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small world (working title) – Chapter 10
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Chapter 10 – Facing Your Friends
With every one but herself working Shane finds herself with nothing to do Thursday. She cleans the house. Sweeps the front porch. Alphabetizes her CD’s. Then makes her way to The Planet, at least she knows Kit will be there.
She sits there lost in her own world of ice tea, lunch and the LA Weekly. Her phone sits on the table ready to receive Harper’s call. Shane’s mind can’t stop going back to last night making it hard to make any progress with her newspaper. Every time she thinks of Harper or last night she gets this wild feeling in her stomach. It’s like nothing she’s ever really felt before. She knows that in her brief time with Cherie she was rather smitten by her. And that when she would think of spending time with her or ***** her she would get excited. But this is different. This feels emotional, she doesn’t know what other word to use to describe it. It’s raw. It’s exciting.
Last night was so different for her. Confessing her sins. Opening up. Talking. Trusting. What is it about this girl that makes her trust in her?
Last night was so different for her because at the end of all of it they hugged, then shared the gentlest kiss. She’s used to hot and heavy, full steam ahead. Wham bam and usually a thank you Ma’am, then she’s gone and that’s that. But this, this kiss, it was just a touch of the lips. No tongue, no roaming hands. It’s what led up to it that really got Shane hot. The anticipation. Yes, that’s the word! Anticipation. That was hot. The ‘will she kiss me’. Being so close together. Feeling her hot breath against her face. Feeling the heat from her hands. The sound of her voice when she said “goodnight”. So low and *****. The feeling of her lips as they made their first contact, setting off a fire that coursed through every part of her. And now a new anticipation sits deep inside Shane’s body. The anticipation of the next kiss. How will that feel? What will it be like when they really kiss? When a kiss becomes making out?
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It sounds like the needy needing the needy, Harper is a little ahead of Shane. Yet they seems so close. Hope it works out for them for a long time… thanks
wow read all 10 chapters! Really nice story and im glad Shane is finally taking a chance to be happy..and i hope Harper takes a good care of Shane :) Post soon!.
also just read all 10 chapters and enjoyed everyone thank you and post soon…
this is great I love it and i just hope that they have a long and happy furture together but I also know that they will have their problems please post soon I can’t wait to see what happens next
First of all, I admire you for awfully fast writing. It, to read all at once, gave me pain and bliss as like Shane’s feeling for Harper earlier. Second of all, you are a wonderful writers. I totally hooked up. I love the way you describe Shane’s and Harper’s thoughts or their reactions. Thanks for this great story and post soon. It’s hard to wait for the next update.
Thank you all for you comments, they are most appreciated. I’m so happy that you guys are digging the story. I know how faithful we all are to the characters of TLW and it’s storyline, so it was a scary thing to post this. When I write, I write everything long hand, I’m old fashion that way. I am not one of those people you see at coffee shops with their laptop. I’m the girl lost in thought with her notebook and walkman. I hope to have the next chapter or so transcribed and posted by tonight. There is more to come, but it might take a while for it to arrive. I will do my best to be speedy. – xo b.