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I Fall Behind pt.22
Previously:
“Wait… Let me.” Bette’s hand moved to cover Tina’s
hand on the sheet. Tina trained her eyes on Bette’s face, waiting.
Bette stared down at her own hand that was slowly drawing the sheet
lower.
Tina couldn’t help the loud moan that eased from her
throat when Bette’s expression transformed from simmering heat to acute
lust. She barely felt the sheet slide down to her waist.
“Well what do you know,” Bette rumbled rakishly, “It’s two for the price of one…”
“Huh? Tina, no it’s Bette.” Tina heard Bette’s disembodied voice coming from the seat near her window.
“What are you doing baby?” Tina rubbed her eyes, stretched and sat up.
“Oh nothing,” Bette chuckled self-consciously and
Tina saw a shadow as Bette waved an arm. “I just have this habit… I
look out of windows a lot.”
Tina smiled in the dark and held up her hand to the
moonlight. Bette stood up, slowly walked to the bed, and touched it.
“Hi there,” Tina spoke in a rusty voice.
“Hi… there,” Bette echoed.
“Come back to bed?”
“‘K.”
As Bette slid under the sheet beside her, Tina
turned and looked at her profile in the dark. She saw the mass of curls
that billowed over her pillow. She lovingly traced the outline of
Bette’s forehead, nose, lips and chin with her eyes.
“Tina?”
“Yes Bette?”
“It’s been a long time. I’m sorry…”
Tina scooted forward to put her cheek against
Bette’s arm. One palm ran down Bette’s smooth skin to entwine with her
hand. Bette glanced down and smiled bitterly.
“I don’t know why you’re apologizing baby.” Tina
looked up at Bette’s face, seeing the strange scowl. “Wasn’t it good?”
Bette quickly looked down at Tina and shook her head
adamantly. “Oh no, it was wonderful! You’re wonderful! It’s me. I’m
sorry if I… I’m not the world’s greatest lover,” Bette mumbled,
ashamed.
Tina stared at Bette, dumbfounded. In the moonlight,
Bette looked even more mysterious. Her dark eyes seemed even darker and
the shadows on her body seemed deeper. Tina spared a glance down at
Bette’s body, partly hidden under the sheet. Bette had hastily donned a
thick robe she’d found in Tina’s bathroom. Under the robe, Tina knew
that Bette was all rounds and shadows. Tina had spent hours learning
all of Bette’s shapes and motions, playing like a child on her first
day at the beach. Tina had watched Bette’s body at its most
defenseless, cresting and rising like waves against her limbs. She had
broken when Bette had surged against her, a rock falling from a cliff
into the seething water below.
“You’re not.” Tina said as she lifted up to put her
fingers against Bette’s jaw. With a tiny nudge, she turned Bette’s face
until their lips met. “You’re Bette Porter and you,” Tina spoke moistly
into Bette’s mouth, “You just made me come so many times I think angels
want to take my place.”
Bette felt the dark thoughts being swept into the
deepest recesses of her mind, driven back by the light that was Tina.
She wanted to take her brain out of her head and offer it up to Tina,
to tell her, ‘please clean it up’. She had the rather morbid thought of
letting Tina wash her brain clean. Crazy, Bette.
“Baby, why would angels want to take your place?”
Bette broke off to tease Tina and to hug her close with both arms.
“Well, because this heaven is much better than
theirs, of course.” Tina grinned and nuzzled Bette’s cheek. She felt
Bette relax as whatever was bothering her faded. Good job, Tina, she
congratulated herself. Disaster averted, loving will now commence.
Tina nimbly rolled on top of Bette and stradled her stomach.
“Oh!” Bette exclaimed, surprised both by Tina’s nude
body suddenly astride her and by her own body’s extremely pleased
reaction. Her hips automatically bucked upward, knowing what felt good
even before Bette’s brain figured it out.
“Uhm… that’s nice… You have perfect muscle
memory love…” Tina purred as she pulled Bette’s hands up to her
waist. Bette’s hands seemed to know exactly what to do too. They
touched and caressed, soothed and teased, stroked and undid Tina, until
Bette could only gape in wonder.
And when Tina finally rolled off Bette, Bette stared
down at the puddle that gathered in her bellybutton, wondering if she
could even move.
Tina crawled over to lap it up and Bette moved.
Bette writhed and twisted. Finally, she wrenched herself into a
spectacular *****.
“Oh… wow…” Bette gasped between Tina’s kisses, “This… muscle memory thing?… ***** amazing!”
They cuddled their sweat-slick bodies together and
started laughing. Bette imagined that just as their bodies had just
reached ecstasy, so now were their souls climbing towards it.
TBC
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I may have said it before, but I have to say it again: Your Bette is wonderful and your Tina grand. Together they make so much sense. Thanks for this great story :-)
ally – still trying to cool off, babe. fergz – tink tink?? hurry the hell up and start reading and commenting. i dont have all day?? love ya babe.7 – no need to think you are pussyfooting around? you write beautifully. your bette is unique. she is not the sex mistress as in other stories. she is unsure of her skills. you write/wrote this beautifully. i felt the love. the connection. what more could i ask for, huh? more and soon please. thanks.
That last sentence was wonderful. Good for Bette! Good for Tina! I hope they can heal together! Thanks!
7- you just leave me wanting more. amazing. albeez..I will never catch up with all this foofing crap I have to do. 7- please give us more.
Good chapter. They are wonderful and love them. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I luv your chapters jus the way they are. You do a great job of presenting these interpretations of B&T to us. Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
good upadate 3 page next post please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7pm – this is really great stuff – i love how you write .
7pm – this is really great stuff – i love how you write .
lol pussyfooting around it, funny lady. Sex is freaking difficult to write some writers tend to have difficulty such scenes cause it requires that you tap into something very primal within you. Some people do it ok, some well and some rock the fucking boat. Just to name a few Cramit, Greentea, Skipton, Alleyemerson and the list goes on. If I have missed anyone my apologies. There’s an author on this board who wrote maybe eight to ten chapters all pretty much sexual in nature where she would switch between sex scenes happening in the moment to sex scenes that happened in the past between Bette & Tina and let me tell you pure fucking bliss. The impact that this had on the stories that were posted is phenomenal, simply genius. From what I can tell thus far you are really descriptive in an expressionist manner so try and just expand on the talents you have already and don’t force something that doesn’t come naturally to you. We’ll wait until that moment, we are all patient people.
*bows* thank you. If only I could actually write the NC-1 stuff instead of pussyfooting around it :) it’s ayt.
loving the story… cant wait to read more good job 7 keep it up . I like how u present Bette’s internal dialogue with her self . I love ur Bette and Tina *TiBette me likes !! woohoo :D 10x stars !! Thanx and keep going
Great story! Would’ve loved to read about the night Bette and Tina shared but oh well. And Bette has got to get over this sexual insecurity thing. Dude she is Bette Porter after all-every guy and chic in town would be lucky to have her in his/her bed. Post soon!
Hey 7… your doing a great job… and don’t worry when you feel the time is right you’ll go into more detail… sometimes its what you don’t say… says a lot… and your saying a great deal… so keep writing… please continue