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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 5
Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 5
Previously – moments after Bette has left Tinas apartment Am I freakin insane? It did change everything. Did I not hear all I said to Bette today? Is this ALADAdult ***** Attention Disorder? Ive got to talk to her – at least get a message to her. I still have her cell number on speed dial. It goes right to her voicemail – of course, shes at the therapists office right now. This is Bette Porter. Im not available. Please leave your message. Bette, baby, its Tina. Please ignore that woman behind the curtain at the door of my apartment. Pay no attention to what she said. Listen to what Im saying now. Today did change everything. I want your presence in my life and our babys life.. I want us to work towards a mending of our relationship. I want us to make things right again, no matter how difficult the task. I want us to learn from our past mistakes and grow together. I wantI want – damn it – I want you. The tears are now clouding my eyes. I end the call and say a silent prayer she checks her voicemail when leaving Foxworthys office. I look at the clock. 5:45. Helena is due here in 45 minutes. H-Day minus 45. This evening I tell her its over. I cant do whatever it is were doing anymore. It hasnt been fun for sometime now. Ive tried to end it before, but each time her manipulation of my feelings with her feigned sorrow at losing me caused me to give in. Not today, Helena, not today. I’m heading home to my heart and neither ***** nor high water is going to stop me.
I walked into my bedroom and my senses were immediately hammered with the lingering aroma of what occurred here today. I close my eyes, breathe in deeply. Yes, I just felt it, I did, I know it – as corny as it may sound – my heart just smiled. Today the process of the scarring over of my cracked heart accelerated just a bit – and that felt great.
Shower – The warm water felt wonderful as it cascaded over my body, my large body. Whoa, I’m huge! And baby makes three – yeah, three of me is what it feels like. I place my hands on my belly, watch as the water flows over, between and under my fingers. I love you little one – we love you. The water falling over me now will be nothing in comparison to the love that will wash over you when you enter this world.
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(28 votes, average: 4.39 out of 5)
Oh come on…give me more!!! I don’t like cliffhangers!!!
ohh the things will became pretty ugly for Helena..Bette kick helenas assssss..i cant wait for the next chapter
Good Lord, my stomach was in my throat reading that!!!
Come on don’t leave us in suspense, lets hope Bette get to Tina in time, please post the next chapter soon.
OMG you had me yelling GO BETTE once I read she pulled up there. I can not believe how much I get drawn into these stories….. Please please please POST SOON… Pretty please with sugar on top…
OMG! What a cliffhanger, you’re a tease. Me thinks it’s time for Bette to give Helena some serious whoop ass. Longer chapters please and post soon!
What the…? You can’t leave us hangin’ NOW!!! I have already chewed my nails, clenched my fists until they turned white…Soon there will be nothing let to do so please post soon…Thanks.
K
I love it, I hope Bette kicks her ass.
OMG!! That bitch is crazy, and you are just as bad, leaving us hanging like this. Please update tonight??? I wont be able to sleep unless you do. Dont do this. Great chapter, I hope I see more of you by bedtime.
Shit please don’t leave us hanging and PLEASE let Bette kick her assssss..Love the story
Hey arceextl! My first time commenting for you. Excellent series! I love how Bette and Tina are picking up the pieces and getting their relationship back on track. Bette better hurry and get in there soon to save Tina!!
this is what I would have liked to have seen on the show. I would love to see Better kick Helena’s ass