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Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 28
Having successfully removed Tina’s shirt, Bette dropped it on the ground but didn’t hear it land. She could hear nothing except the roar of her heart pounding, blood rushing through her body, every possible pulse point in her body thumping so loudly, she thought she was going crazy.
She could not remember a time that she had been this turned on, her body currently responding to Tina in a manner that Bette never would have thought possible.
The word reclaiming kept running through her head, but she knew that it was more than that.
As she looked down at Tina’s bare chest, she saw her full breasts, moving rapidly up and down as they kept time with the rhythm that was being set by her beating heart. She took in the creamy skin, looking at how it rose to meet her perfectly round pink aureoles that were surrounding her pebbly rock hard nipples.
She felt Tina reach up to run her fingers through her hair, lovingly massaging her scalp, patiently awaiting her next move.
Lowering her head, she turned it to the side and rested it down between Tina’s breasts, listening to the sound of her heart beating.
“It’s beating so hard and fast” she whispered.
“Trust me, I know” smiled Tina as she continued to run her fingers through Bette’s hair. “It’s not the only thing beating hard and fast.”
Tina could feel Bette smile against her skin and was aware that she was not surprised at this admission. Both women knew the effect they had on the other and after all of this time apart, knew that effect was only intensified.
Reaching down for the hem of Bette’s shirt, Tina slowly began to pull it up and over Bette’s head. Rising up, Bette stretched out her arms so that Tina could get it all of the way off.
Holding herself up, Bette rested her upper body on her elbows, looking down at Tina. Tina returned the look, dropping her hands to Bette’s back, slowly raking her nails up and down her toned muscles and warm skin.
Moaning at the feel of Tina’s nails against her back, Bette dropped her head and took Tina’s right nipple into her mouth, grasping it first between her lips and then pulling it deeply into her mouth.
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Oh my god skipton…oh my god…that was so hot…My mouth was open the whole time I was reading this…thank you for posting….what a treat. That was so hot.
Yes I was 1st…your #1 fan!
Damn! Whoa! A cigarette wopuld be hanging from my mouth if I smoked them! Can’t move! Thank you, you made my tuesday seem a little less dreary!
See that skip…I can’t even spell!
OMFG…Hot doesn’t even begin to describe that chapter…and we haven’t even seen what’s going to happen to Bette..skipton…wow, that was amazing!!
Oh.My.Gawd….I think I forgot to breath. That was sooooo HOT Skip. Goodness, Tina just got deliciously served.How do you top this one skip? Nearly impossible. The hottest fic I’ve read in a while. Jezuz.
Damn!!!! That was hot, and may I please say about time. Please repeat and PPS!!! Thanks for the post and not having us wait a decade. Thats for the treat.
WOW SKIPTON! THat was unbelievable….whew…that is what I’m talkin’ about….LOL! Unfucking believable…after reading all these chapters that tease the hell out of me…I needed this! PPS.
The best possible way for them to end their evening. Oh wait, it’s not over… Lucky gals!Thanks for posting this so soon.
The ONLY problem I had with that was Tina seeming to not know what Bette was doing between rounds 1 and 2. Surely she could not be that naive! Juicy.
Skip….ok, then! That was great and i’m so glad your back.
ahh…yeah…you’ve drawn this fic out for soooo long…that I forgot who was writing it…meaning I know who you are…but I forgot you’re the one that does 6 months…hot…hot…extremely hot…arousing…and yeah..hot..great job…thanks for the reminder…wow..
WOW..I always look for your name Skip and damn you never disappoint!
Well hot damn. Awesome chapter!
Have you ever noticed the contextual ads that are prompted from the words of the fanfic? Skipton, your epic drew, “Trembling Hand Utensils. Free Gift Makes Life Easier. Excellent Grips”!!!!!
Again I am having trouble breathing. Another hot one Skipton. You are the best.
Well well well – hot as hell!!! ; ) & : 0
hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt longer
Dang Skip…Bette’s not the only one wide awake now!!! Thanks!
Skipton ~ I love this story. I’m so glad that Bette and Tina were able to reconnect. And it was so HOT to boot! Please post again soon.
damn…i am at work…and i am reading this chapter…i won’t finish any goddamn errand today……..(cry)….u did a really good job………..
W.O.W. i’m awake now for sure…shower anyone?
Wow…hot…
Someone better call the fire department because those two are hot! I can hardly imagine how Tina is going to pleasure Bette in return. I am telling you it’s the ocean air! I really love how you can write something so sexy and maintain the intimacy. It’s really quite brilliant.
“Excellent grips!!”
OMG, that was so erotic and hot. Bette sure knows how to take Tina to the highest peaks and slide back down slowly. Now can Tina take Bette to those same peaks and journey back down?
just got home from work and was gonna take a nap, now i think ill go wake up the little woman. thanks for that. it was beautiful.
I’don’t know about Bette, but I’m definitly awake. OMFG
That was hot like fire! Damn Skipton, you never disappoint. I hope you post another chapter real soon.
Damn that was so fucking hot and love it and can’t wait to see more, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
This is wonderful, all of your southern fans continue to be in awe.
Nope, not sleeping. Think I need to take a little walk in the snow…
I thank you!!! That was amazing skip! I can never get enough, so please post soon.
gulp.
Wow Skip! Enjoyed this chapter so much, had to go back and re-read the previous one, so as to come back and have a second helping of this one. Intense! IC – I hope you’re reading.
One of these days I’ll actually get around to reading this story. lol
OMFG!!! That was beyond hot, now let’s have Tina take care of Bette…don’t leave us hanging here too long. While I’m waiting, I’ll just go take a cold shower.
That was fucking hot!!!! And as my mate advised….I better open the window :o))
I can’t seem to concentrate of rehousing those homeless people that I am meant to be doing right now!! Tinslgarsen – get back to work you lazy muppet – if your sick you shouldn’t be reading fan fic!
That’s not nice Jo, abandon a sick friend like that…..I’m very disappointed in you!!!!
Jobadge – how about you play hookie with me?? LOL.
Ok – I’ve just had my wrist slapped for leaving a comment and not actually mentioning you Skip!! That was a very hot chapter mate, and suffice to say its been recommended to be read by a very sick and ill Tinslgarsen, and I think it hit the mark. Who’s Hansen? ;-)
Hansen forget about Jo, she is not worth it, you and I can be new best mates LOL!!!!!
Skipton…that was one hot chapter! Thank you for posting and I sure hope another chapter is coming soon.
WOW!!! JUST OMFG HOT!!!!! Thank you PPS
Holy f*cken shit! That was so hot, I am needing…. Oh my god I can’t type..breathing heavy.Shit I can’t see straight..More
I honestly could not respond last night after reading this chapter. I was speechless (and I had to go and see if my wife was asleep)! You are amazing. Hope life as a new mom is going well and you are getting some sleep!
omg, i just a 26 chapter catch up, amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i have cried, laughed and now doing the happy dance