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    Letting Go – chapter ten

    Story written on August 22, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=56188
    Author Notes:

    What does Alice tell Tina, and what does Bette and Tina see?

    Chapter ten:

     

    Bette was lying on her bed tossing and turning unable to sleep.  Needless to say, Monday night was ***** for Bette. After hearing from Kelly that Eric was planning on a proposal, Bette quickly went from floating on cloud nine to a sudden rapid drop straight into the ground plunging head first shattering her hopes.

     

    Forget Tina, there was nothing Bette could do; she didn’t want to be that one who would hurt an innocent person.  Despite how deep Bette’s love for Tina had quickly become, she refused to become that third person in a relationship.  Besides, Bette had only known Tina for less than a day, how much love could’ve possibly formed within the short span of hours?

     

    ‘Infinite,’ Bette could fool her mind, but she couldn’t fool her heart into believing she wasn’t in love with Tina.  If friendship was her only option with Tina, friendship would be what Bette would take.

     

    Staring at the dark ceiling, Bette raised her right hand and let her arms hang in the air.  The bracelet was now dangling loosely swinging back and forth like a pendulum.  As Bette’s gaze switched from the ceiling to her bracelet, she asked herself ‘How can your heart beat so strongly for someone you don’t even know, and how can it hurt so much for someone you don’t want to love?’

     

    Bette remembered what she told herself this afternoon while she was holding Tina’s hand in her own, she said she wouldn’t let go, but she didn’t have much of a choice now.  Why did it always seem like Bette had to let go of everything she wanted to hold onto, and why was it that she had to hold onto everything she wanted to let go of?

     

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    “Hey baby, how was your first day of student teaching?” Eric asked curiously on the other line.

     

    “It was okay; just glad I’m still alive.” Tina had significantly cut down her phone conversations with Eric to a minimum by keeping her responses short.

     

    This had been going on for the last few months, Eric felt the distance in Tina’s voice, and he couldn’t help but ask.

     

    “Tina, what’s wrong?  Are you okay?” Eric was never confident in their relationship, but he tried his best to make Tina happy.

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    6. OMG don’t stop there!!! Are you trying to kill us?? I love this story it just keeps getting better. So sweet, this is the right kind of drama. I love it. Keep up the good work.

    7. Just caught back up with the last few chapters. Damn girl. There just too cute. All the internal turmoil, as well as external. STill gotta love Alice, she just cracks me up. BUt you left us hanging again, hello, what did she see or whom? Come on post, post.

    9. and WHAT??? Urgh… you’re getting better at the cliffhangers! I hate you. LOL, jk. oKAY… CAN’t WAIITT! Yeah, you sure don’t know what you’re writing and I like it better that way (mischievous grin).

    10. Ok, I’m totally lov’n this story, but pls these chapters although 2 are WAY too short, your killing me here!! Pls PLs more were just getting to some good stuff!!!! Tks

    11. Ohhhhh sh*t! You DID NOT stop this chapter right there!! LOL Damn, this is getting better and better! I can’t stand the suspense. Put me outta my misery and post again soon. Please. =) BTW, I like this chapter!

    12. stop selling yourself short girl. your doing a great job. but you did not just end the chappy that way did you. that was sooo uncalled for. you best be posting soon. and if its eric, i swear somones not gonna be happy. i love this story and your doing a great job with the pace and writing. so do it again, now, or asap. thanks.

    13. if Bette and Tina looked up and saw Eric then perhaps Eric needs to head out to McDonalds ALONE. I really do enjoy your story… For some reason I just happen to think that it is very sweet. Once again, I really relate to the initial perfume encounter lol

    15. Smile….you’re getting better and better every day with this cliff hanging shyt…..WTG girl!! WTG!!!

      Now post another chapter before I to get someone shoot me and put me out my misery……

      Really diggin’ this story.

    16. arrrrrrrgghh!!! quel suspense!! ce n’est pas humain de nous laisser comme cela… Merci pour ton histoire, j’attends la suite avec impatience

    18. Thanks for the two chapters that I got to read this morning. First of all, I need to convince you that you absolutely must continue writing. This is a wonderful story and you are doing excellent with it. Second, I am so glad Tina got rid of the necklace….and that Alice continues to help these two. Now I cannot wait for your next post and for these two to start revealing their feelings to each other. Kiitos paljon!

    20. Awww c’mon now, you can’t just leave us hangin’ like that. What’s up with that?!!! They’re supposed to go to lunch. They haven’t even made it out to the car?!!! Can you help a sista’ out here? PLEASE!!!??!!

    22. How can your heart beat so strongly for someone you don’t even know, and how can it hurt so much for someone you don’t want to love?’

      Wow… wow… wow… I was really really… speechless when I first read that line… and still am overwhelmed by that line…
      The story is great, all the actions and details are bringing us to the edge of our chair :)
      Well, Tina better don’t let go, she’ll have to be the one to catch and hold onto Bette if Bette’s gonna give up :P

    24. so do all of the authors get together to decide the best ways to write cliffhangers that leave us readers yelling at the screen?!!! LOL
      I forgive you smile, just please tell us who is standing there. I bet it’s Eric……hmmm. anyway you got me until the end.

    25. hmmm.. this is getting interesting! how will eric react to the missing necklace? oh dont tell me he’s gonna get down on his knee in front of bette! nice work.. hope u post soon!

    26. I’m sooooooo frustrated with all these cliffies on this site! I think need to take a break and come back in a month or so and then just catch up on everything…*hmph* YEAH, RIGHT! Like THAT is ever gonna happen! I’ve got a monkey on my back–Hell, I’ve got a shit-load of monkeys hangin’ all over my ass and one of them is “smile12345”! Toss me a frickin’ bone, will ya?…and get on with it!!!!Please post soon! (Oh yeah, the answer to your question about why I started to read your story….hmmmm…..I’m a sucker for B & T beginnings, AND I liked your ‘smile’;)!

    27. Damn smile..you didn´t just stop here…you are a tease keeping us on the edge of our seat…and you´re not seriously thinking about cutting this story..you are doing so great..so keep going because we want more lots more. post soon

    28. HEY SMILES, YES, I am still loving your story and from all your comments I think everybody else does too..EXCEPT FOR THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!RIGHT???? ANYWAY, there is no way I would be offended about what you said about sag’s we all know how we are.HEHEHEHR.KEEP UP THE FABULOUS STORY O.K. THANKS

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