“***** walking takes it out of you,” Alice complained to herself as she finally arrived at her apartment door. She was weighed down with groceries, mostly organic ones for Dana, after realising that Dana had been living, without complaint, on junk food for the past few days.
“Alice,” Ella’s voice echoed through the hallway as she swung the door open to find Alice struggling to balance groceries and find her keys at the same time. “I thought I heard a ruckus outside.”
“Thanks Ella,” Alice said coldly as she passed the blonde, who at no point attempted to carry any of the groceries she was struggling to hold.
“You just missed Dana by like five minutes,” Ella said as she closed the front door and walked over to the lounge. At the mention of Dana’s name Alice dropped the groceries and ran into the living room, falling in front of Ella in a heap.
“What? And you, you were here?” Alice suddenly realised how this would have looked to Dana. “WH-What did she say?”
Ella didn’t let her eyes leave the television as she answered Alice.
“She said something about changing her flight,” Ella replied casually. “And she took all her stuff. She also said something about not acting soon enough or, actually you know what I can’t really remember.”
“You can’t remember?” Alice was almost dying on the spot. To think Dana had come back here to find… Ella. “You did tell her we weren’t together right? And that you were just staying here tonight because your new ***** girlfriend kicked you out…” Alice waited impatiently for a response, tears forming in her eyes. “Please tell me you told her. Please.”
Ella finally broke her gaze with the television to look at Alice, who in the space of a minute had become a visual wreck.
“I told her the truth,” she stated simply. “I know you were just going through a ‘hard to get’ phase, I mean all relationships have their problems, I just assumed can work ours out…”
“No!” Alice interrupted Ella, restraining herself from strangling the annoying blonde. “We do not have anything to work out Ella; I made that clear to you this afternoon! You ran off with some bimbo *****, leaving me high and dry a month ago and I…” Alice stopped wondering whether or not to continue. “***** it… I’m in love with Dana.”
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that was awesome. the whole story was great. thank you for posting so soon. it was so emotional. i can’t wait for your next post, from an old or new story.
That was wonderful end to this wonderful fic.*raises hand* For your consideration, maybe another chapter of how they contunue their night in London? I’m a sucker for romantic moments :).
BRAVO :) I agree with layla, please consider another chapter or two…this is such a sweet story. thanks for the post.
This was a great ending, and I would also have to agree wit layla and artichoke on another chapter, but other than that keep up the awsome work, and thanks for the post!
Woohoo!! Go Dana and Alice. I just luv Danish so much. And you write it so well. :) Another chapter would definately do no harm…. ;)
YES!!! that was a very classy way of ending the story. that was beautiful. thank you and please don’t disappear pop in from time to time. PEACE.
My little danish heart is quite happy. :-)
That was great! I’m glad Dana admitted she loved Alice, and I loved the ending. :)
Finally it happened. Well done! I hope you post soon!
Yeah, these two need a night in London..*winks*That was good stuff…*heehee* Enjoy studying…
that was great I loved it I just wish there was a bit more in it but hey that was just an idea please post again soon