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Masked Feelings CH 89 The Whore
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The past, the present and the future didn’t matter anymore. She was stuck in hell and had been here long enough to know that she was never going to get out or it would’ve happened by now. Roxy would have to die to gain her freedom and she was ready to accept her fate.
Brent was on top of her now, ramming his knee between her legs to separate her thighs. He spread her apart wide and held her there. His fingers dug into the back of her thighs and he forced his way into her unwelcoming entrance. She screamed in agony as he thrust hard and buried his dick inside her. The thrusts got harder and deeper, continuing on as Brent mimicked Dirk’s words on the video. He referred to her as his "child whore" and this is what she was. It didn’t matter that she changed her name, she was still the same person. Nothing was going to erase away the filth or the humiliation.
Brent had prolonged his erection so he could build up the excitement. It was exciting for him but not her at all. She was just an object to use and quite possibly use again. Maybe he could get David to agree to these visits. He was sure he wouldn’t mind if it only tortured her more. She was taking it all in…. and he wasn’t just talking about his hard cock. He saw the spark of recollection as he played out this scenario. Brent came at the same time as Dirk had… and both of their noises together were more than she could take.
When Brent pulled out, he climbed off of her and sat on the edge of the bed.
Brent – Thanks so much…. I needed to get off.
Roxy’s mouth was sore from the gag and her throat was hourse from screaming. She was trying not to choke from the dryness and even more, she was trying not to vomit.
Brent stared at the bed between her legs and at her pussy.
Brent – Are you a virgin?
He laughed sardonically. Brent took his finger to her pussy and wrote on her stomach with the blood…. "whore."
She curled up in a ball with her feet tucked underneath her.
He left her for awhile and then came back after she finally fell asleep. Brent took her handcuffs off and watched her pretend that she was still asleep. He was waiting to see if she’d try anything, but she must have been figuring he came back for seconds. The blood was still there on her stomach, but most of it had flaked off.
Brent – Sleep well… I’ll be back soon.
As soon as he left, she scrambled to the bathroom which was still locked. She sat on the cool concrete floor and stared off into nowhere…. then turned her attention to under the bed. Her escape was still here. Those damn videos were still playing and had been even when she got a few minutes of sleep. She crawled to the bed on her hands and knees. Roxy took the box in her hands with the ready made syringe and everything she needed. She tied the elastic band around her arm and tapped on her forearm for the protruding vein. The tip of the needle teased at the vein. Her hand was shaking, but she hit it on target. The needle pierced her skin and entered the vein. She depressed the plunger and eagerly waited for freedom.
TBC – I’ll be back with more as soon as I can. Hope to hear from more of you…. please? lol
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What a chapter… I might have beaten all your dedicated fans to top spot here, I’m just too keen! I think I stubbled across your story by myself possibly from a comment you had left somehwere else on here… I’m glad I did though! This chapter was tough, I really hope Dana can deal with this, I can’t imagine what they are going through as a couple but getting it out in the open is definately a big step, hopefully towards getting away from this whole mess. I officially feel sorry for Roxy, her craziness up to now has obviously spawned from some crazy mental illness installed in her from Dirk so who can judge someone who has been through that, evil as she has been. She’s truely hit rock bottom I have no idea what state she’ll be in and how she’ll react if she ever gets out of David’s torture!! Thanks for an amazing chapter, I love how you write, it’s inspirational…
Ok few things to clear up lol, what i meant was NO It didnt turn me wat i meant was i cant believe prick Tony can treat her like tht and get turned on by it. Sorry lol. And no i dont hate u … yet but ur making it harder and harder to read lol. This is goin to sound so horrible but please just kill Roxy or have someone save her that poor woman Brent is just as sick as David to do tht to her, i feel so sorry for her! As for Alice and Dana AHHH Where has Dana gone? She needs to understand there was reason for why Alice did the things she has done, as much as it hurts her, Alice is hurting too. And Alice, poor Alice, her heart must be breaking knowin she has to break up with Dana to save her ITS EVIL!!! LOL Does Tony think this will get him in the good books with Bobby if he has an heir?? I dont know i just hate him lol. Anyway Reli Hope Dana is ok and isnt goin to do something stupid, please look after Alice and Dana please :) and have some mercy on poor Roxy i dont know how much one person can take. Anyhow LOVED this as hard as it as to read but loved it from the beginning and will eagerly await ur next chaper :) Fantastic writing as usual thnk u very much for a brilliant story just amazing :) Thank u PPS xxx
frickin awsum!! i feel a little guilty for not writing as much as everybody else does, so i hope u dnt think i dont enjoy it as much, cuz i do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can’t wait for the next one :)
First & foremost, I will certainly wish you a HAPPY BIRTHDAY again. You’re a dear friend and I always wish the best for you. I am finally 100% caught up!!!!! I have read the last 6 chapters in the past 2 nights and that is a whole lot of intensity to deal with. You already know that you owe me a new pair of panties or at the least, you need to be doing my laundry. At least the last 5 chapters didn’t cause that problem. Considering how much of a cluster fuck you have created, I doubt I’ll be getting a decent NC-17 that is not completely vile anytime soon. I can forgive you for that, because you’ve done so much to move the plot and my head is still spinning. It always amazes me that you can channel into this darkness and create something beautiful. Not that I like what I’m reading from a comfort level, but you have quite a way with words and you’re written is extremely visual. I can clearly envision everything that you’re depicting and that is both amazing and unsettling. I’ve been a fan of yours for a good long while and I’m so proud of everything that you have continually brought to the table. You’re pretty amazing. I still think you’re a sick & twisted bitch, but I know that’s just part of your charm. I also love the fact that you used one of my nicknames for you as your chapter name. Awesome! And don’t think that I have forgotten the promise you made to me many many months ago. I will not let you forget and will continue to harass you until I get what I want. I think you know just how persistent I can be when I want something. You owe me and I will collect. I’m struggling so much with Dana & Alice in this chapter. I realize that it is their pattern to regress in order to “protect” the other, but Dana was a little too aggressive for my tastes when trying to console Alice. While I understand that she doesn’t want Alice to be a victim again, I would have expected a little more compassion from her and sensitivity. I’d love to know where she took off to, as well as what David’s plans for Tony are. So many villains, so little time. Perhaps if they focused on destroying one another, instead of Danish, we’d all be happier ;-) You always leave me conflicted and pondering and this time is certainly no different. After reading all of this chapters in succession, I’m in overload right now. You say that my imagination amazes you, but you certainly give me a run for my money. Keep it coming my dear, I’m in for the bumpy ride.
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Whoa, I’m kind of surprised that I’m being commented about in other’s comments about the story. I left a comment for brteyes to read because she was soliciting comments, I got the impression from her that she appreciated all, even some that might be negative. I do want to add that I thought I gave some contructive critism and as a writer myself I know that we write to have our work read. If not it just sits in a box or on your hard drive. And what is necessary to continue is to get feedback. Now fanfiction is a different animal but maybe brteyes wants to write more in the future. And the reason, I left the comment and have continued to read was because I read this from chapter 1 and am a little disappointed in it’s direction. That is my personal opinion and I’m entiled to it. I’m hoping that the author might move it back to something involving the main characters. (I’m selfish that way) I want to know when the tape with Dana and Roxy’s friend will surface. I want to know about Kristen’s crush, I want to know what’s Sharon’s secret, and I really want to know is Lara still alive. Lastly I want Alice to gain some strength.And I do understand that sometimes writng is a cathartic journey as you (brteyes) once alluded to but then it does sometimes make work become less accessible for others. Harder for them to enjoy. But hey if you only want warm fuzzy comments, I’ll never comment again. If anyone needs to comment to me about anything and they are not the author, you can pm me and leave the space to simply discuss the story.
brteyes, thank you for your shout out. You do what you have to take care of your sanity. Yes, I do believe in karma. Unfortunately, sometimes bad people still win at the end. Hope this will not be the case. If you need the “Save Danish Army”, do tell me know. I think we can have all the Danish troopers rounded up pretty quickly. lol. Again, thanks for another warning, as if I am not psychologically prepared every time you post. (more laughs) I look forward to your sequel. Don’t worry about the timing of your post. I think this update is ahead of schedule anyway. I honestly did not expect another update for another week. Back to this chapter, whatever happen to that simple life when D named a star for A? By now this is horrendously chaotic. D MIA after a totally incomplete heavy duty discussion bothers me a lot. You said it, “how far it could stretch until it just snapped.” Did D snapped or did Tony kidnap her? I cannot even imagine the later. I am also afraid for A being in such deep despair that she would surrender to her fate. Come on, you have to bring Kristen in. Or have David do something more than just setting the fire. Thank you for reminding us to “hold tight to the one you love.” As for the other characters, I will patiently wait for you to reveal the big secret between Grace and Sharon. Now Roxy, do you consider the situation she was in, karma? So we have now a chain of bad karma going around in this thriller. LMAO. Seriously, I do feel bad for her. What is the purpose of having her back on using cocaine? So that she could be David’s puppet? So, that is it, right? Looking back, Andrea had the easier way out. I detest anyone raping or torturing others. Let Brent have his karma. You have managed to keep me at the edge of my seat literally. I thank you again for continuing this story which by now I love and starting to hate simultaneously, if that makes any sense at all. Anyway, I look forward to your next post. Also wishing your job situation will improve. p.s. I want to thank all the other Danish writers for posting this weekend. I am very proud of you all.
My power went out last night just as I finished reading this. I don’t know if that was a good thing or a bad thing. I sent you a PM with my thoughts on why Tony wants the baby. I am sure it is from left field. On to this chapter… I am proud of Alice for telling Dana, even though she did leave out a couple details (such as the kiss). I hope Alice realizes that it is not her fault that this happened. I wish she had the time to explain the circumstances of the first incident. While that may have upset Dana, it would have also let her know the severity of the situation. I also am proud of Dana for not leaving immediately — however she should have stayed with Alice after the fire drill. I hope Dana is OK. I don’t think Tony would have grabbed her. I am guessing she went off to think. I hope that she does not go to Kristen or the old girlfriend. And I hope if she does go to Kristen that the other woman does not fill in the couple blanks Alice left. Dirk, Brent and Tony are despicable. They each prey on weaker folks just to give themselves some sense of power. None of them can even remotely be considered a “man” in any sense of the word — I don’t even want to include them in “human”. David is horrible — of this there is no doubt. But I do believe he is mentally ill. He is doing what he is doing with a sense of clinical detachment and outraged righteousness. It does not justify what he is doing, but, it is at least a little understandable. These other pricks are opportunistic assholes and there is a special place in hell for people like this and hopefully they will spend eternity with a hot pitchfork up their asses. As you can see, Ol’ Goose is a might riled up. Gah!! I am very concerned that Alice and Roxy both may be close to the edge. What really do they have positive in their lives at this point? Every time I think Roxy has hit rock bottom, there just seems to be further for her to fall. I can’t believe she is being forced back into a heroin addiction. Sharon was just kind of a “blip” to me in this one. Irwin? Be happy you are so clueless. It’s your story brteyes and I really want to stay with you. I have been on this road with you for a while now. I am with HD — I love the story and hate it at the same time. I need some sense of hope at some point that good may eventually triumph. Please? In any case… Thank you for continuing on with this amazingly written story and for being such a consistent presence on the site. I hope things at work get better for you soon.
I wasn’t going to comment but since you said you do appreciate all comments even ones that are negative, I’ll add. Simply because I’m almost ready to give up on this, I’m not finding it entertaining anymore but I’m hoping you can swing this back around.First I’ll say that I’m disappointed that you still haven’t found a way to give the women some power. Even Roxy who is a trained FBI agent. Although she is being broken down, I truly expected that she was going to kick Brents ass and escape. But no, she gets raped also. Also for story sake get her out of there. You have built up this character and now she is doing nothing. Get her back in the action already. And WTF is Kristen? You reintroduced her to the story and yet she is nowhere. What is the point of David? For a while I thought that Lara was still alive and he was just keeping Dana safe from Roxy, but I have no clue nor do I CARE what he is doing now. The Tony part here is doing nothing to move the story foreward unless you have Alice take him down. Alice can react for so long and they you have to her do something to drive the action foreward. It has to be her also. Neither David nor Dana can hunt this guy down. Alice needs to put an end to this situation. If that means putting a bullet between his eyes, than so be it. But it needs to be done.You set up some decent plot lines but then threw in new stuff and totally left other things hanging, unanswered. Now you have too much focus on the men and their objectives. They are minor characters yet they are driving the action. And you have left your main characters, the ones we care about – Alice and Dana,(also Roxy) with nothing to do but react to them. That’s is the problem for me.
This was a very intense chapter. Although it was hard to readI was wishing you’d have written more, LOL. I do not have a sadisticside. You better ask my gf if you don’t believe me. Oh and yes, I amstill very kind even though I’m reading your story. Thanks for answering my questions. You do know that there are more to come, right? Btw, I wouldn’tgive you a wrong number. I’m a kind person, remember? But you haven’tasked for it so you’re not gonna get that from me, LOL. Is it difficultfor you to ask? Who’s having the better questions? Me or your gf? Howdoes your gf handle the fact that you’re bi? Does she even like your story?I never asked that, LOL. How come your chapters are having a dark side at the moment?Is it because of your job? Or do you just like the darker side more?I guess, it’s easier to write for you. I almost forgot to mention thatI do not share zephyr’s opinion. Everything you write is abovemagnificent. You should be a literature professor. It’s really amazingwhat you bring down on paper. This story might be dark and cruel atsome points but that’s what makes it unique and so excellent. I don’twant to attack you zephyr but maybe you’re too young of a lady to readthese kind of stories. The world isn’t always good and I think brteyesis showing us exactly how crazy, humilating and unjustified this lifecan be for anyone. I’m sure though that we’ll get to experience happy Danishin 100 chapters from now on, lol. You have my voice brteyes and I’mgoing to continue reading it. You definitely got me hooked on it. AWESOME JOB, missy!!!! And don’t forget to post soon, LOL.
First off…..HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BRTEYES!!!! I didn’t comment because I wanted to wait for your birthday. You surely wanted to call me a lazy bitch again, lol. So, how are you going to spend your birthday, huh? You have to tell me if you got a lot of presents and what your best gift was so far. I hope that all your wishes come true. I wish you a lot of laughter, not a lot of friends but only one good/best friend, joy and happiness, health….and of course more chapters to come, lol. Oh, and I almost forgot: also wish you a lot of love and ***, lol. Now better on with the chapter before you kill me here, lol. I really can’t believe what you’re doing to poor Roxy. She’s at such a low point already. Can you still top it? I would like to see her beat up David’s and Brent’s ass. Those assholes do not deserve to be alive. Hope that someone can stop them. Where’s Kristen when she’s needed the most? She’s having a gun, she knows how to kick asses…..damn, she’s an FBI agent. Why the hell does no one do anything about it? I wanted to scream as I read that part about Brent raping Roxy. WOW! This is so emotional. One time I’m wanting to kill those bastards. That’s how enraged your story makes me. On the other hand I’m being very calm and melt upon reading the sweet moments Dana and Alice share with each other. What’s gonna happen with Al and Dana anyway? Right now I can’t see a future for them. Alice is kinda stuck with Tony that ass. He’s having her in her hands. Why can’t David kill Tony? Can you answer that? It was right for Alice to tell Dana about what happened. It might bring them apart but it might also make them a lot stronger. I can’t really foresee what will come out of it. Will we ever see happy Danish? lol I do understand where Dana is coming from though and that she had to run away. But running away also means running away from issues you have to face with the one you love. There is still a lot of work to do. I’m still hoping though…..Psssssss: Danish, Danish, lol. I should hypnotize you so you write only about happy times, lol. I’d like to know Sharon’s secret. What is it that she’s keeping from her family, especially Dana? Mind to tell me? What’s it supposed to mean that you’re not hoping that Alice will get pregnant? Hello? You’re writing this story, lol. Or am I wrong about it? Thanks for encouraging me and saying that you want to make the men suffer. It was about damn time!!!! So, who’s gonna die first? lol Awwwwwww, I can’t have Dana? Why not? Do you have a reason? I know that my woman is in love with Dana so why can’t I be as well, hmmmm? Btw, I won’t be writing any rabbit stories. You can definitely forget about it. I think, I’ve already told you the last time, lol. NO RABBIT STORY!! You’re being persistent, lol. Before I come to an end I’d like to say a few words to zephyr: I don’t understand why you’re upset with the progress of this story. If you don’t feel like you can take it you shouldn’t read. I don’t want to be mean to you or attack you in a way but I agree with Ladykiller. If every story was just showing how happy and kind everyone is it would be boring. Besides, that’s not how our world functions and I also agree that brteyes is picturing how grotesque, perverted, confsing but also great life can be. Are you having a cake for your birthday today, brteyes? Are seven or eight candles on it? I can’t remember, lol. This was a very interesting but glorious chapter, darlin’. You know how to keep me entertainedJ I’ll be waiting for your next installment. You’re brilliant, brteyes!!!!!