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    Pretty Women, episode 14A

    Story written on August 19, 2007 by justloveB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=66614
    Author Notes:

    ‘Despite herself Tina felt the warmth spread again, like a carefully thrown stone that evoked circles of liquid in a lake… Conquering organ after organ untill the feeling swallowed her whole… She cherished it and she feared it, but couldn’t fight it…’ A TiBette story based on the movie ‘Pretty Woman’

    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

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      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot of Tina in Dana’s office, where she is being questioned, and tells the manager she is Bette’s ‘Niece’. We see Dana on the phone, as Tina is rather upset, requesting for Carmen. A quick change of scene shows us Bette, telling her coworkers how to deal with Peggy Peabody’s sudden break by contacting senator Grisham, and we go back to Carmen, who’s walking beside Tina: ‘Carm, she’s not really my aunt.’ ‘They never are’

     

     

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before the camera turns and we see an elegantly mancured hand, beside a cocktail glass… The owner of the hand seems somewhat nervous, for we see fidgeting, before she reaches out one slender finger to meet the top of the glass, absentmindedly following the shape of it… #

     

    The song: Right here waiting by Richard Marx starts playing

     

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    2. yes i am the first!!! ;) i don’t remember been the first in comment but now i am and as always is a pleasure read your lovely story, you know how much i like it! thanks so much, so so so much… and i won’t forget ever!

    4. Ohhh good you do know how to write a excellent story all over :O) – just catching again….love it and do give us more – the best is jet to come (smiling)

    5. as soon as i saw this chapter i began singing: Pretty woman, walking down the street….LOL and i can’t stop…wonderful chapter and i’m going to Blackpool as well

    7. JUSTICE was undoubtedly served!!!! Another chap so soon was such a wonderful suprise. U did a wonderful job!!! The scene, thoughts, and reactions were brillant!!

    8. i LOVED THIS PART OF THE MOVIE.”THEN STOP CALLING ME THEN”. THE TEASING So different from the strict business woman. I just love the movie. One of the best that J. Roberts played in. I’m feeling great got about 8 mos and I;ll should be fine.{I hope} thanks for posting and take care of you my friend.

    9. gogk…you crack me up my friend! OK JLBT, this is so good! I love this movie and your version of it really does improve on a classic because..well..it’s Bette and Tina! My ceiling is coming along as well as your studies on the skin I’d imagine! LOL! Miss ya Hun..we’ll talk soon!

    10. Excellent chapter once again. I also wish you could just stay home and write, write, write… what a treat that would be. I love the mental image you provide in setting each scene. The dialogue and the emotion is just spot on. The “stop calling me” scene is my favorite of the movie and your description of Bette standing at the desk was just perfect. Always look forward to your updates. Good luck with the internship…can’t imagine dermatology being my thing either.

    12. Were you talking about the same story? You rock pal! Loved loved the update and everyone else feels the same! The last part was like “oh” I’m all dreamy now! LOL. My brother is a doctor, man, couldn’t have become one, not my thing, but you keep going, you’re on the right path.

    15. The eyes give it away. Both Bette and Tina can not control their eyes and their mind. They have that look of love oozing from their pors. Thank you for taking time out of your busy life to post this chapter.

    18. Hey friend… am still waiting for your post… but looks like your internship really got the best of you. Anyway, post soon when you can… but of course you yourself must take time off for yourself too ;) take care!!

    20. oh… me???? thanks for the shout out :)anddddddddd im going to L3 too!!!! yes i am… but my roommates have forbidden me to bring girls to the room… sorry for disappoint u!!! LMAO im kidding! im kidding!!

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