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(Angie’s Story)

Portard: Okay, come on munchkin time to get up now.
Portard still had his eyes closed but reached over for Angie and when he didn’t feel her small body next to his, his parental instincts kicked in and he bolted up.
Portard: Angelica!
Olivia also bolted up when she heard her husband frantically calling her daughter’s name.
Olivia: Angie!
They both looked around calling her name until they spotted her in the woods but that wasn’t the scary part, it was what was coming towards Angie that got them dashing for her like a bat out of hell.
Portard: Angie sweetheart come to daddy!
Portard said running to Angie.
Angelica: Daddy I hurt my legs.
Angie said innocently not understanding the danger she was in.
Once Portard and Olivia got close by they stopped just a few feet from Angie as the bear by then was also just a few feet from Angie but on the other side.
Olivia: Angelica baby don’t move, stay there and let daddy get you honey.
Olivia said sobbing and with a shaky voice.
Portard: Nice bear…nice bear…Angie sweetie walk slowly to daddy please honey.
Angelica got up and started walking towards Portard slowly but every move she made the bear was on her trail. Olivia and Portard both could feel the worst about to happen and Olivia prayed to herself that they were wrong. When Angelica got close by, Portard quickly grabbed her and through her to Olivia as the bear began to charge.
Portard: GET OUT OF HERE NOW, GO ON!
He yelled to his wife and picked up to largest branch he could find and started swinging at the bear. The bear stood up and let out a deep loud roar which caused both Angelica and Olivia to shiver and start screaming. Usually loud noises are supposed to make black bears go away but the louder they screamed the more he attacked. Portard looked behind him at his wife and daughter to see if they were far away and in that moment the bear reached out and dug his claws right into Portard’s chest.
Portard: AHHHHHH FUCK!!
The wound was so deep Portard blood starting pouring out quickly and he dropped to his knees screaming in agony. To Olivia as a wife, it was the scariest and hardest sound to hear a husband make, and against her better judgment Olivia stopped running and looked back at her husband and she saw him dropped to his knees clutching his chest.
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Damn! I was thinking the same thing that a will was left. Kit would get custody but she will say she’s too old and let Bette and Tina have Boo. Especially once she founds out about the bond Tina has with Boo. Please post again TODAY!! Loved it. PPS
Dang TN1….totally gruesome to read I can only imagine how you felt when you were writing it. Poor Angie, hopefully Kit will help out since she knew the family and Tina and Angie can be together…BAM!… You are totally awesome storyteller!…Portard huh…priceless!..what a page turner you’re writing….thx for updating so soon…Boom!…lubya
Portard what an ugly name first or last. Chuckled at that. Loved the update, thanks.
As a good reader I’m keeping my theories on the continuing story to myself!
Look forward to seeing if I’m right but don’t think PF’s far off!
That was horrible to read, so sad that Angie lost her parents like that.
I hope that Kit is indeed the one that got custody over Angelica, should something happen with her parents and that is how B&T become her New parents.
Great, but sad update!
Let Bette and Tina be Angie new parents for good!PPS!
Wow that was creepy, angel see their
country being killed was horrible and very sad.
Let’s hope that Bette and Tina able
custody of Angel.
I wait anxiously next chapter.
5 stars.
It was really quite difficult to read, and we thank you that in spite of the difficulties you wrote us a great chapter.
I’m like the others, I hope Kit will help to Angie, that Bette and Tina be raised her.
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Keep churning this story, TN1 – really love king your story! Thank you!
The attacked was horrifying , poor Angie… Please let Tina and Bette love her from now.
I love your story very much.. Thank you.. Pps