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Like a fairytale, chpt 10
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Once upon a time on ‘like a fairytale’:
She had never seen so much people at once before… Not even at Tina’s birthdayparty… The thought of her best friend brought tears to the lady’s maids daughters eyes… She loved her so deeply that being seperated from her hurted in an awfull way and she heard the beatifull female’s voic resound in her head:
You have come back before she turns 16… Just remember…
She was brough back to the here and now by Shane’s outcry whan the girl had clearly seen someone she knew:
Girls! I’ve got her… Come on!
A sweetlooking brunette and a laughing blond came running out of the crowd. The brunette was carrying a bag of what looked like groceries and clearly had trouble with the weight of it…
As Bette offered to help her carry it the girl looked surprised but pleased…
Yes please… I am Dana by the way
As the girl extented her hand the bag almost fell out of her hands and Bette and Alice both reached out to save it…
Dana raised her eyebrows and giggled nervously
Woops…
Dana! You freakin’… Oh whatever… I’m Alice, Bette… Welcome
Bette hadn’t noticed they had reached a forest. They were standing in front of a beautifully built little house… She liked it instantly and smiled when she heard Shane’s husky voice:
Welcome home
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Chapter 10
Bette at first hadn’t believed it when the girls said they lived there all by themself… But is was true… There was a small garden behind the house where they got fruit and vegetables and when Bette asked where they got money to pay for the stuff Dana had just bought, Shane just laughed and told her she had her ‘acquaintances’…
Bette missed her family dearly, her parents but most of all her best friend who she loved more than anything in the world…
That first night she couldn’t sleep and left the room Shane had brought her to, to sit at the mall dinnertable… Looking out of the window she saw the stars and sighed, while tears rolled down her cheeks, whispering…
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Although I don’t say it very often, but I am loving your story. Looking forward to more.
i can’t believe it i am first! Lamentamini is almost all the time first with a very great comment! i was resign to wait until monday to read anoteher chapter but surprise! you post! thanks. Then september is Shane’s aunt! ok! i hope the Bette’s family are calms now that they know that she will be rigth. Tina is so sad. i hope they can be in touch in someway. very good as usual. take care
well almos the first :D jeje
Nice, very nice. Hou ze niet te lang uit elkaar, ze horen echt bij elkaar.
Whoa…this like a Cinderelly Fic…nice I like it…are Alice & Dana 2gether?
I love this story!!! And, what a fun idea to use a large font on the first word…just like in the fairytale books!! It was a nice touch that brought a smile to my face. And, September being Shane’s aunt…perfect!! Thanks!
DAMN that was a tease chapter if I ever saw one! lol gogk, I was busy playing a game when this was posted so no way would I have been first. hehe And no, Cher, was NOT my first crush. LMAO I hope Tina has a special hiding place for her necklace because I think her mom would take it away if she knew who it came from. :( Off-topic, but the Wendy’s ad on this site always makes me hungry and I’m looking at one right now. Mmmmmmmm roasted turkey and swiss frescata. *drools*
Uh, Aunt September? hm.. that’s interesting. ‘A face seemed to emerge from that water’…Creepy!!!! lol.. don’t make me scream like a girl! I alway enjoy reading this story, thanks for posting.
“Aunt September”, now things are going to get a little more interesting. The girls will take good care of Bette but, someone needs to tell her parents that she is fine and will return one day.
this is really great but such a tease…aunt september, huh? very interesting
So September is Shane’s aunt. Now we know for sure that Bette is in good hands. Tina and Maxine also know that Bette is safe and that she will once again return to them. Now, the problem is how long do they have to wait. I fear that it will be right before the princess’s birthday (16th). I know that Bette will have a whole in her heart but she will be around those that will take care of her. Tina will be around the wicked witch of the castle who will do anything to keep Bette and the princess apart forever. I wonder what the king thinks about all of this. He has got to see that his daughter is devastated. I hope that September remembers to come and help me out after all those years. She may have to push me in a wheelchair but I will be looking for her.
hello there… love this story… but this was a tease… i know the girls will keep bette safe… but i worry for tina… ok now please post the rest of this chapter…
This story is getting more interesting and excited. So September is Shane’s Aunt. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I worry about Tina,Bette seems to be in safe hands, Aunt September is Shanes aunt. Love this story thanks
There is a lot of wonderful stories on the site the now, but yours and ally (the L wing) are my favourite. You amke my day when you post and your writing is well, like ally, I am sitting on the edge opf my seat hanging on your every word. I love it keep up the first class work xx
Whoopydoo! I’ve caught up with this one as well. And I’m bloody loving it to death! Oh shoot, gotta go to bed now – almost 1 a.m. and I’m trying to get to bed early :S English exam tomorrow and I’m so gonna kick ass thnx to all the great stories I’ve read on this site! Ik wil er nog een!!! :D
Very different story…but in a good way…you´re a great writer and am looking forward for the next post…
Hope B&T would move on before our justloveB+T decided to bring their destiny to them ;) But please don’t build the road ahead too bumpy :( *sigh* my heart aching with B&T…