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Masked Feelings CH 84 Holding On… Praying for Strength
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Dana laid there on top of her, hovering momentarily… then fixed her eyes on those beautiful tits. These were the objects that started the whole thing. They drew so much attention and she wanted to tease them endlessly. Dana dove in and took one of the rosy buds into her mouth. She loved the way it felt when her tongue played with the hard tip. Her tongue traced circles around her aureola…. familiarizing herself with every bump when it puckered. Alice’s fingers wove through her hair and pulled her head in further, almost using this force to show her what she really wanted.
Dana latched on and suckled her breast. Alice moaned loudly and arched her back, feeling the full effect of her lips, tongue and even her teeth. Alice’s hands moved down through her hair, almost pulling it as she threaded her way down her neck and to her back. Her fingernails dragged down the length of her back , feeling deliciously wicked. Alice’s leg centered in between her already parted legs and rode up into her already wet center. Dana pulled away needing a break due to Alice’s surprise attack…. one she hadn’t expected but was more than welcome. She let out a few groans of her own and rocked her body in rhythm with her leg.
Simultaneously, they both fought to get their own pants off. Their hands would tangle when trying to undo their pants. Finally Dana rolled off of Alice so they both could wriggle out of their panties and jeans. Once again, Alice was a little quicker than she was and climbed on top of her. She didn’t waste anytime and kissed her fully, making sure she felt her tongue probing the recesses of her mouth. Dana’s leg hiked up between her thighs this time and felt her glorious wetness. The juices flowed freely as she ran her leg up through it. It was Alice that was riding her leg now… up and down she rocked with the rhythm of Dana’s leg. Her thigh was so very slick and moved easily between her legs.
Dana swore she heard a noise coming from another room. She hesitated and whispered to Alice.
Dana – Did you hear something?
Alice – No…. but I’m really not concentrating on anything else.
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Luckily I already had a glass of wine in me when I saw you posted. And then I read your author’s notes and opened another bottle. Here we go… The NC-17? Hot! Work that dildo, Alice! Definitely required two cold showers. And it actually didn’t seem weird. I think sometimes when there is a death, you want to feel alive. Argh! Once again I feel bad for Roxy! Shame on Dana for not saying goodbye to Alice. I hope she had a good reason. Another great chapter, brteyes!
WOW!! Jam packed chapter there!! And omg tht must be the best sex scene i have ever read on this site, it was so real and HOT!! lol. Not only did u show there need for each other and there wanting for some pure good sex but u also showed what love they have for each other tht seems to just keep growing. Well done :)And again with Roxy some reli interesting stuff, didnt expect her to do wat she did watching tht video and i cant help again but feel sorry for her, how much can tht woman withstand!! As for Dana leaving the way she did, i hope it was a good reason cus Alice must be reli confused after the way they seemingly just connected. Another mind blowing fantastic chapter and reli can not wait for ur next one :D. P.S I still havent started my next chapter for my story Im terrible lol. I cud blame ur story as a distraction lol just kiddin. PPS X
Me again lol. Dont worry i will never not be a Danish fan and will never stop reading stories as good as this one. :) Dont worry bout tht. x
Alright … you’re not getting a full comment tonight. That being said, I have two things to say to you. Love Juices! Seriously! And enough with the rats already … it’s just fucking gross!
I’m sorry for saying this but truthfully I have a new favorite when it comes to sex scenarios.I don’t know how you manage to write over 10 pages full of hot and steamy sex but you succeed leaving me all warm and fuzzy:-)) Every time I think you can’t do any better you come upwith a new detail here and a new detail there….et voilà , the effect is clearly to be seen. Thatyou still have a lot of ideas in that lovely head of your’s amazes me. Actually, this really provesto me that you understand a lot of your “profession”. I still believe that you should changeyour “métier” and become a writer. Brteyes, you have a great talent, please take advantage of yourabilities, darlin’. I have faith in you. Well, if you should reconsider and start a new career justlet me know:-))) I have a feeling that you’ve got more hidden qualities. Alright, let’s reviewthis chapter now. Roxy is still a character that polarizes. One moment you want to hug her, the next instant you want to kill her. It’s a bumpy road with her and it reminds me of a rollercoaster. Everyone deserves better, even our imprisoned Roxy. I wonder how long she’s going to stay in that bunker. Althoughreacting phobic to the rats I’m sure she’ll find a way to get used to them and with any luck she’ll vanquish her fears. That would be a victory on her side. I kinda feel sorry for her again. This year won’t be as promising as she’s hoping. Well, maybe I’m also wrong….mostly I am anyway, lol. You mentioned that she hasn’t been through the worst yet. Does it mean she finally gets a body transition and becomes a Rox or a Rex? lol Or does David have a genetically manipulated rat which is bigger than a dog? lolJust don’t torture her too much. I still like her as you know. She’s a good girl in my eyes, even thoughshe’s fighting dirty. As for David: what can I say what I didn’t say before? I like his name, lol. I think,I’ve never mentioned that. Who’s his Goliath by the way? I have the impression that David’s pretty muchbored most of the time. He has nothing to do. Give him a gun and a target:-))) I can see a showdownbetween David and Tony though. Could be quite interesting. Why the hell did Dana leave Alice withouta simple bye? Was she too confused as to what had happened earlier (and I’m referring to that supernaturalsex plot you created….simply P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!)? Or was is just a bit too much for Dana? Women tendto have a dramatic exit, lol. I still hope that Al and Dana can work it out someday. It’s still too soonto trust each other, and they apparently are far from it. The solution is lots of conversations but eventhat seems to be too difficult for them. You can send Dana to me for some time. I wouldn’t mind keepingher entertained, lol. But I think, my woman won’t like that. Ehm, I didn’t say anything, lol. I am sosorry for that Britney Spears slogan last time. If I knew that you don’t like her I probably wouldn’twrite that down, lol. She has a song you’d like though. I won’t tell you the title because it’s too dirty. Maybe next time, lol. Can’t wait for your next installment, darlin’. Your story is a qualitymasterpiece and I’m very grateful that you write it:-))) You’re funnytastic…..
P.S.: That dildo plot is stuck in my head now. Thanks for that, lol.
An excellent storyline. Sorry for not commenting on it earlier. I’ve been a silent reader for a long time and thought now it’s the right time to raise my voice. I’m fond of it and expect more to come. Whoever loves thrillers should be reading Masked Feelings. Great title btw. I highly recommend you, brteyes. PPS!
Sweet Baby Jesus! I think I need a cold shower! I was a few paragraphs in when I had remembered that I had read this chapter when you first posted it, but for whatever reason, didn’t leave you a comment. That was all sorts of hot and I loved it. They just keep taking half a step forward and a marathon backward. As for you being a sick bitch, you should totally take that as a compliment. David is still just as twisted as ever, but I don’t think we’ve seen his worst yet. Roxy, while you know how I feel about rats, I’m still having a hard time finding any sympathy for her. Plenty of people have had plenty of bad breaks and wouldn’t consider pulling half the shit she tries to pull. I’m not a black & white person by any stretch of the imagination, but I’m not finding anything redeeming in her. Off to the next chapter. Trying to catch up.
what the??? im confused:S why would she leave like that? so weird i hope shes okay tho nothing bad..poor alice she must be confused…great chapter i love this story so good!! :)