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In The Beginning – Form As A Work of Art Chapter 16
They pull into the hotel parking lot and park. Both are a little nervous but both are very excited as well. Tina unbuckles Bette’s seatbelt and runs her hand over Bette’s hand. She leans in and whispers in Bette’s ear “I already have the room key. Grab a couple of bags and head for the elevator.”
“Yes, Ma’am.”
They both quickly get out of the car, open the back door and each grab two bags. With their hands full they head into the lobby of the hotel and head straight for the elevator. There aren’t very many people in the lobby which they are a little grateful for but for different reasons. Bette not wanting Tina to change her mind if she became uncomfortable. And Tina not wanting anyone in the elevator with them. Tina pushes the button for the elevator and they stand staring at one another with bags in hand, both breathing a little bit deeply. The doors open three people step off. Tina and Bette enter.
‘Please nobody get on.’ Tina hopes in her head.
“Tina what floor?” Bette asks so the she could press the right button as the doors begin to close.
“Tenth floor, sorry” Tina answers ‘I hope that this thing is slow.’
As soon as the door closes Tina puts her bags down and press Bette up against the wall of the elevator. She quickly takes the bags from Bette’s hands and puts them down. Bette grabs Tina into her arms and buries her face in Tina’s neck and begins to kiss and lick her neck. As she does Tina continues to press her body against Bette’s and her hand touch whatever wherever they could reach. Bette’s kisses reach Tina’s lips and Tina eagerly receives the warm wetness of Bette’s tongue. They moan into one another mouths as they enjoy one another. The doors to the elevator open snapping them out of the lip locked position. They see that they have arrived to they destination, the tenth floor.
They quickly composed themselves and grab their bags. There is no one in the hallway as they exit the elevator. They walk very close to one another, knowing that if their hands weren’t full they would already be all over one another. Their hearts where both beating incredible fast. Both were still nervous. Bette’s didn’t want to scare Tina and she wanted so much for Tina’s first time with a woman to be special. She didn’t want her to regret it later. And Tina knew what she felt for Bette but she didn’t know if she could satisfy Bette and she wanted to so much. Both were feeling a little insecure but so hot on fire for one another at the same time.
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(31 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
WOW!!! That was very HOT!!!! Very loving and beautiful. Thank you PPS
That was great! Just the right touch of sensuality and romance. PPS
Wow! Super hot. Great update. Thank you :)
Ohh damn that was freaking hot and beautiful, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Wow, that was HOT and well worth waiting for. Tina finally had the chance to find out what she has been missing. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Wow, what first time together. They were rocking and rolling.
That was so so hot and worth the build up.
Journey – Talk about HOT – Oh my!! I haven’t been reading the story but I saw your name and read the chapter. I’ll be heading to chapter 1 now. Thanks for the hot ride!
Journey, I don’t think you have to worry about how to write an NC-17 anymore!