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    insatiable part 5

    Insatiable part 5

    Alice’s car came screeching around corners speeding thru red lights
    she grabbed her phone slamming her fingers hard onto the buttons dialing shanes number
    Alice: ok shane answer the fuking phone
    Shane: hey whats up i thought we were meeting at yours where are you
    Alice: im headed to where they were ok ive lost them but ill find em
    Shane: ok so where the ***** are you
    Alice: i dont know there’s no signs or anything its deserted
    Shane: oh ***** ok i know where their headed its a air craft hanger or something
    Alice: ok hurry shane tonya’s seriously capable of some *****
    Shane: ok go ill be there

    The streets a blaze of car tyres screeching as Tonya’s car came to a blistering holt outside a
    deserted air craft hanger
    Tonya: get out and dont even think of running ok i wont think twice about shooting
    Dana: Tonya this is crazy why are you doing this
    Tonya: SHUT UP!!!  wat you thought i was gunna leave me for that ***** and let you be
    all happy ha pathetic
    They both got out of the car and headed towards the entrance of the hanger. Dana stumbling
    along a nervous wreck a gun being pointed hard into her back
    as they entered the dark hanger Tonya grabbed ahold of dana throwing her down hard to the
    floor
    Tonya: strip NOW !!!
    Dana: Tonya what are you doing stop please
    Tonya : SHUT UP AND DO IT
    Dana began to strip, tears hitting the floor hard her breathing in a fit of hyperventilation her clothes
    dropping to the floor feeling sick in her stomach at what tonya was doing to her
    Tonya : now touch yourself
    Dana: NO!!!! im not doing it your sick
    Tonya appraoched Dana sliding her hand down dana’s body, Dana cringing at her touch backing off
    slowly
    Tonya : nuh uh where do you think your going
    Dana: Tonya what are you doing stop please
    Tonya not listening to dana placed her lips hard on hers so rough her kisses would leave bruises
    her hand headed towards dana’s groin area spreading her legs
    Dana : STOP !!! PLEASE
    tonya pointing the gun at dana reminding her she has the power while her fingers enter dana hard
    dana’s face a pure picture of pain and discomfort
    Dana : stop please
    her pleas mumbled with the sound of painful cries
    Tonya : u like that dont ya huh u want more did i never satisfy you enough before
    her fingers inside dana feeling as if they were razor blades
    dana at this point couldnt even reply the pain was too much for her to even speak
    luckily at this point alice’s car came screeching in busting the door to the hanger down
    Alice : GET THE ***** OFF HER
    Tonya : MAKE ME *****
    still the gun in tonya’s possesion pointing at dana’s head but alice didnt care she began to aproach them
    Tonya : hmmm maybe u want me to pull the trigger but if u dont i suggest you shut the ***** up
    Dana still laying their in a pool of tears and blood
    Alice: look at her what the ***** is wrong with you your seriously twisted
    Tonya : wow name calling seriously pisses me off
    she then kicked dana hard in the ribs
    Tonya: now see thats what you get so i suggest you be a little more nice ok hunny
    Alice: do you even know what that word ***** means
    alice began to move closer slow steps her heart pounding not knowing just what else
    tonya could possibly be capable of
    Tonya: back off dont even think of taking one more ***** step
    Alice : oh enough all ready go ahead shoot me your boring me now
    Tonya: haha pathetic little ***** dont try to be all big and save the day ok i want the attention for once
    all day long i sat thier talking to her making love to her and all she wanted was you and you want me to be fine
    well ***** YOU
    Alice : me pathetic ha your the one who kills cats cos your jealous i mean what the ***** is wrong with you
    Tonya : dont call me pathetic
    at this point so angry she clenches her fist and the trigger is pulled
    silence is at this point the only presence in the room noone can speak until they realsie just what has
    happend
    Alice: DANAAAAA NOOOOOO
    Tonya began backing off in amazment to what she had just done
    Alice : you ***** *****
    dana layed thier a bullet wound thru her chest blood flooding the floor as alice lay next to her holding
    her close her cries filling the hanger her mind hitting a wall of destruction not noticing anything
    happening around her and that tonya had made an escape
    Alice: HELPPPPPPPP SOMEONE PLEASE
    tyres screeching near by as she saw car lights in the distance get closer and closer then come to a holt as a
    body flew out the car and she noticed the driver
    Shane: of ***** man ***** dana
    Alice just sat thier not being able to speak her whole world had just crashed in to a pit of
    pain and emptiness
    Shane: hey i need an ambulance now ok my friends been shot its erm the old air craft hanger ok
    Shane: alice where’s tonya which way did she go
    Alice : i dont know ( her words a mumble shane could barely understand them)
    ambulance sirens followed by police sirens filled the air
    as the ambulance arrived at this point dana’s body so cold the amount  of blood unbelievable
    Paramedic: ok back up give us room please
    they felt dana’s pulse
    Paramedic: ok she’s alive her pulse is weak we need to move now
    they carted her off into the ambulance speeding off towards the hospital sirens blaring out loud
    alice holding onto dana as they made their way shane following behind praying that dana lives
    TBC

    Comments

    1. This is a great story. I’m glad that someone finally agrees the Tonya is way to crazy to just walk away from Dana without some type of drama!!!! Please continue

    2. OMG Rache what ya done – Dana!!!!!!! Ok there has gotta be some heavy retribution from the gang for this before the police get her. The wound could bleed loads but she may recover with Alice’s care to play again. More please

    3. rache ya can’t shoot Fecking Dana, hows she gonna play tennis now?? You’ve ruined the woman’s career. Shame on ya Rach.Lmao. Great Chapter Sweetie. xx.

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