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insatiable part 5
Insatiable part 5
Alice’s car came screeching around corners speeding thru red lights
she grabbed her phone slamming her fingers hard onto the buttons dialing shanes number
Alice: ok shane answer the fuking phone
Shane: hey whats up i thought we were meeting at yours where are you
Alice: im headed to where they were ok ive lost them but ill find em
Shane: ok so where the ***** are you
Alice: i dont know there’s no signs or anything its deserted
Shane: oh ***** ok i know where their headed its a air craft hanger or something
Alice: ok hurry shane tonya’s seriously capable of some *****
Shane: ok go ill be there
The streets a blaze of car tyres screeching as Tonya’s car came to a blistering holt outside a
deserted air craft hanger
Tonya: get out and dont even think of running ok i wont think twice about shooting
Dana: Tonya this is crazy why are you doing this
Tonya: SHUT UP!!! wat you thought i was gunna leave me for that ***** and let you be
all happy ha pathetic
They both got out of the car and headed towards the entrance of the hanger. Dana stumbling
along a nervous wreck a gun being pointed hard into her back
as they entered the dark hanger Tonya grabbed ahold of dana throwing her down hard to the
floor
Tonya: strip NOW !!!
Dana: Tonya what are you doing stop please
Tonya : SHUT UP AND DO IT
Dana began to strip, tears hitting the floor hard her breathing in a fit of hyperventilation her clothes
dropping to the floor feeling sick in her stomach at what tonya was doing to her
Tonya : now touch yourself
Dana: NO!!!! im not doing it your sick
Tonya appraoched Dana sliding her hand down dana’s body, Dana cringing at her touch backing off
slowly
Tonya : nuh uh where do you think your going
Dana: Tonya what are you doing stop please
Tonya not listening to dana placed her lips hard on hers so rough her kisses would leave bruises
her hand headed towards dana’s groin area spreading her legs
Dana : STOP !!! PLEASE
tonya pointing the gun at dana reminding her she has the power while her fingers enter dana hard
dana’s face a pure picture of pain and discomfort
Dana : stop please
her pleas mumbled with the sound of painful cries
Tonya : u like that dont ya huh u want more did i never satisfy you enough before
her fingers inside dana feeling as if they were razor blades
dana at this point couldnt even reply the pain was too much for her to even speak
luckily at this point alice’s car came screeching in busting the door to the hanger down
Alice : GET THE ***** OFF HER
Tonya : MAKE ME *****
still the gun in tonya’s possesion pointing at dana’s head but alice didnt care she began to aproach them
Tonya : hmmm maybe u want me to pull the trigger but if u dont i suggest you shut the ***** up
Dana still laying their in a pool of tears and blood
Alice: look at her what the ***** is wrong with you your seriously twisted
Tonya : wow name calling seriously pisses me off
she then kicked dana hard in the ribs
Tonya: now see thats what you get so i suggest you be a little more nice ok hunny
Alice: do you even know what that word ***** means
alice began to move closer slow steps her heart pounding not knowing just what else
tonya could possibly be capable of
Tonya: back off dont even think of taking one more ***** step
Alice : oh enough all ready go ahead shoot me your boring me now
Tonya: haha pathetic little ***** dont try to be all big and save the day ok i want the attention for once
all day long i sat thier talking to her making love to her and all she wanted was you and you want me to be fine
well ***** YOU
Alice : me pathetic ha your the one who kills cats cos your jealous i mean what the ***** is wrong with you
Tonya : dont call me pathetic
at this point so angry she clenches her fist and the trigger is pulled
silence is at this point the only presence in the room noone can speak until they realsie just what has
happend
Alice: DANAAAAA NOOOOOO
Tonya began backing off in amazment to what she had just done
Alice : you ***** *****
dana layed thier a bullet wound thru her chest blood flooding the floor as alice lay next to her holding
her close her cries filling the hanger her mind hitting a wall of destruction not noticing anything
happening around her and that tonya had made an escape
Alice: HELPPPPPPPP SOMEONE PLEASE
tyres screeching near by as she saw car lights in the distance get closer and closer then come to a holt as a
body flew out the car and she noticed the driver
Shane: of ***** man ***** dana
Alice just sat thier not being able to speak her whole world had just crashed in to a pit of
pain and emptiness
Shane: hey i need an ambulance now ok my friends been shot its erm the old air craft hanger ok
Shane: alice where’s tonya which way did she go
Alice : i dont know ( her words a mumble shane could barely understand them)
ambulance sirens followed by police sirens filled the air
as the ambulance arrived at this point dana’s body so cold the amount of blood unbelievable
Paramedic: ok back up give us room please
they felt dana’s pulse
Paramedic: ok she’s alive her pulse is weak we need to move now
they carted her off into the ambulance speeding off towards the hospital sirens blaring out loud
alice holding onto dana as they made their way shane following behind praying that dana lives
TBC
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great story! post soon! =)
This is a great story. I’m glad that someone finally agrees the Tonya is way to crazy to just walk away from Dana without some type of drama!!!! Please continue
OMG Rache what ya done – Dana!!!!!!! Ok there has gotta be some heavy retribution from the gang for this before the police get her. The wound could bleed loads but she may recover with Alice’s care to play again. More please
rache ya can’t shoot Fecking Dana, hows she gonna play tennis now?? You’ve ruined the woman’s career. Shame on ya Rach.Lmao. Great Chapter Sweetie. xx.
Great story rach. I like the crazy Tonya. I hope Shane finds her first. post soon.