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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 27A
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Many more minutes passed and in the background, coming from the converted garage, The Bangles sang about an Eternal Flame. For Bette and Tina, so attuned to each other, so deeply involved with making love, they did not notice the music that had been loud and intrusive earlier. It was nothing more than ambient sound in the environment, now. They breathed together, slowly, fully–deep inhales and exhalations that lasted for several seconds. Bette pulled Tina down and their faces were so close that their lips should have connected, but they didn’t. Whenever Tina bent to Bette’s swollen lips, Bette turned to her left or right slightly and then when Tina pulled back, Bette was there again, bringing her closer to her mouth, but shying from the kiss. Soon, it was as if they were kissing as Tina breathed out and Bette captured that breath as she inhaled. Repeatedly they did this. Bette exhaled and Tina took possession of that breath by breathing in. It was no longer a game of “catch me if you can,” but a session on being one with each other, uniting as individuals to become one entity. There was not one aspect of their lovemaking that was disconnected. Bette rocked under Tina, keeping her filled and aroused, showing her that her pleasure was foremost, while Tina swayed on top of her completing the loving, sexual, sensual circle they had created.
Time passed. Bette stared into Tina’s eyes and Tina saw the abject devotion. She returned that to Bette, her hazel eyes looked into the depths of Bette’s heart. Again, it was dizzying.
Tina bent to Bette’s ear. “Heaven,” she said with a sigh.
Bette leaned back a fraction or two to raise her heels onto the wood frame of the bed, and spread her legs slightly. Still in sync, they both increased their movements, Tina undulated on top of Bette, Bette danced sexily beneath Tina; Tina rose, Bette pulled back, Tina pressed down and Bette lifted in response. They moved faster together. Bette licked Tina’s neck, grabbed the few inches of hair that Tina had, yanked her head back, kissed her neck, her collarbone. Her hand cupped the side of Tina’s breast. She pushed her pelvis forward, against Tina so that her clit rubbed against Tina’s skin. Tina’s hands groped at Bette’s hair, fingers raked through it. She caressed Bette’s shoulder and then her hands traveled over her upper back, gliding over skin damp with perspiration. Her hair brushed against Bette’s face. Bette’s hands were on Tina’s ass, moving her up and down on the toy, then her hands were on Tina’s back, and finally back down to her ass. She pulled Tina forward, lifted her, then leaned back, and Bette’s hips rose and fell, driving into Tina while Tina drove into her. Bette was up again, holding Tina, her hand behind her neck, pulling her down for a kiss, then another and another. Kisses deepened. Their bodies were solidly against each other with not one bit of daylight between them, not one centimeter of the dildo visible between them. Tina’s clitoris was hard and pressed against the warmth of Bette’s flesh. Tina wrenched her head away breathlessly. Her head rolled back onto her shoulders; she hissed, her mouth opened forming and ‘O,’ but no sound as her body lurched forward again and again, her clitoris being stimulated by Bette’s body with each contact. Tina grunted while Bette’s upper body quivered. Bette’s head lulled back, too. Her mouth opened; a toothy grimace that was all about culmination and fulfillment was frozen on her face. Bette could hardly hold Tina up as the quake hit her, the epicenter between her legs opened up; an uncontrolled jolt rushed upward and journeyed over every part of her body. Bette’s head jerked back and to the side over and over while Tina’s body shuddered. Tina’s fingernails scratched into Bette’s back, her fingers pushing into the flesh, holding on, grasping as her desire took over, owned her, and finally had its way with her.
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I thought this story was over!! Never have I been more happily surprised than finding 84 pages…84pages!!… for me to read on vacation. I am presently doing a happy dance, Portia. Thanks so much! Take good care! Lin
Wow. This story is ALWAYS worth the wait. Love it.
I’ve just spent a very enjoyable time reading this. I’ve enjoyed every word, of this, every word. There’s so much in here, hope, joy, redemption, sadness, and of course the hotness… I loved it. Portia… I don’t know what else to say at this point but “Thank You.”
‘PortiaOnly’ – you are enshrined permanently on my favorite authors list… this tale you’re weaving contines to be amazing! Thanks for all your hard work linking the L-word past to your brand-new future, you’re the best!
“Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 27A”: Techie goes to her happy place. …Wait right here, Portia, while I go stock up on water, and provisions. I usually read these right through in one sitting. Your previous record was 57 pages. I think I’ll need a massaging chair pad. BRB…
Just when I thought this chapter couldn’t possibly get any better, we were treated to the wondrous, brilliantly orchestrated B&T scenes in the final 20-plus pages. “Tour de force” is a shopworn expression, but it perfectly describes “Laid Up”. Your dedication and the quality of your work continues to amaze. Thanks so much.
That may be the most romantic and erotic scene between B&T I have ever read. I loved Tina’s list of joys–I am in awe of your thoughtfulness and creativity. Try as I may, I couldn’t make myself feel bad for Stephanie. I do feel bad for Theresa–seeing your child in pain, even one as rotten as Stephanie, must be agony. It seems you have begun to wrap up a lot of storylines, but as a most-devoted fan, I am crossing my fingers you will be continuing this story for a long, long time :). Thank you for this amazing post–I’ll be counting the days until we see you again.
WOW 84 pages and i love every single page!! you hit every emotion and then some!!! so worth the wait!!! :)
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic. I can’t think of the equivalent of being “speechless” for the written word, but whatever it is called, that is what I am. Thank you so very very much.
wonderful as always
The wait was worth it absolutly!! 84 pages WOW. Thx and I’ll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
Oh I made a happy face as I saw you post again. And got wide eyes to see 84 pages. Thanks, thanks. You make my day. PPS
omg … it took 2 days to finish butm i did… loved it as always… what a story… and what a toy… PPS
This has to be a record on so many levels…almost 2500 hits in 3days…Do you know how amazing you are as a writer, a storyteller…How lucky are the people in your life that get to call you friend, what a blessing you must be. As a loyal reader and fan I can only imagine. Please don’t ever stop writing, and in your spare time could you pls think about writing a B&T beginning. I loved your Bette coming out story. Portia you are brilliant, you leave me breathless with every chapter. Thankyou just never seems to be enough, thankyou!!!
Fucking Superb!!! Thats all I can say…A true testament of brilliance
99 pages and the bitch ain’t one! Doesn’t make sense but I wanted to use Jay Z’s line. I think the Nyquil that I am slugging down is doing weird things to my brain. Spectacular storytelling. You have this immense talent to weave together many story lines into this coherent overarching story just like life. Just a true pleasure to read and savor. It’s worth investing the time into reading and digesting this chapter. I hope you continue to bestow us with your amazing talent.