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    Something so right -chapter 62

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 62

    Bette undressed Tina quickly discarding her clothes and only stopping when she was naked.

    “God “ she whispered

    “What is the matter ?”

    Tina was expecting Bette to throw her onto the bed

    “I surround myself with beautiful objects all day – every day at work but none of them take my breath away like you do – you are stunning “

    “You are not exactly ugly yourself – now why don’t we both stop talking for once “

    Bette grinned “ What a good idea babe “

    Bette pushed Tina so she fell backwards. Tina provocatively eased her legs apart so Bette could get a fuller view of how aroused Tina was. Her hairs were wet – Bette could only imagine how silky she would feel. Bette stripped off and climbed between Tina’s legs. Their kissing was soft at first but quickly became more demanding as Bette’s tongue probed deep into Tina’s mouth. Bette hand closed over Tina’s full breast – she gently started to tease the nipple – tugging at it and dragging her nails across the ultra sensitive flesh.

    Tina moaned – the sensations that Bette was producing had succeeded in making her wetness more acute. Bette’s kisses started to work their way down Tina’s neck until with great deliberation she reached Tina’s breasts. Her mouth took one and sucked at it gently. Tina was holding onto Bette – moaning softly at the loving her partner was lavishing on her. Bette toyed with Tina’s breasts for several minutes before easing away and moving her body down the bed and placing the first kiss on her pubic hairs.

    The time that they had been lovers had been the most fantastic revelation for Bette. She had never been in a relationship where she had given her body as freely as she was now. Tina was so loving as well as passionate. It had been impossible not to revel in how obvious the trust was between them. As Bette let her tongue dip enough so she could take Tina’s clit in her mouth she knew this relationship was the ultimate one for her. This was a love that would only develop and prosper. Tina started moving her hips in tune with Bette’s skilful licking and kissing of her clit. The blonde was soaking wet and it wouldn’t take much to push her over the edge.

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    Comments

    1. In-laws always complicate a relationship, I think we’ve all been there. I sympathize with both points of view on this one. Finn needs to find himself a frat house, and live a little.

    2. You know, I do understamd Bette’s disappointment about not having Tina alone all weekend as she planned, but instead of getting all bent out of shape about it, they should consider some alternatives. They are supposed to be smart people. Great update Ally!

    3. It’s about time that Bette came around. At first i thought she was acting so grumpy b/c she needed to get laid but even after that night of passion she still woke up cranky and picking at Finn. I kow he isn’t a kid but give the guy a break. Farmboy to Cityboy is a big transition. It is kinda funny that Tina was super embarassed and Bette had no shame about Finn hearing all their love making the night before. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Hopefully three doesn’t become a crowd and start problems for TiBette. PPS!

    4. Loving this story. IMHO> Bette’s being a little bit mean I think. Finn must think she is a B!!chThe comments about her (Tina’s) family are just wrong..

    5. bette is right finn needs to get some comments to himself, afterall he didnt give them any notice. tina and finn need to finish their talk so tina can see where finn is thinking of heading! awesome:)PPS

    6. Well I agree with everybody else, he needs to keep those comments for himself, I mean he is the one who came crashing their privacy and home, what did he expect, they hold their life and love for him, I know it sounds a little harsh but it sucks when it happens to anybody who desires the comfort of home and privacy and want to enjoy it as he planned. Thanks Ally, you are incredible and every chapter you post is better than the other. Post soon please. Love

    7. Iknow both B&T were dissapointed about Finn just showing up, but Bette needs to show a lot more maturity here. She knows how tramatized Tina was and is by her parents relationship, so she should understand Finn need to get away from the farm. Besides LA is NOT the enviornment you just someone from a farm or smaller city into. Finn could easily get involved with the wring croud as get hooked on drugs or worse. Tina is right for wanting to look out for him as he gets on his feet. They need to look for a house so that they could move into some place with more space.

    8. Bette is being more juvenile than Finn. Yes, he should gave called and he should keep the comments to himself. Neither of them are thinking clearly. If Bette still has her apartment why don’t they let Finn have that apt or Tina’s apt and they go to Bette’s. (can’t remember if Bette let her apt go). They could help him enroll in college and a dorm or help him find a job and a small place to live.But the first thing is Bette needs to act her age and stop being a snippy bitch. If she keeps that up she will turn Tina from her.Tina will not abandon her brother, nor should she. Great chapter. Post when you can.

    9. I’m not suggesting they throw him out on the street, but neither Bette nor Tina are Finn’s mommy. The should help him either get on his feet there or to get back home, but they also need to set ground rules for him (well beyond smart alecky comments about their sex life) since he clearly doesn’t impose any on himself. And if Tina is serious about being with Bette, she needs to be more considerate of her feelings and less worried about nurturing little brother.

    10. I feel sorry for B&T. Finn being there is not going to be easy. Bette has been there for Tina all along but sometime enough is enough. Thanks Great Chapter!!!

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