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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 14
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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 14
Chapter 14: Let’s just say, we’re back into the future…for now (Alice is trying to explain things to Tina and Bette is trying to figure out if she’s dreaming)
(Previously) The time was getting closer to midnight and the church bell in the distance began tolling, announcing the time. Alicia pushed Elizabeth between two oak trees when the bell struck nine and looked around to be sure that their pursuers weren’t close enough to see them and follow them. When she was satisfied that they were alone, she quickly jumped between the trees after Elizabeth.
As soon as the bell chimed twelve, the lonely owl that was sitting on the oak branch was the only witness to a quick bright flash that lasted only a second or two and was barely visible to the human eye…
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Tina was still deciding if she should conduct her little scientific experiment to prove she wasn’t crazy when she heard more noises coming out of the closet. Tina lifted her head in slow motion and watched the scene in front of her as if it was some kind of a dream sequence.
She heard vaguely familiar voice cursing from the inside, “How many times do I have to come out of the fucking closet.”
The voice was muffled by something and Tina couldn’t quite place it yet. She saw another woman coming out of the closet, dressed in a white apron laced over the edges, with a ridiculous bonnet on her disheveled head. The second stranger continued cursing as she removed the bonnet and tried to strengthen her apron. Tina slowly rose off the floor when she saw messy blond hair and the familiar face of a friend she hadn’t seen in three months.
Finally, all the emotions and confusion caught up with her. Tina managed to say, “Alice, what the…” before collapsing unconscious at Elizabeth’s side.
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Place: Orange County, CA – the Porter mansion
Year: 2005
Alice was standing over the unconscious bodies of her two friends, mumbling to herself quietly while taking off her apron and throwing it on the floor where she dropped her ridiculous bonnet.
“I can actually use that apron and bonnet for some role play with Dana later, like a Lady of the house and her maid…oh, yes, it’s gonna be seeeexyyyyy…fuck, what am I doing? Focus, Alice, focus, how can I explain all of this to Bette and Tina? Fuck, fuck, fuck…I didn’t mean for that to happen. What am I going to do with Bette when she wakes up from this blackout? She already went through such a shock last night after seeing Christina being killed…fuck, what happened there? Who were those men?”
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“… And where in the name of Almighty is my chamber pot?”… LMAO!!!! Priceless!!! I can totally picture Bette saying something like that, hands on her hips, and screaming to the whole house that she “needs” her chamber pot! Very funny indeed… The whole scene was priceless, and I can’t wait for Bette to find out more about the 21st century’s modernities… Hopefully Tina will be there to guide her… Very intriguing indeed. I can’t wait to hear the whole story. It’s gonna be a challenge for Bette to adjust to this new world (without Christina, but Oooo, hellooo Tina!). Thanks for the update! K ;)
B&TF I love the way you describe Bette’s wonder at all the things we have come to take for granted. LMAO at her reactions. Well written and can’t wait for the next one!
Where’s Page 6? :D I love it, alway enjoy reading this story. Please post soon!
OMG ! This was hilarious, B&TF. I certainly wasn’t expecting this. I particularly enjoyed these bits : ” Leonard Kroll… the ‘Top Five’ on my list of American scientists, the…never mind “” No wonder I’m all restless and sweating like a carpenter. ” “…where in the name of Almighty is my chamber pot? “. Hahaha ! Priceless I’m telling you ! I’m going to have to add ” screamingly funny ” to the list of superlatives that I had for your story until now. Can’t wait for more !!
What an incredible mixture of pathos and humor! Am I a bad person because I can feel Bette’s pain and STILL snicker at her bathroom experiences? Guess I am. Must now go outside and kick some puppies.
Okay, I think that I got it. Alice has been gone for three months and that is about the time that Alicia showed up in Elizabeth’s life. The flash of light was Alice/Alicia entering the new time period towing a heart broken Elizabeth who had just watched the love of her life shot to death. Now, how does the past Christian Kennard and the present Christina Kennard come to be about?
Poor Bette, but Tina and Alice is there for her. Alice is funny and crazy too lol!!!
I loved this story the first time, and its just as wonderful this time around.
poor bette… she must be so terrified and confused… but i am glad that you didnt make it a dream for tina and that they actually did meet again…
I don’t think I picked up on the ‘fuzzy wuzzy’ blue slippers the first time, LOL! Bette discovering electricity an the ‘royal’ toilet was a hoot!!! I like the substitution made with Leonard Kroll, totally worked! Wonderful update per usual!!!
This is fantastic! Thanks for walking us through the emotions someone would feel discovering a toilet and sink for the first time. That was fun!
So glad I decided to read this!