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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 6
Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 6
Previously
Bette stepped on the curb, walked up to the front door of Tinas apartment building and pulled open the door to the vestibule. As soon as she stepped inside she heard shouting mixed with screaming. It was coming from one of these apartments. Whoa, theres a couple of people not having a good time at all.
She started walking down the hall towards Tinas apartment door and the screaming was getting louder, the words more discernible. The hair on Bettes arms stood up. Tinas door looked ajarwhat the *****? The screams were coming from behind Tinas door. Bettes body went instantly into fight or flight mode – and fight catapulted her to that door
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Bettes right shoulder slammed into the partially opened door and nearly went with it as it crashed against the wall. Every hair on her body was on edge. Her heart pounding so fast she felt the blood pulsing in her ears.
She took a millisecond scan of the living room and kitchen. Tinas screams were coming from the bedroom. Bette did a pole vault over the couch landing squarely in front of it with a clear pathway to the bedroom.
You ***** dickhead, say goodbye to your ***** and balls – you wont be using them again as they no longer will be attached to your body, Bettes mind said to the unknown rapist.
Bette burst into the bedroom screaming TINA!!!!! Tinas cries were all she heard. She couldnt see Tina. Bettes body was pumped with adrenalin and fury. The rapists back was to her, his body hunched over, arms feverously trying to hold another set of arms down with his one arm and tearing at clothes with another. All this was registering in Bettes mind in nanoseconds. As she reached out with her left arm and grabbed the back of this demons head, her right arm simultaneously wrapped around his – Holy *****, this isnt a man! – her waist and yanked back and up and spun the ***** around.
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(32 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
Go freaking Bette, wooooooooo! That was great. Helena totally got what she deserved and calling Peggy…priceless. More, more, more!!!
WAHHHHOOOOO STOMP HER A$$ BETTE. OMG that was GRRRRREEAT.!!!!! More please. I mean both my dogs are wondering why the heck their Mom is yelling at the laptop. Hooorahhhhh!!!! OK now back to Tina. Is she OK? What about the baby. Please tell me they are OK.
Holy Shit that was great.
lol..OMG..that was fucking great..lol..helena you are in deep trouble..mama Peaboby will eat you alive but i dont know whats worse Bette or Peggy..lol..great chapter..post soon please
That was f—— great!!!
Alright Bette, you go girl!!! That bitch deserves everything you dish out to her!!! It’s about time somebody gives her what she deserves and puts her in her place!!! Please post soon.
HELL YEA. THATS WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT. GREAT UPDATE. PEGGY IS GONNA CUT HELENA’S AS OFF.
Alright Bette! You go girl. Can’t go wrong stomping on Helena’s ass! Loved it!
I have to tell you i love this…i started reading it at work and when i’m at work i can not comment… but i’m here now and loving this…i wish we could have seen bette kick the BITCH’S ASS all over west hollywood…great ch…reading on
Fucking LOVE THIS CHAPTER…Bette needs to beat her ass some more …PLEASE POST SOON
Ohh go Bette kick that Bitch’s ass, I hope Peggy disownes her and cuts off her money! Tina is one lucky girl thank god Bette can in time!
GO BETTE! Fantastic writing, I loved it!
Great story, go on Bette, you did good.
Really enjoying this story. Tender love scenes, and woo hoo for Bette!
You go Bette. Peggy will take care of her ass….
K
That was GREAT! Loved it.
I just read chapters 1-6 – now I need 7-12 – great story – & ringing Peggy – genius!