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Meet Me In Montauk; #09
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“I’m really glad you’re here,” she said to me, giving me a small smile before she walked out of the room.
I sat down onto my bed, admiring how the afternoon sun reflected on the face of the ocean. I lay down onto the bed and closed my eyes, and before I knew it, I had drifted off into a deep slumber.
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I didn’t know how long I was asleep, but when I finally opened my eyes again, the entire room was dark, lit dimly by the light from the corridor. I turned to flick on the bedside lamp as I sat up, pulling my hair back into a ponytail.
I was distracted by the smell of food wafting into my room; I took at look at the clock.
“Damnit,” I exclaimed when I realized it was nearing nine.
I opened my bag and grabbed a set of fresh clothes and a towel. I wanted to at least have a quick shower before I was face-to-face with Bette again.
She had apparently brought the toiletries because I saw bottles of Body Shop products lined up along the side of the bathtub. I picked them up one bottle at a time to read the labels.
Vanilla Spice Shower Gel.
Passion Fruit Shower Gel.
Olive Glossing Shampoo.
Olive Glossing Conditioner.
I opened up the cap of one of the bottles, taking a whiff of the soap’s sweet scent. I smiled, wondering if that was what she smelled like. Shaking myself out of my day-dream, I locked the door behind me before I undressed and stepped into the shower.
The warm water felt comforting on my skin. Although I was sure she couldn’t see me, I was vaguely aware of Bette’s presence in the house and my nudity, despite being behind closed doors, made me feel a little vulnerable.
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Bette
I heard the water running in the shower as I prepared a light dinner for the both of us. I knew she was exhausted from her flight, so I decided to let her sleep.
I walked down to the supermarket to pick up some ingredients for dinner. I planned to make a simple Caesar salad, tomato soup and grilled cheese sandwiches; nothing to complicated.
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I am with kena on this one, even though I know it’s just fanfic I don’tlike lying and cheating either. I really hope nothing happens between them until they have sorted out their relationship with their significant others. I really do love Bette and Helena together and I truly hope they will find a way to be together but I also hope they will get a clean start without lies and cheating, that way they don’t have to feel guilty about anything. Thanks for posting sweetie and I hope you’ll post another one soon :)
I just love Rachael Shelley,she has the most beautiful eyes. When she says “Darling”.I melt. Both are in deep trouble.
E you are indeed good at keeping us hanging,,LOL! I really enjoyed how both women found out that they had a connection that was too strong for them both…..they were missing something big in each others lives when it came to thier partners, it was each other! This reminds me of the movie Nights in Radanthe with Diane Lane and Richard Gere very nice movie! great chapter E
Ok Ok and you talk about me about me leaving at the wrong part huh? Well just to say that was nothing short of amazing, im wondering what happens now do they just lay next to each other or share something more?So Montauk does this hold something particular in your life?Because ive never been there myself does this house really exist i wonder.Yes i am satisfied that there was no emails, will this continue because they still have a life to go back to.But im happy for now to just follow the trail and see where this journey takes them.Oh by the way big shout out to you for our little offer hehe.Good job as always cant wait 4 more.Love Always Loyal Reader Caramel.x
So I have at least one more day until I will ceremoniously die a thousand deaths….*dramatic sigh…a welling of tears*…lol! I have to admit that the mood and the feel of this was quite lovely…like I could feel the gentle breeze…soliciting an illicit freedom in their moments together… We know it is a done deal though because there is no way that persistent and persuasive Bette will refuse Helena….famous last thought: “…knowing well that this would be the last night we would spend one door away from each other….” ….ummm hmmm…lol! Thank you for having them talk about their partners. It is helpful to be reminded that the Tina and Tasha in the ff are quite different than the ones on the small screen…maybe it won’t hurt so baddddd! lol!! Btw, I was referring to Candace, the plumber…errr…umm carpenter…lol! I’m thinking Bette and Tina hadn’t gone through the infidelity previously in this fanfic as they had in the small screen version. As much as I rant, I soooo have continued to enjoy your storytelling! PPS!!!
your right euni, I’m still in the corner, just so you know. Not really in a place in my life right now were I would be able to comment though. Thank you, Md
These two horn dogs are going to go for it. Why travel around the world. 3 days, 2 nights. This is their last night together. Yup they are going for it.
I would! :) Pick me!
Me too. I would be in her room before she finished talking. Damn, Euni, you are cruel, CRUEL I tell ya, with your leaving off at crucial moments!!! I have a feeling Bette is not going to say no, but I like that she wasn’t pushing for sex as soon as they arrived and wasn’t the one to initiate it. I love this story and what I wish I could get for Christmas is alot of chapters of this story, all together, I would love it! I wonder what it would be like if Tina and Tash were together. Tina wouldn’t be around to be the adult in the relationship so nothing would ever get done, and Tash wouldn’t care that Tina was never around cos she lives in her own child world anyway..sorry baby, love ya baby..etc…I think this says a lot for all the responsibility Bette and Helena had for keeping things going with them. I think they find much greater support in each other than they have with the others. PLEEEEASE post again soon!!!
Damn! You just had to do it didn’t you? You are such a bad girl. By the way excellent update.
you had me at hello…damnnnn that was so good…loved reading both their perspectives!!! Awesome… No need for coffee, I am wide awake…whew…thank you…now get back to writing!!! Cheers
No comment just *deep sigh*
I do have a comment. Even if I didn’t love Tasha as much as I do, I would still have a problem with this Bette and Helena thing, due to all the lies and cheating. I just have a strong dislike for cheating, I think a person should have enough respect for their spouses to at the least break it off with them before the go on to another person. I don’t care how strong of “connection” you have with someone, I would rather you break up with me or say we need some time apart or something than to find out you cheated…but thats just me
lksdjf;lkasdj;slkafdj;lkadsjfkas;j…You.Are.Going.To.Break.My.Heart….I.Just.Know.It. **Pouting** **Folding Arms in Front of Chest** **Turning Back to You** **Pfffft** POOP!