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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(12)
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Previously…
Tina dropped her spent body on Bette’s, with eyes still closed a smile graced their faces as both felt the unbelievable speed of their beating hearts. Slowly their bodies settled down and their breathing became normal, Bette opened her eyes which were now clouded with tears. Tina lifted off her body from Bette’s to look at her but got worried when she saw the tears on her eyes
"Bette what’s wrong?" Tina said while caressing the brunette’s cheek, Bette wiped her tears then gave the blonde a dazzling smile
"No nothing’s wrong… I’m just really overwhelmed right now by everything… that was absolutely amazing Tina… I never thought that it was that incredible…" Bette said as she returned the loving stare of the most beautiful pair of hazel eyes that she had ever seen.
Chapter Twelve
Slowly her eyes opened and the first thing that she saw was the face of an angel that brought an automatic smile on her face. The memory of the passionate union that happened between the two of them a few hours ago was flashing back to her which made her heart race fast. She had always thought how her first time would be like but she never imagined that it would be that incredible. She looked at the blonde’s sleeping form her body barely covered by a crisp white blanket, she was comfortably lying on her stomach, her unruly locks spread wildly on the pillow with her arms folded beneath it and her legs draped over Bette’s.
The brunette’s heart melted when she felt the sleeping blonde’s hand reached for her and caressed her face
"Hmmm Bette…"
Hearing Tina’s soft voice saying her name in her sleep was sending chills down her spine. Her heart that was already racing fast was now pounding hard as she studied every inch and fiber of the stunning woman next to her.
‘Was it just a dream?’ with her eyes still closed the blonde asked herself, afraid that the moment she opened her eyes that she would found herself lying alone on her bed. She smiled when she felt a hand gently caressing her back.
"Hmmm…" Tina moaned when the brunette started kissing the small of her back.
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Great chapter. Sort of expected that reaction from Bette and had hoped that it wouldn’t happen like that. I suppose Bette is questioning herself regarding Tina and her feelings for the other teacher that she thinks she loves. May not happen but, I hope that Bette finds that she does have feelings for Tina and could not get her out of her mind while she was gone. Question: how did Bette leave Tina that morning when they were in Tina’s car to begin with. Did she walk all the way back to her home? thanks.
Wow Bette Porter, The 30 Year Old Douche Bag. Tina’s better off without her. Please let Tina move on and Bette can have the substitute teacher, Sarah or whatever her name is. Thanks for the awesome update. My vote is for them not to be together, sorry I’m not a tibetter here
Missed this story!!! I wondered will we see a chapter of ” never let you go”
Phacey don’t encourage me because I can get carried away with these comments but I do appreciate that you took them in the way I intended. This will be a long one also but I will break it up into two separate comments. First to address your Author’s Note … As for your English and the way you write the characters and emotions I think you are doing a great job. I don’t think anything is lost in the translation. I saw Tina as deceitful but maybe duplicitous is a better description. I get that from her words and actions not the way you write. Reading the journal was bad enough but she read it 3X (studying it because this is beyond mere curiosity) then she put her ‘plan in motion’ not only to find out who the ‘beautiful brunette’ was that she met at the club but also to keep Sarah from getting her ‘claws’ into her. She interrupted their coffee date with that made up excuse about the files, and lied about wanting to learn French to get close to Bette and to move Sarah out of the picture. After her confession to Bette about reading the journal she picked on Bette’s vulnerabilities to get her into bed with her ‘indecent proposal’. All that speaks to deliberate manipulation and self gratification but now she is finding that there are consequences to beating out the competition and getting to Bette first.
Okay I agree with ur AN it’s not gonna be an epiphany where Bette instantly feels like Tina is her first last and forever, but u can’t realistically tell me that she doesn’t love Tina or that she still wants to be with Sarah. Maybe it’ll take her some time but it doesn’t make any sense for a virgin of 30 years to treat her first time like a booty call sorry but it’s the truth
I don’t doubt that Tina has ‘feelings’ but her motivation was being the first to have sex with Bette and she was willing to whore herself to do it. Now ‘the morning after’ she’s faced with the consequences of her selfish actions and she can’t handle it. If she treats Bette badly or makes her life a living hell when she gets back from holiday then it will just prove my point and I will have less respect for her. Tina has no justification in acting like Bette owes her the time of day. She’s not her girlfriend, or the woman she’s dating, or even her friend. They are two women that were attracted to each other and agreed to have sex. It was a transaction: “I’m just a girl who want to get rid of this stupid virginity and you happen to be the person available to achieve that goal” – Bette says this to Tina in the car on the way to their ‘date’. The fact that they are co-workers now complicates matters and Tina could make Bette’s work life miserable should she wish to unleash the wrath of Tina Kennard. I just hope that poor Sarah isn’t caught in the crossfires. Hopefully Alice and Shane are true blue friends that will stick by Bette if this should happen. If Tina feels rejected or like she’s been used then she has only herself to blame for that because Bette made no promises. If Tina fell in ‘love’ that’s not Bette’s problem and it’s not a given that Bette should reciprocate just because Tina showed her a good time. Granted Bette could have handled the departure in a different way but if Tina learned anything from reading the journal and spending time with Bette she would know that leaving in the way she did was probably the only way Bette knew to handle such an awkward situation. Bette is not only inexperienced in sex she also has no experience with relationships or lovers. I’m sure Bette’s not oblivious to the fact that Tina has feelings for her (she told her not to fall in love) but Bette might be looking for something in a long-term relationship that Tina doesn’t offer. Perhaps she can find it with someone else (Sarah) given the chance to explore. I don’t think she should be tied down to Tina just because she was her first. I hope the trip to Paris was a planned celebration for Bette and not an ‘impromptu escape’ from an uncomfortable situation. Bette’s finding herself and Tina needs to give her the space and freedom to grow into the woman she wants to be without repercussions; don’t make Bette out to be the bad guy and Tina the martyr.
2 weeks later… well you all know i am a TIBETTER… but this bette needs a good kick in the ASS… like i said in an earlier comment… i didn’t like the idear of tina offering bette sex… just to be her first…tina was way in over her head way beofre she said that to bette… what i can’t understand is that bette has been lusting over sarah for what… 2 years… and nothing came from that… bette move on… its time… and lets hope tina can move on, this bette doesn’t deserve tina… (sorry for the delay in my comment, i live in New York, and we just got our electris back… 4 days with no power, it was a bitch)… lets see where you take this story…
Thats hot and hope they can talk and work thing out!
thanks for the post that was amazing lllllooooovvveeee the story post soon!!!!
I hope Bette had fun in Paris. Tina’s just going to have to get to know Bette the old-fashioned way if she wants to be in her life. No shortcuts through reading a journal. Nothing wrong with wooing someone you want to be with. The only thing is, she’s got competition in the form of Sarah… and who knows what Miss Porter’s been up to in France? ;) Thanks for the post! :)
Thanks for the update.
Great update. Thank you.
Drama ahead.Thank you for the update.PPS
Omg! How come Bette is such an @$$!! Never thought their first time ended that ugly! Well maybe ok since the thank you note is written with so much effort and pain and decorated with some bed of roses..: *rolling eyes* Nice update btw phacey! Thanks! ;-)
You can’t just leave it there. Oooohhhhh, I know you are gonna surprise us with another update today.
No I thanked you for writing this. I know it’s so hard to write, let alone give your readers a “life” like scene. And above that, not to come out like a run in a mill. ..It’s not likely for us to read a story like yours and Kins40. .. I’m not undermining the rest of the writers here. As I’ve said above It’s soo hard to write..but to put some kind of poetry in it. Is another thing. ^ ^