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Pretty Women, episode 7
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* * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *
Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *
**************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************
We see a reshot the revealing of the breasts and then we see Tina reveal her blonde hair, taking a lock inbetween her fingers ‘Blonde’. To which Bette responds with ‘Better’. Bette leans in to kiss Tina, but the blonde avoids her lips and carreses the brunettes nipples instead. As Bette brings her face close to Tina’s she hoarsly states ‘I want you’
# the scene fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before
the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina on the bed #
The song ‘Fire’by The pointer sisters starts playing.
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Pretty Women, episode 7
I want you
The words had been said to Tina in many ways, but never like this… The urge to kiss the brunette became harder to suppress every second and the blonde gasped as it was Bette who broke the eyecontact and now focussed on Tina’s breasts… Slowly letting the tip of her tongue svour that dark piece of skin she heard and felt Tina’s response in a moan and a tensing of her body…
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YAYAYAYA Mom has become a NC-17 writer, Like me=)
WOW Amazing please give us more soon
That’s so hot, and so loving. More, we want more, please~ :)
damn!! that was amazingly hot! never enough JLBT
Wow…I may have kissed my computer before…but now I will mount it…lol. That was awesome. We want more…more I say!
‘oh’ lol… now i understand why the sky is breaking here… is ’cause JLBT FINALLY posted a NC-17… :P… i think is ok… but u should practice more… maybe with BOF???? LMAO!!!!! im kidding… well done!!!! i knew u could do it… (now u have one thing less in ur list of things to do before dead :P)
This has to be one of the best chapters I’ve ever read and they said what? Five words or less to each other? Hey I thought you wrote an NC-17 once before? Like a fanfic challenge or something. Maybe I dreamt about that. lol Can we ask for another chapter today or tomorrow? ;)
Ohhh yes – that was amazing. That was hot hot hot :o) – we want so much more of this amazing story. Post soon
Now I need a cold shower. Loving this story.
I can’t believe what I saw…JLBT posted a NC17!!! *thud* lol… You don’t need to run and hide, that was HOT!!!! I always can’t get enough of your stories, so any chance we can get another post soon.. like NOW?! Brilliant chapter, please continue soon!:)
that was hot they were sooooooooooo doing each other, but wrong story lol even this need to b what…… longer
Wow, you should write more of these type of chapters. You bring the story to this point and then bring release to us by their coupling. Can’t wait for more of this story.
Hey as i said i am so sorry for the absence and am just trying to keep up with the readin but if i promise to have the next riders up by this time next week will it at least make up for it a bit? this was as always a great chapter and not only that it was hot too. looking foward to more as these chapters always seem to be to short. thanks for the great post.
How is it that you can write both excrutiating slowburn AND this ridiculous hotness? You continue to surprise me, JLBT.
It’s seems like I have waited for this chapter for a lifetime and how wonderful for it to be perfect. Great joband thank you. (AKA Nichole Kelly)
Girl you’ve been holding out from us..or is it?..huhm. From slow burn to NC burn, a much awaits JLBT production :)
Damn! That was HOT!!
That was hot Both of them are going where they have never been before. and it not lust.Instant love. amazing thanks
finally a NC-17 from you and it was beautiful…much better than the real show :)
I love the way you move back and forth between them surrendering to and fighting with the feelings that the passion is holding. This was beyond hot – it was intimate and real and HOT! This is beyond beyond YOWSA!
Wow! Its amazing that you made that nc-17 hot and beautiful at the sametime without them ever kissing.Congrats on your first nc-17 chapter. PS you can probly come out of hiding now everyone liked it and besides how are you suppose to write when your hiding. lol.Post again soon. =)
wow beautiful! comen comen! wherever you are! you don’t have to hide you! let me have you a big congrats hug! it was amazing one cause beside the physical it was a lot of unexpected feelings it was amazing like Bette said in S2 it was f****ng amazing! well done girl! i didn’t expect less from you!
nc 17 made me smile so big you so made my day babe so freakin much thankya thankya thankya
OMFG, Captain Mom, you CAN write NC-17 scenes!!!! Okay, now, that’s the kind of things we want to see in BOF!!! So now, stop hiding behind the corner, get back here, and stop pretending that BOF’s Tina is afraid to disappoint… Cause we all know that Captai… sorry, ‘Tina’ would never disappoint!!! Seriously, Mom, that was just amazing! What blows me away is that even though it’s your first time (although I agree with Lament’, you wrote something really close to a NC-17 in a challenge story or something…), you managed to write a NC-17 with a huge JLBT print on it!!! What I mean is that it screams JustloveB+T through the whole chapter, it’s simply beautiful! Thanks, and PLEASE repeat this anytime!!! K.
DAMN DAMN DAMN that was so fucking hot and sexy, beautiful, love it. Way to goooo JLBT and hope you will post more of this hot stuff, thanks!. Excellent chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!
OH, thank God its the end of the day and I’m the only one still in the office. Cos, OMG I think I’m gonna die. Damn that was good. I am going outside for a smoke.
OMG, you have written NC-17, I have cooked… Has the world lost it’s mind? :P Poep, I’m gonna have to start studying now… Deja-vu, I know. Ze zouden het eerste blok gewoon boeiender moeten maken, I already know the anatomy and loads about atherosclerosis! Ewwww, I had to watch the gross washing old ppl video btw… O.o I am already traumatized from watching that video, let alone when I will have to actually do it O.o O.o This chapter rocked btw, incredibly moving, tender and yet H-O-T! Keep it up, Capt.! I can’t say ‘mom’ when it’s about an NC-17, that’s just all sorts of wrong :P Talk to you soon!-Nocty
God I love this story so far! your a very talented writer…i don’t know why i didn’t think to do a pretty woman story considering its my favorite movie.damn ya!pps…dont keep us in the dark for long.
That was amazing and I hope you don’t hold out on us in the future. Great chapter and not just because of the NC-17..thanks.
Above anything else, you really touched my heart calling me your friend – and I mean it. I’m proud and honoured to be consider this way by such a marvellous girl like you, and I’d be so happy to deserve this gift anytime you’ll give me the opportunity to share anything with me, as your faithful reader like as a friend. Thank you so much, you just made my day ! ^_^ —– “I think this is nowhere near the wonderfull standard on this site… I can’t even get close to that, but I hope you’ll enjoy reading it anyway, and in the mean time I will blush very fiercely and run to hide as soon as I posted this chapter” : well, well, my dear Lady M ! At first, I think you just must look lovely blushing this way (*wink & grin*), and then, before having read this first NC (… for New Closeness, hmmm ?)-17, I’m already sure of two things : knowing your sensitive nature, there will always be true lovemakings – even if our two are here far to realize that ! – than gratuitous fucks, and then, as I like to think, who cares about standards – and above all what ‘standard’ should mean ? The only rule any author, including all our wonderful fanfic ones here, must follow is to write whatever they want and feel to write, staying true with themselves, following their own natures. Sincerity is the only rule one should always consider – in anything. Now, let me read it and come back to my comment after that ! — (later) — “a perfect balance between flaming desire and sweet tenderness”, “an embrace of open passion and hidden love” : these two quotes of yours are simply perfect to qualify your work here. I was so right guessing it would be this way ! Believe me, that was exactly how I always liked NC-17 (… except for the lack of kisses ! *wink*) : fire, of course, but not forgetting essential sparks of emotions in the journey. — “It was as if Tina’s finger was one of those stones you toss across the sea… That jumps up several times…” : ah, that’s SO my writer’s touch here ! Always the romantic one I like so much ! ^_^ Seriously, it’s hard to believe it was your first NC-17 seing what a perfect musical rhythm you choiced to depict this so-called-professional-act-but-in-fact-unconfessed-true-lovemaking : I pretty got the feeling to be a part of it, following each gesture, enjoying the smooth race of this so revealing encounter. It also gave me an envisioning of you, my talented author, caressing your keyboard’s notes like a pianist, artfully composing this exciting but sweet concerto… Writing, playing music, loving : after all, it’s all about fingers’ gifts, no ? (*grin & wink*) Well, it’s better to stop it now : the cold shower isn’t far, I’m afraid ! — “it was also as if the fingers reached out to her heart and crumbles all the walls she had so carefully put around it…” : great, really, and so right. — “this act of passion was the closest she could ever get to the L-word… But never in her life had the brunette felt so much need to take of her shield, to hand out her soul and say: ‘Here I am, please take me’ and not only in the litteral way… ” : an other wonderful way to express the deep meaning of this entire scene, celebrating so much more than a physical consummation – a mutual emotional awakening and the beginning of the slow realization that the allmighty L-word just found its way in each other’s minds and hearts… — “Both women knew subconciously that their eyes were a strong link in this merging of their bodies, and allthough it scared each of them, none of them wanted to break the strong and yet fragile connection that had formed as a golden necklace between their souls…” : simply beautiful… Truly poetic… — “the two woman rode the wave that had hit them, neither of the having a clue where it would lead…” : only we know it will slowly but inevitably lead to a powerful love story ! As soon as our dearest two will realize it, they could endly put the right title to the fiery but tender symphony of senses and emotions they just lived… ***** You know, my author and friend, never before I commented so long a NC-17 chapter. So that was a ‘first time’ for me too ! (*wink*) All my sincere congratulations for your amazing work, JLBT. Keep it this way ! A big virtual hug from your devoted and grateful reader. *A*
Welcome to the NC-17 writer world ;) hahaha… have you came out from anywhere that you hide? LOL… you’re so cute you know that? And wow… that’s hot… yea… I’m melting again… Well, today was really a long day… reached home at 11pm :S gosh… and thanks for liking my story… I definitely am hooked and LOVE your stories :D Hugs…
I need a cigarette now. LOL j/k, I also thought that you already had written NC-17 chapters, I liked this one, your narrations on the beginning of a friendship are sweet and sexy but this was different bc they barely know each other… I might not explaining myself very well but I wanted to say that it was a great update. LOL
Wow M – I’m even more in awe by your writing now than before this wonderful, hot and very beautiful NC-17….I totally loved it :o)) You’re surely and slowly killing me here, but what a wonderful way to go LOL. More please….
WOW, that was well written!! Keep it comming ;)
Excellent job!
I won’t curse this time, I’ll keep it inside. WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!!, even after reading all those great comments from the women before me, my heart is still pounding, my mouth is still dry and I’m very wet at some particular places…well, you know what I mean, I suppose. It definitely was one of the most beautiful chapters I’ve ever read on this board. Thanks so much. Sorry voor mijn late comments maar ik ben met vakantie geweest en probeer nu alle fanfics in te halen die ik hebt gemist. Ik heb ook mijn comments geplaatst bij het vorige hoofdstuk. JLB+T, jij hebt echt de gave om met woorden intense gevoelens uit te drukken zonder de personages ellenlange gesprekken te laten voelen. Ik vind dat ongelooflijk straf, proficiat. Ik wil je er nogmaals aan herinneren om te proberen Therese_Belivet tot schrijven te bewegen, die comments zijn verhalen op zich. Ik hoop dat je snel de tijd vind om een volgende hoofdstuk te plaatsen, I’m really addicte you know.