dispersed. Needless to say we really did not make this our permanent territory. We, just like everyone else needs a ***** coffee and a chair to sit on and drink.
But two days after it opened, we have all hit home and found us a planet oozing of coffee paradise. Even if we were separated from the real world, the best of all WEHO could not have been any better. I had nothing to complain about.
The owner was surely hot and with her accent her hotness just kept on boosting up the level.
She quickly learned our names and was very very observant about who walks in and out of her door. But the first week of trying to observe everything mustve been quite a blur. *****, I couldnt even keep up watching every hottie walk in and out of the caf without saying my ohhs and ahhs.
Anyways, I took a seat at the middle of the caf where it was very recognizable that it was a table reserved for me and friends. Not that I took it for granted and shouted at anyone who dare take a seat at it. It was just somehow always empty until one of us was occupying it. They mustve seen my *****
Five minutes later, Shane arrived trailing with uncombed hair and a shirt I recognized from the day before. Moments later I heard a girl crying and rushed towards the exit after seeing Shane undone.
It somehow continues to amaze me that none of your girls who end up crying ever do anything else rather than just cry and leave.
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I like this story a lot, although as it’s from Alice’s PoV, I’m wondering how much detail we’ll get of the Bette/Tina interactions – and that first kiss! I guess Bette will have to tell Alice all about it. In detail!
“It’s Sunday for crying out loud! It’s like catch up time and what more is to catch up time than bantering and annoying the hell out of one another.”
You’ve captured Alice. Perfectly.
“Well elaboration is the most important part.†We agree! ;-)
K
Wonderful and very funny chapter. Alice is a trip. Can’t wait for more.
p, you are awesome…and did I mention funny?! I love this story! You’ve got Alice down perfectly…I loved her jab at Dana–“Your sweating like your gay and if I can tell somebody else can too.” LMAO! Thanks
Very good and funny indeed ! It’s a pleasure to read your story. Thanks !
Hey P I’m love it you’re Story It’s really Great Thanks keep going and I’m just gonna wait more chapter Please.