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Lover’s Lapse – Chapter 33
“What the fuck was that?” yelled
“What Al? I didn’t hear anything,” Shane said as she turned over and pulled her pillow over her face.
“Surely not,” Shane said now wide awake. “Jesus it’s Christmas morning!”
No sooner had Shane said that then they both heard Tina yell again.
“What the hell did she just say about Candace?”
“Al get your ass back here. It’s better if we let them handle whatever is going on they don’t need our help I promise,” Shane said sarcastically.
“I just want to go see if everything is o.k. that’s all,”
Liza startled by all the noise started crying loudly. As
“Hey T,”
Following Tina into the nursery
“T?” she asked softly. “Are you alright?”
The sound of yet another door slamming caused both women to flinch.
“What the hell is going on Tina? Are you guys trying to see which one can slam a door off of its hinges the hardest?”
Tina hung her head and began to cry. “I told her to leave. That I didn’t want her here Oh God Alice what are we doing?”
Shane was in the kitchen as Bette came down the hallway. “Hey Bette,’ she said.
Bette didn’t acknowledge that she even saw Shane let alone hear her. She opened the front door and slammed it shut behind her. “Fuck me,” Shane mumbled. She grabbed her cigarettes and followed behind Bette.
As she came out of the house she found Bette sitting on the front steps crying. “Bette?” she said softly.
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(35 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Short chapters and post more. Shane is so wise for such a young person. Bette should listen to her as should Tina. thanks
Can you get Shane to talk to Tina, too. Get her to listen. And next time Tina wants to make love to Bette, she really should let her. They’d both be happier.
Great story, I love it, but could you make the posts a little longer please! I just want more of your story! please post soon and get this fixed and make sure Bette tells Tina she was thinking about her while she was pleasing herself, at least maybe then she can understand that Bette does want Tina!
Can you get “yoda” to have a heart to heart with Tina also. I figure her hormones must be causing some havoc… but get Tina to slow down and use her ears as well. Short chapters on a regular basis is great for me …. if that works for you as well. (smile) Thanks. Keep it coming.
They need to talk. Bette needs to tell Tina what she just told Shane. They need to LISTEN when the other is talking. Thanks for the post. I’ll take short chapters more often.
Tina needs to get a grip and understand that Bette wants only her and that she is trying to give her time to heal from the delivery before initiating lovemaking. Thanks for the post.
ohhhhhhhhh i hope b goes back in and tries again to talk with t and have t do the nasty on b
Keep the story coming. Love it. Love it. Post soon.
Damn this is awesome and Shane is good. Bette and Tina need to talk and let Bette explant. Ok post soon please, thanks!
great story, please post more frequently, thank you !
05, that was breaking my heart a little. Thank you for the post and I will take short chapters and posts more often. ; )
ok short… but we’ll take… love shane… hopefully she can talk bette into turning around and going back and telling tina what she told her… please post soon
these two need to talk to one another, good thing shane and alice are there to help them. more frequent posts please.
more more more and more
Oh man they need to talk..Tina needs to calm down too..she always jumping to conclusions. Short chapters and post more often is fine by me :)
Why did Bette not tell Tina everything that she just tols Shane, don’t throw the towel in talk to her
Great chapter. They need to talk!! Looking forward to more.
They need to talk. And they can make love without having sex, it can be frustrating, but not if it’s about connecting on a deeper level, especially for Tina, to know she s still desired and adored!!!
they totally need to talk and bette need to tell tina what she told shane…i’ll take short (but not too short) and often…thank you
Bette needs to go right back in and make Tina listen to her and tell her exactly what she told Shane. Don’t walk away. We like more, so if it has to be short to get it, okay.
Great chapter. Please Post More Soon Like Today!! Bette and Tina need to talk and Tina needs to here what Bette has to say same goes for Bette.
I’m confident in leaving Bette and Tina in your capable hands…Great chapter!