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Masked Feelings CH 26, Truth or lies
Bette – Well she can’t afford to lose us. She needs to know we’re there for her.
Tina – We’ll be. So….. how did it go with Alice?
Bette – Ready for this? Someone trashed her apartment.
Tina – Oh my God! Is Alice ok?
Bette – She wasn’t hurt if thats what you mean. When I got to the hallway, I heard her screams or more like cries. She was sitting in the middle of the mess. I held her as she cried and then when she was through she pushes me away. She wanted to clean up the mess. I told her not to touch anything and call the police. She acted like she didn’t care who did it. There was no sign of forced entry and she said the police must have forgotten to lock the door. She says it was probably done by some kids. I’m almost sure she didn’t call the police after I left. She was already trying to clean it up. I offered to help because it was obvious she wasn’t going to follow my advise. I swear she purposely picked a fight to make me leave so I wouldn’t ask her any questions. I think she’s covering…. I think she knows who did this. If I’m right, what does she have to gain from it?
Tina – Who do you think did it?
Bette – I don’t know but don’t you think it’s strange that the police would screw up and not lock the door?
Tina – Yeah… that doesn’t make sense. So if the door was locked, someone would need the key because that door has a deadbolt lock.
Bette – Well from what I understand, only two other people have keys. Her mother and Dana.
Tina – Well her mother no matter how strange she is, wouldn’t do that to her own daughter. And Dana, as mad as she is about the situation she in, would never think to do something that awful. Besides the fact, Dana still loves her.
Bette – A dead end?
Tina – I don’t think so. Who else could get access to a key?
Bette – You’re not thinking…..it was her,do you?
Tina – Lara could have easily done it. She was even at her apartment yesterday morning. She said Alice wasn’t home and her reason for being there was to talk Alice in to dropping the charges. I think Lara’s angry enough to get revenge…. she is with Dana now and Alice is a threat to her happiness. If Dana goes away to jail, then her dream disappears. What we need to do is go to the source…. talk to Alice.
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(69 votes, average: 3.52 out of 5)
I was psyched when I saw that you had updated. As I was reading I could feel the pieces falling into place. I really enjoyed the moments with Bette and Tina disecting the situation. They finally feel like they are being friends to Alice and Dana. I like that they are actively involved, but in a supporting role.
oh man i cant wait for that dinner.
I still want the whore Lara to die!! I hope that the gang bashes her and Gina at the dinner with all their eating utensils…… Lara is just such a wicked whore and i definitely hate her more then Gina!! I want Alice and Dana to have some hot and sweaty sex very soon, i know you love the torture, but come on you have to hook it up for you girl. I love ya still sweetie and please post sooon
Awsome chapter, like always, hope Alice has sence enough to look into Tony’s family a little more. can’t wait for their dinner also. Post soon!!
So much calamity. Well done though, you have me hooked on this story… mind you it would be really nice if you could throw in some Danish fluff at the gathering? You know, admist all the chaos? haha good work.
AHH! I totally left a comment earlier today but I guess it didn’t go through. Damn these machines! Anyways, wow is the story going great. You’ve maintained the magic no doubt. One thing though, ALICE….ENGAGED….TO GINA?!?!?!?!? Wow, I mean, wow. I hope she knows what she’s doing. She ought to just drug or get Gina drunk and make her open the safe. How’s she gonna know what she’s doing if she’s drunk eh? Yep, I know, I’m a genuis. lol I’m sure you’ve got it all figured out though, I know you do. I CANNOT wait until that dinner. It should make for a very interesting chapter. I can’t wait for this cliffhanger you keep talking about. Why do I get the feeling once I read it, you’re going to disappear and be like one of those author’s that never finish their AMAZING Fics? Don’t do that to me babe! The pieces are starting to fall into place, you can’t leave us with an unsolved puzzle. I have faith in you though sweetie. Can’t wait for your next post. You’ll always leave us wanting more… Until next time
It’s getting very complicated… Alice and Gina are engaged…Mmh, what to think about that! I hope that they don’t actually get married. ;) But with Roxy (and Tony, alis maffia) lurking around and the help of their friends I don’t think it will happen (*but this is my wishful thinking*). Bring on the dinner! Will Lara and Gina finally be dismantled (please!)??
I can’t wait to see what happens at dinner please post very soon as this is great and I love it
Hiya, I didn’t get a chance to leave a comment for the last chap’ AWESOME, I loved the kiss between A&D I needed her to let her know she still cared. It was so sweet. You are such a tease, I am desperate to find out what happens at the dinner…KIU (Keep It Up) it’s AWESOME!!! Peace.
sorry for not commenting sooner. i was so happy when i saw ur post! school has got me pretty busy and it’s only the second week! anyways…alice is engaged, not good. you really freaked me out w/ dana’s dream. it’s cool that u are developing roxy’s character more. i’m a little afraid of alice’s desperate measures. let the tension build… ^ – ^