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Part II: The Party (Alice & Dana)
Lara is cooking something in the kitchen, Dana enters and greets her.
Dana: Hey, that smells good, you ready for tonight?
Lara: (looking up smiling) Hey Dane, uum…yeah are you sure you wanna come with me? I mean you’ll miss everything here, an-
Dana: (cutting her off) What?! Of course I want to come..don’t you want me to..?
Lara walking over to her and kissed her softly and gave her a hug.
Lara: Yes, of course I do…(breaks of from the hug)It’s just that…
Dana looking at her with woriness in her ayes.
Dana: What? It’s just what..?
Lara: It’s just that..don’t you think that…
Dana: Is this about Alice?
Lara: (suddenly looking happy) You know what, don’t worry about it. (turns back and busy’s herself with her cooking)
Dana: No Lara, it’s okay..
Lara: (looks at her) No! It’s not Dana…she still loves you, can’t you see that?
Dana: I know, I know that she’s hurt..but she can’t have everything that she wants..besides I love YOU..okay? (hugs her)
Lara standing there but eventually hugs her back, smelling her fragrant hair.
Lara: …okay..
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Alice lying down on her bed, staring at a picture of her and Dana.
Alice: I loved you..how could you do this to me..(tears well up at her eyes)***** you (crying) ***** you, ***** you..
{knock on the door}
Alice stands up wiping the tears off her eyes.
Alice: (sniffs) Who is it?
Shane: It’s me Al, open up.
Alice walked to the door and opened it.
Alice: Um..hello..what are you doing here?
Shane bust through and came in.
Alice: Okay sure come in.
Shane: I thought I could come see if your alright.
Alice: Um yea I’m fine.
Shane: Do you have plans tonight, I mean if you don’t you could come with me and Carmen.
Alice: Don’t you already have plans tonight?
Shane: Uh..no..
Alice: Lara’s party?
Shane: Oh yea..no big deal..she’s inviting other friends and I thought your not doing anything.
Alice: Look Shane it’s fine..go okay coz I um..I’m already going somewhere.
Shane: (looking confused) What? Oh okay then…I’ll come with you.
Alice: No Shane its fine (pushing her outside) go have fun..
Shane standing outside already.
Shane: Okay but just call if you need me okay?
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def sad but plz continue!
Okay,even though I’ve always wanted Dana with Lara I do feel sad for Alice. I like this story! Please post soon! :)
That´s kinda mean of Dana to say that she doesn’t love Al anymore, I don’t think she would do that…. I feel bad for Alice :-(… I like your story, plz post more
hmmm… so sad for Alice
great story but poor alice that is just not fairand I think that alice and dana make a great pair so please post soon
I’m so sorry for making her so mean in the story but dont worry she’ll change in a couple of chapters. thanks for reading!
aww thats sad…did i miss the part of why they broke up in the first place…ill look and see but that was a really good chapter