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Mesmerized part 6
Dana
It had been the most intense orgasm I had ever had; no one had ever made me feel that way. It took me a good couple of minutes to recover, trying to take deep and steady breaths.
Alice’s head lay in my chest as I regained myself. Once my breathing was nearly back to normal Alice looked up at me and smiled.
“Oh my God Alice, that was….” I could not think of a word that could sum up the pure pleasure and ecstasy I had just experienced. “Wow”.
Alice grinned again and reached up to kiss me. Now I wanted her to experience what I had just experienced. In one quick motion I rolled us over so that I was now on top of her. I kissed her eagerly on the lips and then focused my kisses further down, on her neck and then her perfectly formed shoulder blades. I could not resist poking my tongue out and licking her flawless skin, which was becoming increasingly sweaty.
My tongue travelled down my lover’s smooth flat stomach and finally reached her pussy, glistening wet and ready for me. The moment my mouth came into contact with her swollen clit Alice bucked her hips into my face and she let out a low moan. I felt her place her hands on the back of my head, pushing me further inside.
“Uhh…fuck” I knew then that I had found the spot I was searching for. I swirled my tongue in circles around this area, concentrating on pleasing my aroused lover, and she let out more and more cries and groans.
“Dana…Dana…DANA” Alice let out one last loud cry of my name and her hips rose off the bed and stayed there as she came. Her body then relaxed and her lower body fell back on to the mattress heavily, bouncing up again slightly on the springs before lying there completely still. I rolled over to lie next to her, so that we were both staring at the ceiling, our chests rising and lowering rapidly as we caught our breath.
“Jesus fucking Christ Dane why didn’t you tell me you could do that before?!” Alice chuckled.
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(24 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
Damn…now that’s a hell of a first time. Or four. And the fire thing was cute, although it’s good Dana was there or Alice would have burned the apartment down. I heart this story, you’re doing great!
Love the story – you have a great balance of passion and humour – keep it up – look forward to more soon.
Alice burned down the house! lol I can completely see that happening.
great update. i like how you end one and start at that same moment with the other. that fully encompassed being super hot and super cute at the same time.
I can only agree with all the comments, sweet and hot, I’m really enjoying how you are portraying these two, very thoughtful and just damn good fanfic. Please post soon!
Okay, scratch sweet and replace it with hot – damn I knew Dana would be good in bed ;) Your story still manages to retain the cuteness of their relationship even when they are gettin’ down :) great stuff!
Haha I set my pan on fire the other night, true story! Except I was cooking steaks, how I got an A in cooking is beyond me. Anyway, cute post, I luv happy fluffy danish so please continue.
Sexy, hot, sweet, cute along with alot of other words I could use to describe this chapter…..loving this story. BTW I aint allowed near the kitchen for the exact same reason, nor can I multi task. hehe, keep it up and PPS
I’m just saying Alice would have been fine with the pancaskes if Dana wasn’t so damn good. HA! Anyway totally enjoying this and appreciate the balance between their sweetness and hotness…expecially now that they should be in the “can’t keep their hands off each other” phase. LOL. PPS