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Jack, A Short Story (Pt. 2.1)
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This blonde woman sitting in front of me is so beautiful and downright captivating. I can’t just walk away from her now, she would be haunting me forever. I would always wonder what would have happened if I had sat down next to her and started talking to her. I decide to trust Jacks judgement: Tina needs someone to talk to, someone to comfort her.
“I hope you don’t mind?” I ask, motioning to the bench.
“Oh, no, not at all.” Her small smile makes my stomach flutter, something that hasn’t happened since Jodi – and it took Jodi more than a smile the first time I met her. It was her view on art, so thorough, so deep and interesting that rocked my world.
I sit down and suddenly feel stupid. What am I going to say? She’s a total stranger to me, all I know is her name. I don’t know where she came from, what her story is, what she wants and expects in life… I don’t even know how old she is. I think she must be 23 or something – which is 7 years younger than I am.
“So, for how long have you been sitting here?”
What an interesting question! Way to go, Bette Porter. This is really the way to charm someone’s pants off.
“I don’t know, actually.” She even checks her watch. “It must be about three hours, I don’t remember exactly.”
“I hope I don’t come across as intrusive and as it’s rather personal I fully understand if you don’t wish to answer any of my questions, but… I can’t help but wonder what has happened? You look really sad.”
“Oh, it’s not very interesting. I… I don’t want to bore you with any of my silly worries,” Tina says, her voice trembling. She’s about to burst out in tears again. What monster made this beautiful woman cry?
“If you want to talk about it over a free cup of coffee, I don’t live very far away from here.”
“I don’t know, I’m sorry but I barely know you and I would feel uncomfortable if I’d just come barging into your home.”
“I won’t be barging if I invite you.”
“I don’t know.”
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Jack is a smart dog. And certainly has good taste. Hey Genner, good to see this short one again! Hope everything ok.
Jack is a good little fellow for standing by Tina in her distress. He is friendly and has good taste in women as well. He has brought his mistress the love of her life. Thanks for posting.
Jack is a good little fellow for standing by Tina in her distress. He is friendly and has good taste in women as well. He has brought his mistress the love of her life. Thanks for posting.
Hi, dear sweet Gen! *waving* This was a bittersweet chapter. It was sweet of Bette to invite Tina to her place, as to give her some comfort, even though she is a complete stranger. Jack was very intuitive and brought Tina something to share with her, so she could forget momentarily the pain she had. That last scene, when Bette holds Tina in her arms was just perfect. Bittersweet, indeed. Post whenever you can, dearest friend. Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the loving JC, Eunichick, ZLFAN, T_Daze, Melrose231 and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Hey Genner, Just love how the fates conspire to bring Bette and Tina together. Jack is such a sweetie as Bette has become a babbling idiot in Tina’s presence. I do hope that these gals will go with the flow. More please of this fun and entertaining tale. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
thanks for the update! Love how this story evolves. Pps! X
This is just too sweet. Love Jack. Thank you have missed this story :)