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Pyromance 5
Pyromance 5
Part two
We kissed and everything was alright. Time kept the world spinning, it kept the birds humming, the guns did their shooting, the cars did their driving nothing changed, and everything was the same…..except for the taste of her mouth. The soft yet sturdy feel of her up against me. Our experiment to see how long we could kiss till we broke away afraid of getting too close, something about fire….something……
By the time we where done kissing just kissing nothing more, the party was over. Over in the sense that people where still milling about but they where looking for rides. We climbed down seeing high from above that the coast was clear. Words not escaping us as we walked looking for a cab.
She flagged one down but she didn’t want to leave. And I didn’t want to leave, so I took a ride with her to the hills, not long 25 minutes. The windows down, some soothing 3 in the morning music. The cabby in his own world and us in the back seat in ours. I leaned back against the crappy leather interior and Carmen leaned her head on my shoulder. Like high school except I took my G.E.D.
Her eyes where something I didn’t really spend a lot of time on. The windows to her soul. The kept me close, the made me feel far. They are brown and dark and if I looked to long it would be my doom….a siren call….something like that……I wanted the world to end right then so I wouldn’t have to say goodbye or think about her doing the things we should have, breakfast in bed…toast….grapefruit for her…..and all the love in the world….
“Tell me about your baby. What happened?” I asked quietly.
“What happened…………I use to party a lot….and I didn’t know I was pregnant…..and I got drunk…..and I fell down these stairs…and after that I stopped feeling for a while.”
“And Bruce?”
“Bruce stopped feeling too……things were not the same…..whatever we had…it was over….we’re still together…….and we’re lonelier……”
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in every sharmen video there is cheri…. i just hate her guts but this on ei like cause its psycho cheri… so shan edosnt want her so thats very good!
That damn psycho Cherie. Shane’s mom always seems to ask the right questions but she never seems to get any answers.
I love how you turned the tables on Cheri…bitch deserves it! I love this fic. I’m waiting anxiously for your next update…C :D
Please don’t take too long in posting an update. I love your story…:)
you rock man. u no what, i visit dis site everyday just to make sure to catch your lastest update! i hope it wont take long til the next update
Hehe, I like the thought of mentally unstable, psycho Cheri, actually. It has a certain appeal to it – if that’s from not having read any/many fics with Cheri as a psycho or whatever, I donno, but I like it. And I like the development between Shane and Carmen; I like their talks; and I lmao when Shane unintentionally yelled at Carmen on the phone. Fantastic update!
I’ve always found Cheri scary…but psycho Cheri?! OMG! I’m scared she may get dangerous for Shane and/or Carmen. That’s ok as long as it all works out in the end. I can’t wait for your next chapter. Keep ’em coming!