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Masked Feelings CH 31 Comforting
Waiting was something Alice was growing accustomed to…. but it was getting harder to stomach. This time however, she only had to wait a couple minutes.
Sharon and Irwin came out looking rather somber.
Alice – What? How is Dana? Tell me…. I need to know.
Sharon – She’s lost a great deal of blood….
Alice – They can fix that…
Sharon – That’s not their greatest concern…. Because the bandages were taken off and she was exposed to God knows what, Dana has an infection. She’s running a high fever.
Alice – What are they doing for her?
Sharon – Giving her antibiotics….. thats all they can do at this point.
Alice – Can I see her?
Sharon – Lets see how she does, Alice. When Dana’s feeling better…. we’ll let her friends in to see her. For now, I only want family. After whats happened….. you can understand that, can’t you Alice?
Alice – Can’t you understand that I just need to see that Dana is ok?
Sharon – Dana isn’t ok, Alice. That’s what I’ve been saying. I’m here to protect her. We’re going in to see her now. We’ll keep you informed on her condition. I understand how you feel, but I’m not changing my position.
Alice was ready to speak back, but Roxy grabbed her arm…. pulling her back. Roxy whispering to her…
Roxy – Don’t push her, Alice. Let it go…. at least for now.
Alice swallowed her pride.
Alice – Let me know if there is any change, please. If she wakes up tell her I’m thinking of her.
Sharon – Of course.
Alice felt like she was getting treated like the villain. If anything, she was a victim…. just like Dana. Now she could see where Dana got her stubbornness.
Roxy – Let’s go to the cafeteria and get a bite to eat. I know you haven’t eaten all day. Don’t say you’re not hungry either, because I’m making you eat something.
Alice – Fine…. I’m not going to get to see Dana anyway.
Roxy – Don’t pout, Alice. It’s not very attractive.
Alice – I still have one good arm to punch you with…
Roxy – So Alice, Are you a lover or a fighter?
Alice blushes.
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Hhahah oh man, Roxy is too cool. I feel bad for Dana and Alice tho, they have a long way. This was a great chapter, hope you post soon!
I knew it! I knew it! Ha! I knew she was in law enforcement…that’s great, she was in cognito to get the Gina mob, I knew it! Awesome!! Can’t wait for the follow-up. Yeah, I’m into blood an gore, love it…Lara is alive and Roxy is a lousy shot…hmmmm. Cheers. Peace
Didn’t see that one coming! Glad to see dana is okay….and Roxy…I knew she had something up her sleeve. Looking forward to some happy Danish and kick ass Roxy. Thanks…
Whips, chains, handcuffs, I am all yours you naughty littel vixen!! As for that wretched whore Lara if she isnt dead kill her now!! Please give me so hot and freak nasty sex between alice and dana soon cause i so need it. I will be waiting for you to satisfy me so please dont dissappoint me sweetie
This great FBI. she will take care of both Dana and Alice. Sharon is an ass. Always trying to keep the girls away from Dana
I figured Roxy was a law-enforcement agent, and that Lara wasn’t going down for the count so easily, but you totally knocked me off my feet with Roxy’s and Alice’s encounter. By the way, pssst… come closer … I think they like to be left hangin’ just a little bit too – it keeps us all coming back for more! ;-)
I totally didn’t see that one coming…Alice and Roxy…!! Mmh, ok, as long as it out of their system and stays out of it, I’m fine with it. ;) I loved the moment Alice and Dana shared. And Roxy being a FBI-agent, she’s a real hero! :) Maybe I got it wrong…but did Roxy miss Lara and is Lara still walking around??? Well, I hope you get well soon…but first you have to finish thenext chapter. :P
i’m a little sad that the series ended too. special agent hart? hmm…any relation to the miss congeniality? anyway, very cool. if roxy did miss, let lara be severely brain-damaged or paralyzed. so glad dana is okay. alice and roxy gettin it on totally took me by surprise. can’t wait for ur next post. btw, go ahead w/ ur idea for a sequel.
nice twist.. and here i was thinking i’d finally get my happy ending :P Thank you for putting them back together though, even for a little while.
this is just great I can’t wait to see what will happen now because I get the feeling that lara is still alive and kicking please post soon this just keeps getting better and better
Wow, that was amazing. You have left me very satisfied and not at all surprised. I think there was some guess that Roxy was part of the law. I wonder how this all with play out now. Is Lara dead? I’m not even totally sure. She better be, kill the bitch! I wish I had more lovely things to say, but I’m afraid my thoughts are elsewhere. But you do rock and I can’t wait for your next update and to hear from you ASAP. I’m still your biggest fan, baby. Until next time…