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Rocks, Hard places and Rehab Chapter IV, V and VI
Carmen realized how much she changed; Shane’s hair was longer and scruffier. Her eyes where greener or was it because she was wearing eyeliner. She looked good.
Carmen: (smiling) looks like you are thirsty
Shane: actually, I bought it for us, maybe we can……
Carmen: (biting her bottom lip) what about jenny, she isn’t going to pop out of the bushes on me is she?
Shane couldn’t believe what four years can do to someone. Carmen was in the best shape of her life.
She was tanner, toner and her hair softer than ever and longer too, it’s curlier even and lighter. Carmen was relaxing to R&B slow jams that played on the internet radio.
Carmen: want to come in
Shane walked into the foyer of the house
Shane: nice place, so where’s is your girlfriend
Carmen: (giggled) Sloan and I are not a couple, Wait, and if she was
Shane: (setting the wine on the coffee table) nothing, it looks like she takes care of you
Carmen: we take care of each other.
Shane: (taking off her sweater) Oh! Right
Carmen: so what do you want to talk about (sitting on the couch)
Shane: so how have you been?
Carmen: as you can see I have been okay and busy with work of course
Shane: I will say more than okay. (Looking at Carmen she licked her bottom lip) can I say one thing?
Carmen: what?
Shane: I have missed you
Carmen didn’t know what to say, she put her head down as squeezed the bridge of her nose
Carmen: Shane, It has been four years. I don’t think….
Shane: hear me out Carmen please. I have waited a long time for this moment. I really messed up. When I asked you too… (Paused) but then all these feeling came into place after seeing my father and I know I messed up. I….I would sell my soul to have that day with you again.
Carmen poured the wine into that glass.
Carmen: well tell me this, if I never walked into the planet.
Shane: then I would not be here right now. I didn’t come to argue.
Carmen: how did you hook up with jenny?
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(21 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Great story. Shane has a lot of work to do to make things right with Carm. She needs to go ahead and boot Jenny.