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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=64329
    Author Notes:

    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

    Chapter 13

     

    Alice was crudely awoken by the sound of the cordless telephone blaring impatiently atop her night stand. Slowly, and with great effort, she withdrew her right arm from beneath the covers and reached out, fumbling erratically for the electronic menace that was responsible for waking her up. With one quick grab she somehow managed to pick up the phone and press the talk button simultaneously while bringing it to her ear.

     

    "Yeah?" she groaned into the receiver.

     

    "Well good morning to you too, sleepy head."

     

    Alice’s eyes shot wide open once she established who the voice on the other end belonged to, and for a second there she thought she may have still been dreaming.

     

    "Dana?" she asked in disbelief.

     

    "I know it’s been awhile since we spoke on the phone Al, but you can’t expect me to believe you’ve already forgotten the sound of my voice."

     

    Alice pinched the bridge of her nose and closed her eyes in an attempt to get her bearings back. She knew that she had a lot to drink last night, but she couldn’t remember how she left things off with Dana. According to the athlete’s rather chipper voice, it seemed as if the past seven months of detachment never happened. All Alice could recall from the conversations they had the night before was that things had gone well, but not nearly as well as Dana’s light, breezy tone was suggesting.  She seemed way too cheerful right now, almost as if all the tension and trepidation the athlete had exhibited towards her had just faded away. Alice assumed she had to still be asleep…right?

     

    "Al?"

     

    "Huh?" She was shaken from her trance once again.

     

    "You still with me?"

     

    "Uh, yeah. I’m just a little…"

     

    "Hung over," the athlete chided. It was more of a question meant to mock her than anything else, and she giggled into the phone to signify her intent.

     

    All Alice could do was try to fathom the rapid change in Dana’s attitude. But with a pounding head and her inability to recall large blocks of time from the night before, she figured she should just indulge the athlete now and put the pieces together later.

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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