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    Letting Go – Chapter six

    Story written on August 15, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=56042
    Author Notes:

    Tina’s answer to Alice’s question.

    Chapter six:

     

    ‘*****…what the ***** is she talking about…me…*****?‘ was the only thought Tina had before she could actually answer.

     

    Tina sat there shocked.  Her mouth hung open, but she couldn’t speak and didn’t know how to respond.  Her eyes followed Bette and Alice while she was still thinking ‘AM I?’ She felt like a deer that was caught in headlights, a million answers ran through her mind ‘Yes, things make sense now,’ ‘No, I’m not, I’m just not in love with Eric,’ ‘There’s an attraction to Bette,’ ‘but wait, I’m not,’ ‘Hmm…is THIS what this is?’  All those answers, but not one of many answers ever made its way out of her mouth.  She knew she would have to answer eventually, but nothing would come out.

     

    Tina’s senses suddenly became vivid.  She felt every emotion: desire, excitement, fear.  The rising temperature traveling from the chest up to her flushed face to the numbing of her body from the waste down, Tina felt everything.  She was overwhelmed with everything rushing to her brain at once, and she could only sit there hoping, praying this was just a dream, please just let this be a dream.  When she’d wake up, there would be no Bette, there would be no Alice, and there would be no questioning of her sexuality, but did she really wish Bette didn’t exist?

     

    For Bette, this was a moment of truth.  If Tina would answer “yes,” then Bette would have a chance.  If Tina’s answer was “no,” then Bette would have to force herself to move on.  She eagerly awaited Tina’s response, it was like she was watching a movie about to reach its climatic scene and she couldn’t take her eyes off.

     

    “Alice!”  Bette was shocked at just how blunt Alice could be, and she kicked her under the table.

     

    “What?”  Alice asked, while her facial expression changed to a somewhat innocent looking one tilting her head lightly to one side and squinting her eyes and nose.

     

     

    *Ding Ding Ding Ding*

     

    Alice‘s awkwardness was saved by the bell, she was embarrassed for asking the question so straight forward.  She sometimes hated that quick mouth of hers, speaking before thinking.

     

    “Oh, well, there’s the bell, heh heh…” Alice jumped up from her seat.  “I’ve gotta run, I’m meeting a student to help her with her research paper,” she continued as she grabbed her stuff and headed out the door.

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    1. So glad I had a desk in front of me, or I would have bust my nose on the floor. Love that Tina helped with the kiss. YES. Was dreaming it was my knee she had her hand on. A girl can dream can’t she. Thanks

    2. Hey smile I’m still catching up of you’re Story WHOA! I Love it it’s really nice another Wonderful Amazing writer Hey I Love it Please continue post soon.

    5. Just got caught up from lastweek. Alice that girl kills me, she reminds me of my best friend, no B.S. just comes flat out with stuff. This is getting so exciting, I was hanging on the edge of my chair which is hard since I’m trying to work. This is going along beautifully, keep it going girl, looking forward to your next update.

    8. Stop having heart attack already… haha… no way to stop me from reading :P
      This is great… seriously… I didn’t see any of my stuff in there… you did it yourself!!! Gals, smile did this herself!! Yey!!! Haha… ok, I’m rubbing my hands together now for Chap7 :)) Btw, your chap5 b4 changes were great too, but after the changes it’s… better!!!

    9. and…………..
      Twas kind of messed up ending the chapter like this. But regardless it was still good.
      My favorite thing starts with a T and ends with a M and rhymes with capitalism. : D
      Can you guess?
      I think the world would be a better place if more people gave each other hugs. Hugs are magical.

    10. I think that your story is very well written – certainly NOT horrible. Look forward to reading more from you. Don’t be critical of your writing – you do it well.

    11. Darn, how can you leave it at that!?! I noticed myself leaning forward at my chair….I was cheering Tina on! Great chapter! I love this story! Kiitos!

    12. gratefully not alot of chappys to catch up on. really grooving to this story line. i love dialogue and details. dont mind a LITTLE drama. your a good writer and leave me wanting more. thanks.

    21. Alice is a pain in the butt but we all love her for whom she is. Loving the update so do continue. Now as a writer yourself you can see the differenc between commenting and not. So do comment yourself. Don´t be shy…..we will like what ever you have to say…don´t hold back. Post soon

    26. Yeh!! You totally have us all at the edge of our seat…not a good place to leave us by the way…not nice!! This is a great story line and well written, keep going you have us all waiting for more…I’m seeing fanfic award in your future!!! go girl

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