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    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT35

    Story written on June 13, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=61310
    Author Notes:

    Cat & Mouse Crescendo…

    Their mutual desires were rising with each stroke, nurturing one another’s swollen centers, the aching within continuing to build, the heat invading every last pore, the dueling tongues gaining momentum as their movements began to take over.

    Their fingers began to establish their very own steady rhythm through the wets folds, finding the familiar spot in which they knew would tip their lover over the edge.

    Tina’s fingers concentrated on the axis of Bette’s being, her eyes meeting the deepest, darkest pools of love she had ever seen, as the moment hit the pinnacle of the crescendo between the two souls, their eyes never wavered, Bette’s body shuddered, her own hand clenching Tina’s wrist to lengthen the summit they reached.

    Bette’s mind was swirling, her eyes unfocused, her head was moving from side to side, the noises from her own mouth not reaching her ears, the muffled sound around her seemingly deafening. Her mouth felt dry, she couldn’t swallow, her tongue unable to move, she felt pain in her chest, she felt pain in her groin, such an intense aching pain, the ringing in her ears becoming louder and louder, the grey stars around her eyes, clouding the already blurry view of the ceiling above, her body didn’t feel her own, she had no control, she was overcome with such complete and utter intense desire and passion, she couldn’t speak, she couldn’t breath, she couldn’t see, blackness surrounding her as the orgasm overtook her body, her own fingers continued mirroring the movements within Tina’s centre.

    "Ahhhhh…..TTTTTTTTT!"

    Tina’s own fireworks instantaneously erupted, the whoosh overtook her body, Bette’s arm encircled her waist as the mighty building pressure to explode and release overtook Tina’s body. Bette’s fingers felt the explosion as she stroked back and forth, the shuddering as the detonation reverberated throughout her being. Tina’s head shot backwards as her body continued with the aftershocks of the super nova that had struck her being, her hands holding onto Bette’s shoulders for stability, her mouth opening with silent groans, her breathing held as the intensity overtook her whole spirit, the finale of the orchestra beating in the air around them as the drums and cymbals reached the ultimate crescendo.

    Bette held tightly as the jerking body in her arms began to calm, the breaths against her neck coming in short, sharp gasps, she brought both of her arms around Tina, bringing her in close, the feelings and sensations within them still reverberating throughout their bodies, they remained weak, they remained silent.

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    2. WOW! What a way to finish! if only we could all have a love like theirs! …oh and a sex life like theirs would be kinda good too! Thanks for the story! Looking forward to your next one!

    3. snQQpy, you can’t just keep going around put 1st…..brb everywhere and not saying anything, or does the cat have your tongue. Anyway I digress. OMG, why I was drinking hot coffee reading this is beyond me, cos now I swear between that and the story, I’m so hot I can’t stand it. You cannot see it, but I’m bowing. Excellent job.

    7. i would say sexual love life like b and t is rare and i would be fuckin luckky to have it but your words did somuch for me you have no idea i was sittin on my couch drooling with my jaw hittin the floor imaginin those vivid sceans your words conjured in my imagination …..definatly headin for a cold chillin shower..rightnow i need a beer a really cold beer to bring me back to reality

    9. incredible! thet shared a unique love and they need to continue work on it in order to be each day strong! this was beatiful! and a new stori soon? you can bet i will waiting to read!

    10. And if I recall the rose petals are waiting for them, and we all know what that means. Well, Jo, a most enjoyable ride. Get a little rest and we’ll be waiting for you when you have the new stuff.

    12. Definitely a crescendo!!!! I loved this story. Can’t wait for updates every once in a while and I can’ wait for the new story. I love your writing.

    13. Absolutely amazing! If only the show had played out like your story was written we would have all been such happy campers. Whatever you choose to post next, I’m sure will be a fantastic read. Thanks again for your dedication to this story.

    14. You leave me breathless. The attention to detail, your phrasing, even your vocab makes this story a brilliant experience. I am a devoted TiBetter and I believe that they share this love. Looking forward to whatever you write. Maestra, brava.

    15. OH GOD! The sweat is dripping off me and sliding down my body. I guess that means that I need to cool down in a very cold shower. I am going straight to ebay and bid on those Portard prono tapes. Now what do I type in to get to those tapes? Do I type in Jennifer Beals or Laurel Holloman or do I type in Bette and Tina prono tapes? I hope that you will continue this story. I really have learned to enjoy those cold wet showers.

    17. Most Excellent Jo!!!! I will miss this story but since you are writing another one, I’ll be happy! It has been an aboslute joy and pleasurable expereince to read your stories. You have such a way with words that leaves me breathless and HOT!(lol)I know your next story will be an absolute delight and I can’t wait! Thanks again for sharing your talent! 5 Billion stars!!!

    20. thank you for your time and this beautiful story… yes this is the way we see bette and tina… and i hope and pray IC also sees it… and what a way to end it… perfect… again thank you…waiting for your return

    23. This was beautiful. A great ending (for the moment) to a really great story. And I’m with funnyone, there are rose petals in that bedroom… Thanks for this story, and I look forward to the next one.

    25. Oh good lord! That was definitely sexcellent Jobadge. It’s a really good thing that I turned my fan on before reading this story. If I hadn’t I’m pretty sure I would have combusted from the sex on the table…with my computer frying shortly after. Let me just thank you for taking the time out to write this amazing story. Although you write incredibly hot…very hot…love scenes, make no mistake that your writing in general is simply phenomenal and I have enjoyed this story through TiBette’s good times and bad times. With that said, I can’t wait to read “Do You Remember When…” and I do hope that you’ll post chapter 1 sooner rather than later.

    26. Wow, I get all caught up, and now you’re letting this one sit for awhile. lol Considering I studied music in college I should know Ravel’s “Bolero,” but I’m drawing a blank. I can’t sing your praises enough on chapters like these, or the way you write in general. If I had a girlfriend, and she was here all the time, I’d have to take her after every chapter like this. Looking forward to your new story. =)

    27. Hey Jo….OMG – I just had to say that, but I guess you did expect that right???? Thank you for sharing this wonderful, hot, romantic, amazing, lustful, tender, sad, mushy, sexy and very passionate story with us. It has been an absolute delight and privilege to read your work. You’re so talented, I’ve told you many times, so you know that already, but still you’re paranoid :o)) But the best is, that we’ve become mates through this beautiful B&T journey and I’m thankful for that and for you to appreciate my opinion about your writing. About the story, the things I love the most is the timeline, the very tender and emotional dialogues and that all this takes place before the miscarriage, Candy-ass and the dreadful S2 & S3. Things that never should’ve happened in my TiBette world!!!! About the next story, you know I’m really looking forward to it and I’ve a list of “first” you can write about, but I’m sure you’ve it covered. Take care mate and hope to hear from you soon….T xx

    28. So I finally worked out what I like about this story so much, sorry I’m a but slow. It’s that it’s so happy and loving, and you describe it so well. It’s been a complete pleasure to read it. Thanks Jo.

    29. Jobadge this was a wonderful story all the way through. And though I hate to see it end, all good things must come to an end and so must the story. You have done a marvelous job with the story and I can hardly wait for the next one you write. It was wonderful, always loving and exciting. Thank you for sharing with us.

    30. Wow! Just amazing. I don’t think it is possible for your writing to disappoint and this just blew my socks off! My heart is pumping so hard I feel like I’ve just run a marathon! What an outstanding crescendo to a story like no other. I have loved every chapter and I can’t wait to read whatever you post next. Thank you so much for sharing this one with us.

    31. From: coop Comments: snQQpy, you can’t just keep going around put 1st…..brb everywhere and not saying anything, or does the cat have your tongue……………Nope, cat didn’t have my tongue. I could have sworn I came back and left my comment; my apologies. Jo, this was awesome. I’ve always said that I think their sex life was one of the bests things they had going for them. Thanks for making it so HOT!!

    34. Wow…I’ve been reading this series over the past week, and I am truly in awe! You truly have captured the spirit of each character, but particularly Bette and Tina, with all their human foibles that are perfected by their endless love for one another! The hype about your writing was all true, and I am so glad that you have shared this gift with all of us! I certainly look forward to the next series after I recover from this one! The passion, the dialogue, the characterizations (Alice in particular, but really each character) were true to form from what we know about them. Thank you so much! After S3, we Tibetters really needed this!

    36. OMG…Well Jo,you did this one with so much style…but oh Sweet Jesus…what a Hot one to go out with!…From begining to this chpt,this story has been exceptional,reading this chpt was like closing the pages of a favorite book,..the only thing i can say is that like a favorite book you always have the pleasure of going back and reading it all over again.Jo,its been a complete privilage reading your story,..but an even bigger privilage to have become friends with you through it…..So while its sad to see it finishing up ..for now!?..cant really wait for whats to come…This story has been one of the best to grace our screens,its been Heartbreaking,Romantic,Funny,Mushy and very very passionate,but most of all beauitfully written.Thanks for sharing the stort,your talent….and for all the smiles you`ve put on my face..xx

    39. as you know Jo i refused to read this before I went to work. so i dragged my girlfriend home so we could read it together. oh boy — yoou told me it was good but you might have warned me just how damn good. Your writing leaves me speechless at its brilliance and tenderness and okay — lets say it — the ability to reach the parts that other NC17 chapters do not reach. you are a totally amazing writer and person — thank you for finding the time to share your remarkable writing skills with us. Are we renaming the Best Sex Cold Shower award – the Jobadge ??? wow — now — eh — we need to go and take care of something xx !!!!

    42. Lordy, lordy, Missie Jo, that there wer’ sizzingly. You do know how to go out in style. Thank you so much for 35 chapters full of love, lust, desire, tenderness and fulfillment. It has been one hell of a ride!!! I am just so glad to have hitched on to this awesome adventure. You captured the class and realism of Bette and Tina at the end of Season 1. There are so many good things about this tale. It meant a safe haven to retreat to and bask in the joy of Bette and Tina together. You have created a masterpiece with this story and raise the bar for every other author. Thank you so, so much. Can’t wait to read your next one. Your Loyal Fan.

    43. Throughout this story u’ve captured the true essence of B&T. Loved it, your writing is superb and to get the true feel for the chapter cranked up Bolero on the stereo. Your NC-17’s are so hot but so sensual, look forward to future posts. Thx.

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