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Save the Last Dance for Me…Epilogue
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Previously….
“Oh Bette.” Tina pulled Bette into her body, hanging on for dear life. “I do want you…I do. I just…I just don’t see how you could be attracted to me with the way my body looks. I mean, you saw me before my body was damaged with scars and flab and leaky breasts. I don’t see how you could still feel lust for me…or desire for me now, when I don’t look the same.”
Bette looked at the woman she thought was the sexiest woman she had ever known with complete disbelief. Abruptly, she untangled herself from Tina, and started to get out of bed.
“Come with me, I want to show you something.”
“What…where are you going?” Tina whispered, not wanting to wake the baby.
Bette reached out her hand for Tina to take. “Please T…I want to show you something.”
Taking Bette’s hand, she allowed her beautiful partner with the perfect body to help her out of bed.
Bette led them over to the full length mirror on the back of the closet door. Opening it, she looked at Tina. “Take off your pajamas.”
“What? No Bette!” Tina was suddenly feeling very self conscious. “I can’t.”
Bette positioned herself behind Tina, and hugged her from the back. Then softly, with reassurance, she said, “T…I need you to trust me. Please…just take off your pajamas.”
Tina stared into Bette’s eyes through the reflection in the mirror, and the love she saw caused her to reach down and lower her pj bottoms to the floor without saying another word. She then lifted up her arms and allowed Bette the take her tank top off.
Once Tina was fully naked, Bette pushed her body even closer to Tina’s, hugging her from behind, allowing every part of her body to meld into Tina that she could. Then, when she knew Tina was waiting for her to make the next move, she started talking in a soft, reverent voice.
“See this body Tina? This is the body I love. This is the body I ache for. This is the body that occupies my dreams at night. See these?” Bette reached around Tina’s waist and placed her palms underneath her breasts, just barely touching the swell. Then she moved her fingers around, circling Tina’s nipples, but not touching them directly. “You have the most beautiful breasts. Look at how they have swelled in size so they can bring nourishment to our daughter…but, also look at how perfect your nipples are, and how they are hardening without me even having to touch them.” Bette stopped moving for a moment and turned her eyes up to see Tina’s in the mirror. “I literally ache to feel your nipples in my mouth again…to feel them becoming hard under the softness of my tongue.”
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this is brilliant – I love everything you do and will read it whatever you call yourself. just don’t call yourself ilene or you might get some hate mail. you are just so good babe
Ha! It is you!! No wonder you were so vague when I tried to guess! You should be proud of this!
Ok…ok…ok…ok…so like now that you’ve “outed” yourself as you say, do NOT, under ANY circumstances, go back IN!!!!!! Seahurst, that was too long to wait for another one of your chapters/stories. Glad to see your work again. And now… please…stay OUT!!!! Goodbye for now and thanks for outing yourself on what is likely not going to be a very pleasant episode night!
What can a person say to this…to your stories?? Thankyou, it’s so wonderful to read what you give to us, we are so lucky to have you and under whatever name you want to write, I’ll take it all!!! Now I know you don’t want to…but honestly you can’t just leave us hanging there…pls just one more 5page chapter..your NC-17 is the best, you don’t have to be so grafic to get the message across and you have proven that once again…wow…
OMFG is right! So glad you’re bringing us this epilogue. Your NC17 is so beautifully written and touching at the same time. You should be proud of it. How you bring forth the emotions! Thanks, Sea.
wonderful, so hot and sexy, something we r missing…..
This was amazing and beautiful. I think you should do more. I so love your writing. I can always picture it and feel it sooo much. You are a wonderful writer and I will read anything you write no matter what name you go by. I’m headed over to read your other one now. Thanks!! Post again soon.
You have brought this story to a touching, hearfelt conclision. Thank you. I loved your other NC-17 story and have read it more than once!
Seahurst, I love anything you write…this is particularly good and I think you do nc-17 very well but its not neccessary if it keeps you from posting!keep writing please. I love our show but am having such a hard time letting Bette and Tina go!
I’m like everyone else here, I would read anything you write no matter what you decide to call yourself, Sybil. And speaking of alter-egos, I read that story back in September and again in January when you re-posted and ‘enjoyed’ both times. Sea, your talent is undeniable. Ever since I read the 1st chapter of’If it’s meant to be,’ I’ve been hooked on Seahurst! We are all lucky to have experienced your talent. Until next time…
If you are not comfortable writing NC-17 then dont. Your do write the most wonderful love stories. You make the person [Bette} that is talk so romanatic. Just spoken words. thanks so much for posting.
Lovely! I love your stories even regardless of a NC-17! They are so romantic and give us hope in finding true love. Thanks again for sharing your talent. BTW- Any new chapter on the horizon for your other story?
Yes I read “Forbidden Pleasures” a few weeks ago and it was a very HOT story! Don’t sell yourself short, you are good with NC-17’s!
This was awesome and really tender. If I had written it I’d definitely claim it. No one has to swing from a chandelier for an NC-17 to be sexy.
Fuck I love this chapter. This is unfuckingbeleivable and awesome, love it. They are so fucking sexy and lovely and the love they is amazing. Thank you!
damn..seahurst. You are fucking brilliant! Thank you for this and we are lucky to have you here to keep B & T the way we want them to be.
Seahurst…..wow! That was truly awe-inspiring. Thanks for a fabulous read.
HOEMYGOD!That was beautiful! …if only .. we could see this portrayed on the L word, Im sure we would have a whole diff tibette right now!
Sea…If only TLW Bette had said this to Tina after they visited the sex therapist maybe this heartache that we are now experiencing would not have occurred. You’re an amazingly gifted writer.
Well if that’s not what I’ve been saying, all along about your writing, then I don’t know what else to say. (Now you see why I am just a reader here, I know with that kind of english writing, I’m sure I’d loose my audience with my opening line.) You’ve got so much talent, the rest of the world is missing out on it. But, know that we, B/T lovers, and lesbian romantics, are forever indebted to you, for allowing us into your world or writing. Just to see Seahurst, as soon as I click onto the stories, it brings a smile and a warmth in my heart. If you are so moved, I’d really like to see how B and T, connect in ‘Hold It Up To Your Ear….’. Or anything for that matter. What can I say, Seahurst, you’re the BOMB!!!
Seahurst, with the avalanche of praise that has accumulated before I had a chance to comment, let me simply say that this was a great concept wonderfully executed. Wish you would consider doing more along these lines. You’re a good enough writer that you should enjoy the challenge as much as we would enjoy the result.
uhm….errr….WOW!!! That’s all I can manage for now. Sea,please write soon….the seashell story??
One word Fantastic.
Now that was a wondrous piece of writing. Suggestive where it should be and explicit where it needed to be. Oh, and did I mention it’s sexy as anything?No need for shame – you’re a good writer under any name and with any rating. Now I’m gonna go check out that other story.Thank you so much for sharing this and all your writing.
Sea, I just heard Michael Buble’s Save the Last Dance For Me on the radio. I just gotta tell ya, whenever I hear that song, I think of this story.
Seahurst, that wsa brilliant…and HOT!!!! I’m going to find the other story and read, thanks for sharing with us.
hottttttttttttttttttttttttt
You are God Damn amazing. off to read the other story.Peace SH.
beautiful and breath takingly lovely==don’t hold back very sensuous-exortic
absolutely great and amazing, just can feel all the emotions coming from them…i think 3 is a good number and you should finish this story with the 3rd chapter with them cuddling together with angelica as one happy family :)
Muy Caliente’! I see a future for you in a related industry ;)C
That’s the kind of heat I need up here in Canada. Just excellent, Seahurst.
One word AMAZING have read all your work and have thoroughly enjoyed it!!!!!
You did it again, I’m gone wake up my wife and…..don’t hold back
It’s not easy to post the NC-17s but there is no shame in your game Seahurst, you did good, damn good.
that was hot babe
Ahhhh…so f*ing beautiful (that goes for you and your story). I’m deeply touched by the love! BnTnSea forever!!
Brilliant short story recognising that Tina not only wants, but NEEDS, Bette, and for Bette to have the compassion to acknowledge that Tina is at a crossroads and giving Tina the space to allow her to make her own decision and believe in them. Great Job.
GULP!!! There is nothing that i can say here that hasnt already been said..My God woman look at those comments!!! and every one very much deserved,It was such a pleasure to read the first part of this story again ,it blew me away the first time….and it still does! Thankyou so much for finishing this off in such a beautiful way! You should be so proud,and im in total awe of your writting ,you may not feel comfortable writting NC17s but Hun you do them sooo well,either way i love anything you write…Thanks for shareing you amazeing talent,…I think i may have to read it again just incase i missed something!!!lol.
this was brilliant and hot thankyou for this you should be proud of yourself
Sea, Sea, Sea…whatever are we to do with you? ~just grins and disappears~
It doesn’t get any better than what you’ve put together here. I love how each of them want to give but are also learning how to be together again. Excellent as always. Thanks so much and please spoil us again soon.
oh my fucking god… is right… thanks. SEA… this was just what i needed to get me started on this day… please keep them cuming…
Wow! Thankyou thankyou thankyou so much for this story. It is such a wonderful piece of writing and the way you let Tina come to some important realisations is really well done. I adored the whole of the first part and then the epilogue was just wonderful. So beautiful and hot – a great combination. Anything you write, whatever rating, seems to be exquisite so write whatever you are moved to – but keep on writing!
You are a goddess with words – with what’s been going on with the show I can’t tell you what it means to a Bette and Tina fan to read such loving connections between them and tenderness and caring and need. thanks for sharing your story and vision and words – you amaze.
You make me feel every emotion that you write about in your stories. You are a wonderful writer and as you can see we all love your stories. Like everyone else I will read whenever you write. Also, I think it is safe for you to come out from hiding under your bed.
Thank you, this was truly amazing, as is everything you write.
Seahurst, what can I say that everyone else hasn’t already said? Pretty much…nothing. I willingly agree with the other posters. You are simply brilliant with spoken/written words. The way you weave words together to form your stories is just wonderful. I am very excited to see another chapter written by you. Saying that you do an excellent job of writing is a vast understatement. By all means, keep it up. Now just one other request… PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, add a chapter or ten to ‘Put It To Your Ear’
That was great! What are you talking about??? You are one of the greatest writers here! I should know… I’ve been reading your stories since “If it was meant to be”. Don’t sell yourself short. Please continue to post and I will definitely continue to read!
Seahurst that was beautiful. Thank you.
Woo! I’m cleaning up the drool from my keyboard…er, actually my friend’s keyboard…think she’ll notice? I’m so glad I checked in (to FF) to see what i’ve been missing…I feel lucky to have found your post–think I ‘ll buy a lotto ticket today! That was fantastic, Sea! Thank you!
I’m utterly speechless!!!!!!! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you – you should be proud off yourself, this is the most beautiful and tender NC-17 I’ve read on this side – thank you :o))
Loved this story and I’ve really enjoyed all the others you’ve written as well. Thanks so much for sharing your talent!
Sea – absolutly beautiful as always. You have my deepest apologies for taking so long to read….almost as long as you paying your debt….oh wait…you still have not done that. I guess I beat you there too….As always, you are true asset to all writing and look forward to many more stories of yours. Love ya always. T
Seahurst you make.readers.have to many emotions…i cant take it in yet because im reading all your stories and if i tell how fucking hot and sexy this was, i know your next story could be a heartbreaking one so im have this reaction to myself on this story *wink* lol Shit!!!!!