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Masked Feelings CH 56 Home Sucks…. The New Reality
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Dana – Come on Alice… whats the hold up?
Alice – I’ll be right there.
Dana was sitting in the car when Alice walked out of the motel room. She looked back at the bed that they had spent the night in. For Dana it was probably just sex, but for Alice it was much more… she had finally felt like she made love to her. Each time she was with Dana it was different. This time they kissed and that meant more then anything else that happened in this room. It gave her hope. Alice closed the door to the room. That was the only door she was closing, she wasn’t going to give up…. not when Dana was showing signs of wavering.
Alice climbs into the driver’s seat and looks over at Dana.
Alice – Kind of sucks to have to wear the same clothes, huh?
Dana – Yeah and it doesn’t help that they’re still damp.
Alice – I’ll turn on the heat… maybe that will help.
Dana – What would help is to go home and get out of these clothes.
Alice got a vision of Dana in her head, walking around her house naked. It wasn’t something she needed to think about especially since she was driving now.
Dana – So does Kristen know I’m coming?
Alice – No….. but she needs you.
Dana – I don’t know what I can do for her, but I already told you that.
Alice – You two are pretty tight. I’m sure that all you need to do is be there to listen.
Dana – You told me that her husband felt responsible for the accident. How is that?
Alice – I’m not sure. I talked to him for the couple minutes I saw him but he didn’t tell me anything. Since the moment that she was brought into the hospital I knew I had to find you.
Dana – And thats why you had her phone. So you stole it….
Alice – Yeah, but what was I suppose to do? She was the only one who you’d call.
Dana – Since when did you become so dishonest, Alice. I know you thought you were doing the right thing, but it doesn’t excuse your actions.
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Yes, they have some talking to do, and Dana has some “splaining” to do… lol Am I evil for laughing when Dana asked Alice what the hell was wrong with her in the car? Probably. It just brought back memories of crazy drugged out of her mind Alice, from season 3. I pictured her crying in the yoga class, and couldn’t help myself. Please forgive me. lol I loved the tension between Alice and Dana. They’re obviously drawn to each other, but Alice really does not know where she stands with Dana – at all. Right now Dana is holding the cards, but she hasn’t been able to close the door on her feelings for Alice. I can’t wait for your next update. Please don’t wait too long!
How you keep writing the way that you do is beyond me! The trip home was all I could have asked for, the connection is so obvious. They share little things that only true lovers do. I liked the sweater thing as well. They do need to talk some more but they have come a long way in a short amount of time. Wonder what Roxy will do….and looking forward to some NC17 Danish style!! Love your writing as always.
Great chapter love, sorry I’m not in the best mood so you’ll have to excuse the lack of funny. This chapter did put me in a better mood though, I loved the little connections these too are making it’s really a nice way to bring them back to where they need to be. I like that Dana is keeping things open and not falling too fast she seems guarded which is definitely how it should be. I loved the huckleberries comment, I’ve still never had them but I’m sure watching one lick the syrup from their fingers would be enjoyable. So Roxy and Kristen are still working on this case that’s interesting, maybe Miss Kristen will find out what Roxy did and change her tune about Alice. I also loved how Alice found out, and I wonder if our little writer will actually confront Dana with this new information. It could backfire, if Alice brings it up Dana will wonder how Alice found out….boom Roxy lol. I loved the chapter babe and I can’t wait for another snippet…maybe a little NC-17 for me? ;) I love you post soon babe
Nope, still haven’t figured you out. Your story always suprises me. :) But as I see the story does suprise yourself sometimes too. lmao I don’t know if Dana went on an automatic pilot for comforting Alice when she was crying. I have a sparkle of hope that it wasn’t just to reassure her, but thatshe actually cared for Alice. It was a nice turning point in this story. I was afraid that the drama would ensue and Alice and Dana would be fighting this whole chapter. But it actually turned out pretty well. They acted so familiar around each other. I loved the sleepyhead comment by Dana. Also lovedthe exchange of food. :D Yay for old habits dying hard! And funny you used this song. I just watched a Danish music vid to this song. The only thing I was thinking when Dana entered Kristen’s room was “Oh no, Roxy is going to bump into Alice when she’s alone in the corridor”. But I’m quite pleased how their little conversation went. Roxy was less pushy than normal (or is that her new strategy?). And yes, I do think Lara is still alive. Maybe she will make an appaerancein the Halloween-chapter? ;) (Ok, I have this awful image of Lara’s head as a pumpkin…not going into graphic details…but knowing you, you probably got the picture ;)). Anyways, thank you for posting this story! Still lovin’ it. :D
The journey home was a very interesting insight into just how f*cked up Alice truly is…she is almost a functioning breakdown!! She needs serious help doesnt she?. Dana seems a little stronger and telling Alice that she still loved her but not knowing where she stood was a tiny start in communicating but still nowhere enough,they are both still confused as to where they stand with each other! The Danish banter in the restaurant was funny and good to see but they still make you want to scream,shout and jump with frustration…then you see and feel the connection they have and you lie back down again and chill with a stiff drink…cheers! LOL. Roxy is an expert at winding Dana up and being all smooth and sweet with Alice isnt she? But even though she drives me insane i still find her facinating and i want to know why she is like this, [maybe delving into her past]!!. Well Alice found out about the message, as i knew she would…more confusion to come then hey? I cant tell you how much i am loving this story, it gets you involved, sucks you in and makes you think..and thats what makes you the best!! Cant wait for more, thanks.
Nice work. So very frustrating but they’re getting there slowly. As for Roxy, I guess they could survive with her still living, but she’s so annoying that I wouldn’t mind if she fell of a cliff or something.
when i read your story i wish i had the super power of being able to reach into my monitor and strangle roxy. ugh! that woman drives me insane. and also with this power i would love to slap dana and/or alice at any given time for some of the stupid stuff they pull. but needless to say i can’t reach into my monitor and smack or strangle people. so resigned to that fact i keep reading and hoping the strangling and smacking will be done by characters in these pages. : ) great update as always… please keep’em coming.
Well I’m certainly pleased that I could amuse you oh so much. Yes you have made me swear & yes you have made me swear at you on an occassion or 2 .. I was merely venting my frustrations. As for you “giving it to me easy” … well honey I know that isn’t going to happen … good thing I enjoy a challenge … sadly though, I am not patient … all the more reason for you to torment & torture me. I’m looking forward to your promised pleasant surprises & I’m happy to hear that you’re keeping in mind that I like it hot. I definitely would love some more hot Danish action. I really like the direction that this chapter has taken & can’t wait for the Halloween installment … which should be NC-17!
Great update – and yes, our girls do need to talk, long and hard. Are you starting to soften Roxy a little?? Look forward to your next post – brilliant writing, by the way.
YEAHHHHHH, there you are again:-))))) Sorry, for the delay of my comment but I had some problems with my account and I needed to add something to my former nick name “Danalicious” so that you knew it is me. I thought a “²” could be it, lol. I’m soooooooo glad that you liked the idea of bringing Dana and Roxy once again into a fight. Kiss for that, lol. Your writing is really entertaining and I am always sad when I reach the final page and have to read: TBC, lol. But then I have something I can look forward to the next week. This chapter was very interesting and fun to read, especially our mute Dana, lol. It didn’t last long: thanks to Alice:-) Anybody who reads this story from the beginning knows how much emotions and complexity and of course hard work you bring into this. I love this!!!!! Every time there is something new and it’s full of details. Amazing job!!!!! The fact that Roxy and Kristen work together will definitely cause some problems. I still do not know if Roxy belongs to the side of the Gambino-family or if she, indeed, is a FBI-agent. That isn’t really clear to me, yet. No matter on which side she is I have pity with her, although I shouldn’t have, lol. By the way: you’re partly right. I love both of them, Alice and Dana. But in this fic I’m more a Dana lover. She’s hot!!!!! I must admit that. I like the idea of Dana and Alice talking. That would be a big step for them both. I hope, Dana will stay calm this time and Alice needs some help. But please, no pills. I disliked the way she become in Season 3. That was awfull. Is Lara still alive? ‘I’m asking with puppy eyes’, lol. Thanks for this brillant date:-) I knew you would never let me down. Perhaps you would like a second one? lol Hope to read more from you as soon as possible. BIG THANKS!!!!!!!
Another great chapter. You were right the trip home was interesting. I loved the conversations between Alice and Dana and having more insight into these two complex characters you have drawn (based on IC’s sketches). I especially loved the part on page 5 where Dana tells Alice she still loves her (something I have never doubted but Alice needed to hear it, I am not sure she believes it) but Dana doesn’t believes she is what Alice wants and ending with Alice wondering about Dana wants. More please…