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Je t’aime (part 1 of 3)
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Bette felt strange to be stating the obvious, but did it anyway, “Because she thinks I’m in love with someone else,”
In Williams screen room, Tina felt her head as it began to swim, her rational thoughts buried beneath layers of sleep deprivation and rum. So Bette and Jodi were finished, perhaps, and either way Bette didn’t seem to be too cut up about it, but then with Bette that didn’t always mean she wasn’t underneath,
“I should let you go,” said Tina suddenly, “you probably want to be on your own,”
“No …” Bette hurried in reply, “no … I mean … I actually really don’t, want to be alone that is …”
Something in her voice made Tina’s heart threaten to rip in two, sever at the very tip and explode inside her chest, leaving her gasping for air and an aide to her circulation. Bette’s voice at its most vulnerable could break any resolve she might have, leaving her powerless to fight the pull,
She looked around her for somewhere more comfortable to sit, fearing they might be a while, down the other end of the coridoor Jenny and Adele could be heard singing out loudly to Abba music, no doubt with William watching perversely on, she spied an armchair in the corner of the dark room and curled herself into it,
“Bette … are you okay?”
Bette muttered something under her breath in reply,
“Bette?”
Bette paused, her left hand completely bare of any jewellery and resting upon her thigh where she sat, for a while after they finally said the end was the end she’d worn a different ring each week upon that hand, just to distract away from what was missing. Now with Tina’s voice in her ear speaking soothing tones, Bette grew close to tears, pitying herself that if their union would come together in the end, then why did they have to go through all that just to grow with each other and understand,
“I’m afraid,” Bette whispered quietly,
Tina let it settle for a moment to see if Bette had more, “Afraid of what?”
“That she was right, that Jodi was right, I’m not being fair to either of you,”
Tina sighed, “I knew when I kissed you, you were with someone else,”
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Well shit girl, get your ass on the concorde and head out. I would have already been out the door. And being the girl that is always prepared I know Bette has her passport with her.
love it love it love it
that cahpter was so powerful and emotional, yet sweet.. aweeee love the alice reference to buffy slaying,lol… :)
Gee, you writing skill has just grown by leaps and bounds since “Family Vacation”. Amazing! Thanks!
Since Tina asked so sweetly,heck she was begging. Get your skinny butt on the plane . go aftwe your babys Momma. thanks
I want to go to Paris after reading this chapter and their banter. PPS.
babe, i’ve had too much wine, i’m going to have to re-read and comment intelligently tomorrow. but i must say…love it…well, you already showed it to me and i already complimented you on it, but i think its inspired, how you keep painting these dialogues the way you do. its really like painting, how you write, everything flows together like perfectly combined colors on a canvas. ok, i’m going to shut up now, cuz i’m gushing again. but i don’t care, i’ll gush all i like. you’re a poet. hehe. ok, i’ll comment again tomorrow. but for the record: pfft on henry. lol. oh, right…intelligence..tomorrow…maybe later tonite;) xo baby, sweet dreams.
Love the story! Can’t wait to read more.
Bring on Paris…..love this story!
Thank you so much for this lovely story. I just love the pacing of your writing and the way Tina and Bette talk with one another. Even though you show Bette’s flaws and confusion; I certainly wish she had spoken to Jodi much earlier. Still there’s such love and understanding in your portrayal of Bette.
more,more,more of your wonderful story.
I am so loving this!!!!! B&T in Paris!!!! Thank you
Much better than flowers or candy! Thanks for the alluring Valentine’s treat. Anxious for part 2. Happy Valentine’s Day, sofa!
oh yeah, i liked the invisible string also. it shows up in english lit and in your writing in beautiful ways…as a concept, i think it shows how connected you are to the energy of the characters. which you know i love about your writing. i’m glad these two are taking their time, i like how you pace it. seriously, thats probably the best part for me. cool lady, more more;) when you get time of course!
yay bring on a Paris reunion…love it.
Hey there! “She dreamt strange dreams involving Jenny and Bette, the latter being the radical force who seemed the only one capable in her dream of shutting Jenny up, and as the train approached Lyon Tina awoke with a start, her brain filled with images of Bette as she came to Tina’s rescue once again, driving a wooden stake through Jenny’s bloodless heart.” LOL! Brilliant!
This post made me smile lots, and then just be in awe of your writing. Can’t wait for the next, thanks
Bette realizing that Jodi wasn’t the one she truly loved and that she was only herself with Tina is brilliant. It was sad that Jodi had to be the one to have the stones to break things off, but I am glad that Bette didn’t cave into saying something she didn’t mean. I hope that we get to see Bette and Tina’s reconciliation in Paris.
Awwwww! This is sooo sweet and sooo cute and you’re sooo gooood! Seriously! “The invisible string which drew them together seemed ever tauter, stronger, like a pull which began to feel as if it were attached to that centre of her being again and not just to her heart, a sensation which made her sigh with pain, wanting nothing more than to abandon her trip and whisk Tina off somewhere, rediscover the romantic gestures in her heart which only came out to play when the two of them were at their best, falling head over heels in love with each other again.” => Great, poetic passage! Brava, Sofa! “I don’t think I ever really stopped loving you …” Bette answered quietly, her words like a song inside Tina’s addled mind.” => I think every die-hard TiBetter is dying to hear Bette to whisper this line to Tina in the show. After all this couple has been through, this is like every TiBetter’s secret mantra: they’ve never stopped and will never ever cease loving each other. “Bette nodded to herself, the thought of just seeing her rushing through her like an incredible force of energy, tingling her fingers down her spine to her toes, as if Tina were kissing her right there and then, warming her body through and through.” => My toes and fingers actually tingled while I was reading these lines. “You should come to France. You should come to New York. Come to Paris?” => YES! That’s what I’d call a perfect compromise. Thanks for this gem, Sofa! Can’t wait to read about their Paris tryst. PPS and Happy Hearts’ Day, btw! ;->
Sofa, I believe this has been my best Valentine’s gift today. What a beautiful story and Paris…the perfect place to rekindle their relationship.
I loooooove this story…. (Totally indpendent of the fact that you’re heading toward a reconciliation in the city of love, my favorite city, my town… PARIS! … Nothing to do wih it! ;) Anyway, this tale is amazing and can’t wait to read the next post! Thanks! (By the way, the taxi driver’s reaction about the suitcase was quite right! But they tend to get a tiny bit better…)
THAT WAS GREAT!
awwweeee I get so sappy over stories like this, yes on one hand Bette was basically cheating on Jodi but to me I don’t see it that way I mean it’s Tina for crying out loud. I hope Jodi is out the picture and im so ready to see how tibette is about to shut down Cannes, yah Bette is on her way