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Masked Feelings CH 50 Just Gone…
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Tina and Bette were on their way over to Dana’s. Tina couldn’t stand it any longer and Bette was getting worn down by her pleas, so they called Shane over to babysit while they went over there. When they got there Alice’s car was still in the driveway…. but still no Dana. Tina goes up the walk and pounds on the door, which Alice answers almost immediately.
Tina – Well it about damn time….
When she saw the look on Alice’s face, she knew something wasn’t quite right. Tina changed her tone and asked her next question.
Tina – Why didn’t you answer the first time I knocked, you had to have heard me.
Alice sighed.
Alice – Dana begged me not to.
Bette follows in behind Tina.
Bette – Dana’s here?
Alice – No…
Tina – But you just said…
Alice – I know what I said, she was here but now she’s gone.
Tina – Gone where, Alice?
Alice – I have no fucking idea.
Tina – I told you to let her cool off before talking to her. Is that what happened? You had another fight?
Alice – Not exactly… well we did fight but that wasn’t all.
Bette – So what happened exactly…. Alice.
Alice could hear the judgemental tone in her voice.
Alice – Listen here Bette….. I know I fucked up but not everything that happens is all my fault.
Bette – Well maybe not, but you could’ve prevented the mess that it is now by showing some restraint when it came to Roxy. Maybe now you can see how one action can effect others…. it’s like the domino effect.
Alice – I know what the fucking domino effect is, Bette…. I’m not stupid. What give you the right to judge me, it’s not like you’ve never made a mistake before. I feel bad enough about what I did, without you making it worse.
Bette – Seems like we’ve had this discussion before already. Can we move on to what happened to Dana now?
Alice – I’m not sure I want to be discussing this with you.
Tina – Can you two just stop?!
Both whipping around to look at her.
Tina – Alice, Can you just tell me what happened? And Bette, if you’re not going to help out in the situation I think you should just go ahead and go home.
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Interesting update…the end threw me off. Who is Special Agent Brooks? I’m sure we haven’t met him/her yet??? I feel the Danish connection brewing…:)!!!! YEAH!!!!! Can’t wait till that happends. In the mean time I’ll be curious to see what you plan on doing with Roxy’s character. Please post soon!
First of congratulations on 50 chapters, I think you’re amazing! This chapter was really good. I was glad that Dana didn’t go missing but talked to Kirsten firts (who I still adore btw) Roxy can still piss me off even if she didn’t do anything. So glad you found some time to update this story and keep it going. It’s better to know you lack time and not inspiration! Anyway I will check to see when you have updated and what you will do to (or with) our girls. Still hoping for a bit of happiness. Thanks!
as always, great update! holding my breath until the next one.
First of all, congrats with your 50th chapter!! :D You made us wait two weeks AND one day (the last addition is a really important one ;) )!! The clue you gave me didn’t do much for me. I’m just as clueless as I was before…ok, maybe, just maybe I’m a babystep further to finding out the truth. Where is Dana going, is she going to the cabin? Will somebody be following her? I really can’t see Dana and Alice talking about all that happened like adults in the near future. Will Alice be having professional help soon? I think she is the one who will need to convince Dana of their love for each other. She then first needs to be a lot stronger herself (and Alice is one strong lady…something some people seem to forget (including me)). Kristen is going to have a hard time. Right now she is trying to help all of them…but they all have different interests and I think the (unspoken) ‘requests’ they ask of her are going to be contradictory. But Kristen seems to be a well-balanced person and she will make the right choices. And you leave us hanging like that at the end…who is special agent Brooks?!?!
Whoa 50th chap thats awesome! congrats!I just want to cry! lol i guess its cuz it pains me to see Alice and Dana at such a dark place! ok ok whos this brooks personnn? ive been trying to break down Roxy in the sense of accepting her character and seeing that her maddness is needed and makes sense.. but I CANT lol i will forever have roxy in the list of people who should disapear! but i know or i hope Roxy will get whats coming to her :P I really hope Alice and Dana can stop being crazy and try to work this out even tho it seems like they are both far away from it. You truly are an AMAZING writer Brteyes! Plz update asap! thanx for your awesomenesss! u rock!
Hey firstly congrats on making it to chapter fifty – what a great effort! Secondly whilst I love the drama & all that jazz, can you please assure me that danish will eventually prevail? Please?
brteyes, love, you know I have millions of questions but I’m sure I’d be wasting my breath asking them. You stay true to writing form, leave the suspense to the story no spoilers. I cave like a deck of cards when I get asked lol. There are so many things I want to know and I want to spend the rest of my life finding out…the story I mean. I loved this chapter and I always look forward to reading anything from you. I have to say you threw me for a loop with the Agent Brooks curve you threw at the end. Yet another question where I am at your sweet sweet juicy mercy. I’m with bojangles about Danish I want to know that they’ll be ok but for now I’m really really interested in what Roxy’s doing. Kristen is poking her nose in awfully far and even though she is friends with the both of them I think I agree with Roxy, she needs to choose a side. I get that Kristen empathizes with Alice but Dana’s not going to be able to accept someone who’s on the fence so to speak. I love everything you write brteyes and this is one of the best nights of my life, probably until the next chapter you post at least lol. Keep up the great writing I’ll be anxiously waiting for more.
can’t wait to see where you will tak this and I will have a lot of catching up to do as I am away for two and a half week great update
Yeah … I’m definately not a new reader … I’ve been keeping tabs on this fic for months. Glad I could give your ego a boost. As for my continued readership … if you keep posting interesting chapters (like this one) & throw in some mindblowingly hot angry sex … I’ll definately keep reading.