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Love && Basketball – Part 20
"The Spot" (5 Seconds Later)
After the celebration was over Shane gentlly set Carmen down and grabbed her hand, "well, for our date, how would you like to go to Paris with me, so we can get our things for the prom?"
Carmen squeezed Shane’s hand and said excitidly, "baby, I’d love to, but we have school Monday and no way of getting there that fast."
"Well you see baby, I’ve taken all those things into measure, but what you don’t know is that Papi’s parents who live in New York City own their own private jet", Shane corrected with a smile.
Carmen placed a hand over her mouth and averted her eyes to Papi as if looking for validation. Papi just simply said with a huge grin, "looks like we’re going to France!", Papi exclaimed, pumping her fists in the air.
From 30 yards away Alice, Jenny, and Dana were running over to celebrate the good news with them. Alice was jumping up and down from excitement, "hey, shaney, you know Dane and I have never been to France", said Alice hinting her want to go.
"Duh, Alice, we’d never take such an extravagant trip without you", Shane replied while putting her right arm around Carmen’s waist.
Alice hugged Jenny and Dana both then Shane took a look at Sam, Paige, and Morgan and said, "thanks so much for helping me out guys, it means a lot to me, and you can totally come to Paris with us if you want."
Sam took off her mask and replied, "thanks for the invite Shane, and it was great to help you out, but I have to make sure I get an A+ on my next Pyschics test or I’m failing for the year. So i gotta go study, but I’ll catch you later", she finished as she jogged off the shore and back up to her car on the cliffs above.
Meanwhile, Paige and Morgan took off their masks and Morgan said, "Well, I’m actually attending a few schools to ask about a scholarship, thanks Shane, but I gotta go man."
Then Paige said, "Yeah, and I promised my father I’d go to tennis camp this week, thanks for the invite, and have fun in Paris guys", Paige shouted over her shoulder as her and Morgan ran up the stairs and out of sight.
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(37 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
really enjoying this story..glad your back and updating.pps
Love that Shane is being so true to Carman. Alice will always be Alice, so watch out Paris I waiting to see what she does.
I thought Shane and Carm were going to join the mile high club for a minute there. Very nicely done can’t wait for more. PS
you have been sorely missed, love this story and so pumped that your back with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow just read threw the whole story..damnn its amazing!! hope you post soon!!
Diablo..Mami!! this was hot!! please, post an update soon!! This Fic is so badass!! nice work babe
Man!! U cant jus leave us hangin like that!! I waz soo in2 this story!! Read it in one whole sittin!! PLz PLz PMS!!! I luv it!!!!
Great story, x Krush x14 =)Iim really enjoying it. I hope you post again real soon. Keep up the good work ;)Dani
Well, you have more than 4 commemts already, but extra ones will get you to update even faster?? :) PPSBTW, that was hot!!
Fantastic!!! I love it!! Come on people…we need comments. I have to have an update!! It can’t stop here.
Jenny and Shane hooked up? Eww, eww, eww! *shakes head* Anyway, the heat between Shane and Carmen during the airplane ride made me think they were going to join the mile-high club. Looks like Shane’s patience with Carmen is going to pay off. Hope you post soon. :)
ugh!!! you are killing me!!! that was Über hot!!!! sizzling hot!!! please, please, please post soon!!!Ü i Über loved it!!! hahaha… lAtEr!!! hOtFoRsHaNe!!!Ü
how did i miss this update? – scratches head. well it’s not too late, hehe..oh lord, shane and jenny dated in 9th grade? erm, that makes me feel nauseous a little.. but the sex talk that jenny had with carmen was kinda funny but too much details on how shane wld be in bed, and coming from jenny! GASP! :p can’t wait for them to get into the hotel room! haha..
OMG!!! THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING! i know i havent commented so far but… OMG! that was amaingly awesome! and i need more! like NOW! please update soon! you were just about to get to the good part and you havent updated! please! update soon!