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Scorpio Rising 8
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Scorpio Rising 8
Ch 12
….it goes deeper than you think.
It goes deeper than I go,
deeper than you know.
“I have these perfect dreams of us Shane. The kind of dreams that hurt the most. Half the time I don’t know if they are real. After a while they go horribly wrong. And I wake up….and your not there….I look around and the bed is cold….and I don’t know if it’s another dream or not….. I went to the grave my grave thinking you where there….and instead I find you here with another woman in your arms, and you are looking at her in way that I don’t think you look at me….”
Ok. Now we are getting away from the wider line. The edges smooth. Breathing under… sorta under control……….we are standing so close to each other. She has her arms around my neck. Her hands touching the back of my neck. That hot touch of her fingers….It’s only when we are like this, close like this not thinking not feeling anything but this; it’s only at times like this that we feel secure with each other.
“Carmen. I am so sorry that I did that. I am sorry that you saw that. I don’t love her. I don’t ….There is no way you can think that I want someone other than you. You drive me crazy, you make me wild…..There is nothing….nothing I can say to chase that image from your mind. Marina was upset. I was upset. I was trying to make her feel better, and I reacted badly to it. Then I came to my senses….sort of. “
“Shane there is something broken, something really wrong with you. The more you try to hide it or not acknowledge it the more it’s going to keep breaking you apart.”
“You are right. I lost it today…..I can’t think about you leaving me or telling me that it’s over….you can’t want this to end between us…..”
She takes her arms moving them slowly back to her side. Her forehead on mine. Her hands on my face holding it in her hands. She kisses me so soft. Taking the gun from my hand, tucking my gun away in the back of her cutoffs, she looks at me thoughtfully. Not really afraid. She is fearless my sweetheart. Fearless in a way I am not. Her willingness to be apart from me to spare me some kind unhappy life that I am not aware of; it took guts that I didn’t have. I am ready to loose my mind. I seriously scared myself. She scared me. I could do almost anything she asked of me, but to not come back….better to die.
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I had totally forgot about the manly looking Carly :} I wonder if Carmen really wants Marina or just wants her because Shane wanted her. There relationship is so complicated, yet so intense! I think Shaen does need to feel that familiarity of the Carmen she initially fell in love with, and maybe it will do Carmen some good just as well. Yet I have to agree with John also, is still is about the little boy.
ok wow great update but my carmen wanting someone not shane uhhhh nooooo please nooo hopefully its just her being jealous and seeing marina will trigger old feelings for shane. great update love this story
Carmen wants to know abt Shane from someone else for a change. and i guess thats how shez interested in Marina. well its just an assumption but then again with our dear NDF here our assumptions are mostly proved wrong. she cant stop surprising us! but oh well, luv her for that! :D
how can you leave it like that update like noww!!!… shit carmen liking marina..something bad is going to happened, i mean shane’s mental health its really bad soo more drama is going to kill her
Really great update. I’m really interested in the new twist you just pulled. Camen interested in somebody else that Shane and Shane don’t know how to react to that. It’s just great. I have my very own opinion about those reason. But not gonna tell ya. Gonna wait and see if I’m right first. After I’ll tell you cuz I don’t want to infuence your story. And just for the record I don’t care if Carmen and Shane don’t end up together in the long run. I want caracter developpement and I’m served with your story about evélution of caracter. That’s the main reason I loved all this series.
Oh Shit! Talk about spicin’ up or blowin’ up your relationship. Wonder whats gonna happen, w/ these two it could be anything. Great chap as always.
I honestly have no idea what is going to happen in this story, and I love it. This was a great chapter, you manage to be very detailed about a moment but at the same time move the story forward. What Shane was talking about in the beginning of this chapter reminds me of this poem I wrote about the intense fear that comes from the threat of losing someone you love. Excellent job.
I can think of a few reasons why Marina might pique Carmen’s interest, but I would have expected Shane to be jealous about it. Hmm. I’m sure it’ll be explained all in due time. Great update.
very kind of you NDF!Believe me I have missed you too! 5 stars is definitely not enuff for this story can I request for a 6th star? lol this story just keeps getting better! Carmen interested in Marina and Shane not knowing how to react to it? that is totally awesome!! Shane and Carmen on the road with the bike, no marco, john, miriam or a nice suburban life is great to read once again! reminded me of The Line Begins to Blur. they are starting all over again with all the uncertainity around them, im absolutly loving this new journey!! keep it coming!!
HEY! I like this story.