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Mesmerized part 9
Alice
Three days later I was in my apartment, packing my suitcase. I was so excited and so happy that Dana had asked me to be with her in London. I didn’t know what I would have coped without her for a day, let alone two weeks.
“Ooo Al, you should take this top, and put it with this skirt. You would look great in this when you’re watching me play.” Dana’s head was currently in my wardrobe, picking out clothes for me to pack.
I walked over and put my arms around her waist, and she span around to face me, putting her arms around my waist too. “What makes you think I’ll come and watch?” I gave her a cheeky grin.
“I know you will, I want to show you off.” Dana stuck her tongue out at me and gave me that goofy smile that I love so much. “Although I can’t be distracted, maybe you shouldn’t come” Dana joked.
“I wouldn’t miss it for the world, I’m gonna be supporting you all the way” I kissed Dana softly on the lips. “Although if that Maria Sharapova is playing then you’ve really got competition, she’s hot!”
Dana punched my arm playfully. “No way, you’re there for me…and me only”
“You’re right, of course it’s only you. Oooo can I get one of those foam hands? Or maybe I should make a banner?” Dana grinned and kissed me.
Just then, the doorbell rang. “Oh shit, that will be Shane” I panicked, Shane was driving us to the airport and I hadn’t finished packing.
“No worries, I’ll let her in, just shove some things in, we can always shop for more in London” Dana gave me a peck on the cheek and released her hold of me to go and get the door.
“I like your thinking” I said as she walked out of the door. I hurriedly found a few more items of clothing and shoved them in my suitcase, before zipping it up and dragging it out into the hallway, placing it next to Dana’s case that we had packed earlier.
I walked through into my living room to find Shane and Dana sitting on the couch, talking about London. Shane was listing the best bars to go to, as she had been there a couple of times before and this was mine and Dana’s first time to the city.
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I’m flying later this month, I highly doubt I’ll have that much fun though! You’re def getting better with each post and this was hot aswell as funny, I can relate to Dana’s wobbling, I’m clutsy too :( Anyway great chap PPS
So, our girls have joined the ‘mile high club’ .. lucky so and so’s. Great chapter, more please!!
Awesome chapter! oh how cool it would be to be in the mile high club.. expecially with leisha! :)
Dang. Hotness. Brain on hotness overload.
I went on a plane yesterday, but unfortunately I didn’t get that lucky. ;) And good to know you have lots of ideas for these two! I will be waiting for the next chapter patiently. :D
They get to have all the fun. lol
I agree with De_Leish this was the best chapter yet! You should have more confidence in your writing – pleeeease post soon? please? ;)