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No Turning Back ~chapter 14~
Carmen had to admit that Laura at least picked out some nice and handsome guys this time. Tobey was tall and slender, with blonde hair that tickled his shoulders when he walked and bright blue eyes. He was a little shy which made things easier for Carmen, because she knew that she didnt have to be afraid that he was going to be pushy or something like that. Laura and Diego were still dancing close to each other and Carmen was exhausted so she took a seat at the bar and Tobey soon joined her.
Its so fucking hot in here, Tobey said, as he wiped his forehead with the back of his hand. Carmen agreed and took a sip from her beer. Your sister is kinda wild isnt she? Tobey asked as he pointed at Laura and Diego, who were now dancing even closer than before. Carmen chuckled and shook her head. Yeah, she is, she said smiling. Hey, you wanna go outside for awhile? Tobey asked, looking at her expectantly. Carmen bit her lip in hesitation. Just for some fresh air.. Im not trying to make a move at you or something, because I know this date thing wasnt your idea but.. I dont know, if you dont want to its okay.. Tobey stumbled nervously. Carmen felt sorry for him and nodded her head. Yeah, no.. fresh air sounds good, she said.
A few moments later they were sitting on a bench in front of the club, watching the people who were passing by. You want one? Tobey asked as he took a pack of cigarettes out of his pocket. Is that your idea of fresh air? Carmen asked chuckling. Tobey laughed and lit his cigarette. Carmen took one as well and he lit hers. So, Laura told me youre from L.A. as well, Carmen said to fill up the growing silence.
Yeah.. Ive been here to college for two years, so Im here to visit some old friends, he said.
Cool.
If you say so. Its good to be back I guess yeah, L.A. drove me crazy.
Carmen arched her brow. Why?
Bad break-up. My girlfriend.., well my ex-girlfriend, I caught her cheating on me with one of my bests friends,
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yey for really long updates like this one. haha it was a great chapter. I really liked it and I am glad to hear that Carmen is going home early to see Shane. I wonder how much drama is going to come into play if any soon. either way i love the story and cant wait for the next update.
I really love this story it always makes my day when theres a update and it helps me not to think about how bad the show end this season so thank you and update soon plz *love sharmen 4 ever*
I don’t know if I’ve left fedback for this fic before, but great fic! :D I’ve reading it since you started posting it. And you finally updated, coolness! :D It’s especially nice after TLW season finale. Onto the feedback: I’m curious about how Julian found out about Carmen and Lucia. o.0 Hmmm.I hope Carmen doesn’t get in trouble with Shane if Shane finds out about Carmen’s little date, or if Shane were to see the picture… And yay! Soon Carmen will be back with Shane! WOOT! Hope you update again soon. :)
I’m really enjoying this story…I can’t wait to see Carmen surprise Shane…Please continue with your story…Thanks!
Love your story. Julian wanting to leave early to play his X-box, too funny. My breath stopped when Shane said she was kissing some girl, glad she was kidding. Carmen should never have taken thase pictures w/ that guy, trouble ahead. Post soon.
Oh oh oh…..don´t dare you to let Shane cheat on Carmen, don´t do that please!!
Great Story…it was more than great!!! Plz update soon!! (if u ask me i can read this story all day long :))
God! I love this story, you have to update soon :D Great work!