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Like Looking Into a Mirror: With a little help from you
Ok guys. I’m looking for a little help. I’m kind of at a fork in the road on how to begin the next chapter for this story. I thought I would put some ideas down and then you guys can help pick out which one would be good for me to go on.
A) Shane goes back to her apartment with the things that Andie asked for and they kind of have some more one on one time.
B) We begin with Andie still at Shane’s waiting for Shane to get back. She is working on a song on a piece of paper and she has some type of hot flashbacks back to the night before with Shane. Shane returns and they begin a type of build up to the story of different parts of Andie’s past as well as getting soon leading to the story of the “battle wounds”.
C) Andie is back at the Planet working later that day. During different times in the day, she has thoughts of the night before. She runs into Alice at one point and she tells Alice she is thinking about telling Shane about the scars.
D) Same as C, but instead Alice tells Andie that she thinks she should tell Shane about the scars. To create a little drama, Andie gets a little upset about it being brought up, starting a little fight between her and Alice and then her and Shane later. She has some flashbacks about the past.
Ok you guys tell me what you think and then whatever is the most popular I will build Chapter 12 from there.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
All sounds good, I like B also C. B better
B…definately B
i also think that if you want to make the story longer you should definetely go for D, if not, B is the nice and happy one for you!!!! hope it helps!!!
D D D D D D D D D- definately D!
Maybe D would be the best option, especially if you want to make this last a little longer. Besides, anybody would get upset if you are told what you ought to do ! Especially if it’s something of your past you haven’t gotten over yet.
It’s your choice, but I like B the best.I’m sure it’ll be great no matter which one you choose. Hope that helped you out a little bit anyway
I like B but D seems more realistic….when we’re scared we pick fights
Mmm… loving every word of this fic and I think D sounds good…
Ok guys, I think I have my answer look for it in the next few days. Thanks everyone!